e-hawa mere mahbob ko mera paigam de de~~~Raahi~~~

by Rahi2001 on September 29, 2010, 10:56:56 AM
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ye rachna likhty waqt pata nahi mai kisko aur kya socha but jab likha to mujhe kisi ki ek baat yaad aai jo usne mujhe sikhane ke liye kahaa tha ki har rachna me dard ho to koi farak nahi padta but uska jab end ho to usme khoshi ya kam se kam khushi ki ummed honi chahiye maine yahi koshish ki is rachna me shayad aap logon ko pasand aaye


e- hawa tu mere sanam ko maera salam de de
uske hothon ko chu aur mere hothon ka jaam de de

jara uchal uske aanchal ko aakash ki taraf
phir hole se kanon me mera paigaam de de

koi na ho jab pass me unke aankhon pe jab dard bhara ho
tu leke ja unko bahon me apni aur mohhabbat bhara ek payaam de de

phir bhi na gar chain mile to tasveer meri tu dena unko
bas ja tasveer me tu jaan ban kar baton ko meri anjaam de de

khush ho jaye jo mahboob mera tu chhin ke aaja dard ka savera
mere mahboob ke dardon ka tu mujhko aa aakar inaam de de

daag lage na aanchal me uske rahon me uski bas phool mahke
rahon me "Raahi" ki kantey bicha de aansuoon bhara intakaam de de

mar kar bhi na ham do juda ho ek duje se aise mile ho
ek baar ho ke jo dhalne na paaye tu hamko ek aisi shaam de de



~~~~~~~Raahi~~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2010, 11:01:10 AM »
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nice composed...keep on~
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2010, 11:05:58 AM »
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nice composed...keep on~
hiiiiiiiiiiiiii abhiiiiiiiiiiiiii bhaiiiiiiiiiii

pasand aayiiiiiiiii?

hammmmmmmmmmm maja aaya

aaj kal di(kasak) nahi milti yr kahan bussy hai woooooooo

jara unko bhi bole apne bhai ko yaad rakhe yr tum to milty hoge na
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«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2010, 02:47:57 PM »
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Rahi jee Aadaab!

Achchi koshish hai janab daad...... Khususi hume...
2nd and 4Th sher bahut achcha laga daad........

Likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye........
Khuda Hafez........ Usual Smile
         
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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2010, 10:41:14 PM »
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wah ji bhut khoob .....

bhut ache ..
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2010, 04:13:52 PM »
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wah ji bhut khoob .....

bhut ache ..

thanxxxxxxxxxxxx neel jiiiiiiiiiiii

aap ka aabhari hun jo aap ne apna kimti waqt nikaal kar is choti si rachna par dhayaan diya

dil se shukriyaaaaaaaa

warna hamari di ko tym hi nahi milta ke hamari taraf jara bhi dhyaan den
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2010, 04:18:46 PM »
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Rahi jee Aadaab!

Achchi koshish hai janab daad...... Khususi hume...
2nd and 4Th sher bahut achcha laga daad........

Likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye........
Khuda Hafez........ Usual Smile
         


jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii parwaaj jiiiiiiiiiiii

shukariyaaaaaaaa aap ka

aap ki khoshiyon bhari dua mujhe behad kaam aati hai

aap ke liye bhi mai yahi dua karta hu

shubh ratri
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2011, 12:37:34 PM »
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Vaah Rahi ji
Sabhi ash'aar khoob hai lekin..
Jara uchal uske aanchal ko... Behad khoob raha

Daad apke liye
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