Eak naghma ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on April 15, 2010, 07:55:19 AM
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Tanhaiyun me gungune ka sabab , kaisa raha .. ap hi bataen .. ap sub ki aara ka muntazir ..


Ye Needen bhi dhati hain kaisa kahar !!
Tu khwabon me aati hai athon pahar !!
wo yaden wo baten wo manzar wo din !!
hai maazi ki kitni sonheri dagar !!

Tu khwabon me aati hai athon pahar !!

Mai bhulon to kaise wo hasna tera !!
mujh dekh kar fir simatna tera !!
wo nazren wo zulfen wo thandi hawa !!
khudaya - khudaya tha kaisa kahar !!

Tu khwabon me aati hai athon pahar !!

Wo ghar ke chabutre pe aana tera !!
jo mai na dikhon to tadapna tera !!
wo galiyan wo nukkad wo sham o sahar !!
wo manzar kahan hain mai dhondo kidhar !!

Tu khwabon me aati hai athon pahar !!

Na meri qata thi na to bewafa !!
muqaddar ki marzi thi jo bhi howa !!
wo wade wo kasme wo haton me hath !!
jo sunchon mai wo sub dil ata hai bhar !!

Tu khwabon me aati hai athon pahar !!


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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2010, 08:12:25 AM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achche Andaaz Mein Likha Hai, Yun Laga Guzare Lamhon Ko Dastak Di Ho Aapne,.

Mashallah Bohat Achche Yun Hi Likhte Rahein
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2010, 09:48:01 AM »
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Bahut khoob Qadeer ji.kamaal ke likha aapne.keep it up.great work. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2010, 09:55:44 AM »
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Bahot khoobsurat nazm likhi hai Qadeer sahab. Padhkar mazaa aa gaya. Maazi ka bade purkashish andaaz mein zikr kiya aapne. Marhaba.
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2010, 10:12:07 AM »
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good qdeer sahab Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2010, 11:39:11 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on April 15, 2010, 08:12:25 AM
Mashallah Bohat Achche Andaaz Mein Likha Hai, Yun Laga Guzare Lamhon Ko Dastak Di Ho Aapne,.

Mashallah Bohat Achche Yun Hi Likhte Rahein

shukriya sarkar..

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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2010, 11:45:57 AM »
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Wah wah kya baat hai janab ek alag andaaz me dekha aaj aapko.........gungunana achcha laga aapka.
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2010, 12:23:15 PM »
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Wah Wah Kya Kehne
Bohat Khoobsurat Naghma Hai Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 15, 2010, 05:20:51 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai aapne Qadeer ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2010, 02:59:08 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 15, 2010, 06:09:36 PM
Aadab Qadeer Bhai
Umeed Karta Hoon Aap Khairiyat Se Honge...!
Aur Kya Kahun Is Naghme Ke Baare Mein
Badi Hi Khoobsurti Se Aapne Mazi Ko Bayaan Kiya Hai
Bahut Hi Umda Nazm Hai Yeh...Kashkar Aakhri Band Mein To
Jaise Aapne Humara Hi Haal Likh Diya Ho..Bahut Umda Bhai
Waqai Mein Parhke Bahut Hi Maza Aaya Tabiyat Mast Ho Gayi...
Da'd Hazir Hai Kabul Farmaaye... Applause Applause Applause

Yun Hi Mehfil Ki Raunaq Afzaai Karte Rahiye


Khush Rahiye....


~Shihab~



bhai shihab ap ne jis andaz me nazm ki pazira-e- ki hai bus dil bagh bagh ho gaya .. yunhi hi hausla afzai karte rahen .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2010, 08:10:55 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 15, 2010, 11:39:11 AM
shukriya sarkar..

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«Reply #11 on: April 17, 2010, 07:03:08 AM »
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Bahut umda likha hai aap ne Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 17, 2010, 07:06:51 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 18, 2010, 01:46:58 PM »
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Quote from: shabbir143 on April 15, 2010, 12:23:15 PM
Wah Wah Kya Kehne
Bohat Khoobsurat Naghma Hai Qadeer Ji

Zahe Naseeb ke ye adna si KHawish apko Pasand aayi .. Allah apko khush rakhe ..

Duwa go ..

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«Reply #14 on: April 18, 2010, 02:00:08 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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