Dard key geet gaa rahaa hai too!

by abdbundeli on June 16, 2008, 02:34:31 PM
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 Dard key geet gaa rahaa hai too!
 Bol, kis ko bulaa rahaa hai too?
 Har taraf, yeh udaasiyaan kyon hain:
 Kyaa kaheen door jaa rahaa hai too?

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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2008, 01:53:25 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 16, 2008, 02:34:31 PM
'Durd key geet gaa rahaa hai too!
 Bol, kisko bulaa rahaa hai too?
 Hur taraf, yeh udaasiyaan kyon hain:
 Kyaa kaheen door jaa rahaa hai too?'

                        - abd bundeli

Good lines...
Aisa laga aap ek do jagah typing error hai.
Durd likh diya hai Dard ke liye.
Aur Too likh diya tu ke liye..
Edit karlena jee.
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2009, 02:26:58 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on June 18, 2008, 01:53:25 AM
Good lines...
Aisa laga aap ek do jagah typing error hai.
Durd likh diya hai Dard ke liye.
Aur Too likh diya tu ke liye..
Edit karlena jee.

Thanks Sonia01 ji! I've crrected the errors!
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2009, 08:33:09 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 16, 2008, 02:34:31 PM
Dard key geet gaa rahaa hai too!
 Bol, kis ko bulaa rahaa hai too?
 Har taraf, yeh udaasiyaan kyon hain:
 Kyaa kaheen door jaa rahaa hai too?

                        - abd bundeli



Bahut accha likha hai aapne Uncle ji. Sonia ki baathon ko dil pe na lena Uncle ji. Choti ladki hai aur wo shayad aapko jyada jaanti nahi. Mai uske taraf se mafi mangti hu. Sorry.
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2009, 08:37:21 AM »
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Chale aao ki saanson ka ye manjar bikharne laga hai,
Tumhe khone ka darr ab ruh ko dasne laga hai,
Agar hote khuda to naam tere har khushi likhte,
Tera har gham mujhe nasur sa chubhne laga hai
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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2009, 08:54:10 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOOOOB ABD JI
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2009, 12:14:52 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 17, 2009, 08:33:09 AM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Uncle ji. Sonia ki baathon ko dil pe na lena Uncle ji. Choti ladki hai aur wo shayad aapko jyada jaanti nahi. Mai uske taraf se mafi mangti hu. Sorry.
Thanks Roja! It's alright! Let her speak her heart out! It's now her time to grow, and she has all the right to grow! We are subjects of a free NATION! I do appreciate your feelings!
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2009, 12:16:17 PM »
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bahut achche abd bhaijaan
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2009, 12:48:06 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 17, 2009, 08:37:21 AM
Chale aao ki saanson ka ye manjar bikharne laga hai,
Tumhe khone ka darr ab ruh ko dasne laga hai,
Agar hote khuda to naam tere har khushi likhte,
Tera har gham mujhe nasur sa chubhne laga hai

Woh hi aayegaa,  lamhoun kaa hai muntazir!
Bas zaraa deyr kee baat hai, aayegaa!!

Na itnaa dard paalo tum, ki, wah naasoor ban jaaye;
Na hongey dard, aa gamkhwaar seeney sey lagaayegaa!!

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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2009, 12:50:07 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 16, 2008, 02:34:31 PM

 Dard key geet gaa rahaa hai too!
 Bol, kis ko bulaa rahaa hai too?
 Har taraf, yeh udaasiyaan kyon hain:
 Kyaa kaheen door jaa rahaa hai too?

                        - abd bundeli



KHUBSURAT......
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2009, 12:52:12 PM »
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Quote from: shab on June 17, 2009, 08:54:10 AM
BAHUT KHOOOOOB ABD JI
Quote from: -Saahil- on June 17, 2009, 12:16:17 PM
bahut achche abd bhaijaan
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Shabana/Saahil ji!

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«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2009, 12:53:32 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on June 17, 2009, 12:50:07 PM
KHUBSURAT......
Bahut-bahut shukriyah pandit ji!

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«Reply #12 on: June 17, 2009, 01:38:42 PM »
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Thanks Roja! It's alright! Let her speak her heart out! It's now her time to grow, and she has all the right to grow! We are subjects of a free NATION! I do appreciate your feelings!
                                    - abd bundeli

Kitna khoobsurati se aap sonia ki baat ko samjhaye. Kaash aap jaisa hi mai aur sab soche toh koyi kadwapan nahi rahega zindagi mein. I am really proud to have you with us.
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«Reply #13 on: June 17, 2009, 03:48:45 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 17, 2009, 01:38:42 PM
Kitna khoobsurati se aap sonia ki baat ko samjhaye. Kaash aap jaisa hi mai aur sab soche toh koyi kadwapan nahi rahega zindagi mein. I am really proud to have you with us.
Thanks Roja! But this speaks of your own kind and affectionate heart & mind! Your words have not only touched, but have also delighted me! Thanks a lot!
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