Duur jawon tak nazar pasaarey, main taktaa huun raah tumhaaree!

by abdbundeli on October 17, 2013, 05:05:18 PM
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Main aauungaa paas tumhaarey,
Saanjh-saweyrey, raat-andheyrey!

Andleeb kii sadaa bhareygee jab-jab purwaayi mein taaneyn;
Mujhey patah hai, tumko suujheyngey har lamhey naye bahaaney!
Band rakhogey har darwaazah: baad-e-shab tak aa na sakey ghar;
Leykin kaisey rok sakogey dil tak pahunchey huye taraaney?

Kat jaayengey lamahey din key raah deykhtey, khaatey-peetey;
Par, kab tak bahlaa paayengey korey ujiyaalon key pheyrey?
                              Main aauungaa paas tumhaarey,
                              Saanjh-saweyrey, raat-andheyrey!

Roj subah hotee hai, dopahree hotee hai, din dhhaltaa hai;
Kyaa hotaa rahtaa hai, tum bin, mujhko kahaan patah chaltaa hai?
Baadal aatey hain, jaatey hain, naam naheen kaheen phuhaar kaa;
Kyaa batlaauun kitnaa, tum bin mujhey akeylaapan khaltaa hai!

Duur jawon tak nazar pasaarey, main taktaa huun raah tumhaaree;
Raateyn to andhiyaaree hain hee, saath andheyrey hain din meyrey!
                               Main aauungaa paas tumhaarey,
                              Saanjh-saweyrey, raat-andheyrey!

                                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2013, 05:42:11 PM »
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Roj subah hotee hai, dopahree hotee hai, din dhhaltaa hai;
Kyaa hotaa rahtaa hai, tum bin, mujhko kahaan patah chaltaa hai?
Baadal aatey hain, jaatey hain, naam naheen kaheen phuhaar kaa;
Kyaa batlaauun kitnaa, tum bin mujhey akeylaapan khaltaa hai!

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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2013, 06:48:30 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2013, 07:43:58 PM »
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Quote from: parinde on October 17, 2013, 05:42:11 PM
Roj subah hotee hai, dopahree hotee hai, din dhhaltaa hai;
Kyaa hotaa rahtaa hai, tum bin, mujhko kahaan patah chaltaa hai?
Baadal aatey hain, jaatey hain, naam naheen kaheen phuhaar kaa;
Kyaa batlaauun kitnaa, tum bin mujhey akeylaapan khaltaa hai!

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Shukriyah, Parinde ji!
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2013, 07:44:43 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on October 17, 2013, 06:48:30 PM
bhut khub
Shukriyah, Rajan ji!
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2013, 10:06:38 PM »
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Bahut khooooooooooob....
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2013, 10:21:42 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on October 17, 2013, 10:06:38 PM
Bahut khooooooooooob....

Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2013, 09:16:48 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on October 18, 2013, 09:16:48 AM
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Shukriyah!
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2013, 02:16:45 PM »
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bhaut acha likha hai aapne..dhero daad..
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Quote from: vikassinha1984 on October 18, 2013, 02:16:45 PM
bhaut acha likha hai aapne..dhero daad..

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Vikas ji!
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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2013, 12:33:59 AM »
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Duur jawon tak nazar pasaarey, main taktaa huun raah tumhaaree;
Raateyn to andhiyaaree hain hee, saath andheyrey hain din meyrey!
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«Reply #12 on: October 19, 2013, 01:00:38 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 19, 2013, 12:33:59 AM
Duur jawon tak nazar pasaarey, main taktaa huun raah tumhaaree;
Raateyn to andhiyaaree hain hee, saath andheyrey hain din meyrey!
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suresh ji!
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