-----/// Ehsaas ho tum ///----- Hriday

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saanson  mein baste ho, saans  ho tum
dil  mein  chhipe  mere, ehsaas  ho tum

aankhon mein  tumhaare  sharaab itnaa
kabhi  bujhti  nahi, woh  pyaas  ho tum

kahin dhundne tumhe main kyun jaaun
main  jaantaa  hoon, mere paas ho tum

bechain  ho  koi, bas  tum   dikh jaanaa
jo  dil  ko  sukun  de, woh  raas ho tum

taazgi geeton  mein  naam se tumhaare
likhun  koi   ghazal  to  mithaas ho tum

tum   kyaa   ho mere  liye kaise bataaun
main sant  hoon  agar, sanyaas  ho tum


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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2013, 07:28:13 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waah waah hriday ji.. kya baat hai... bahut bahut khoob... dheron dheron daaad...
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2013, 07:31:19 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Aqsh ji.....!!!

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Waah waah hriday ji.. kya baat hai... bahut bahut khoob... dheron dheron daaad...
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2013, 08:06:16 PM »
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saanson  mein baste ho, saans  ho tum
dil  mein  chhipe  mere, ehsaas  ho tum

aankhon mein  tumhaare  sharaab itnaa
kabhi  bujhti  nahi, woh  pyaas  ho tum

kahin dhundne tumhe main kyun jaaun
main  jaantaa  hoon, mere paas ho tum

bechain  ho  koi, bas  tum   dikh jaanaa
jo  dil  ko  sukun  de, woh  raas ho tum

taazgi geeton  mein  naam se tumhaare
likhun  koi   ghazal  to  mithaas ho tum

tum   kyaa   ho mere  liye kaise bataaun
main sant  hoon  agar, sanyaas  ho tum


*****HRIDAY*****




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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2013, 08:10:07 PM »
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kp ......... tu kahe na kahe kuch na kuch gadbad to hai.... tu sahi se bata de mujhe .... kaun ai wo... pakka promise kisiko nahi bataungi.....

yaarrr itna acha to tu kabhi nahi likhta tha ab ahanak ki ho gaya hai tujhe........ ufffffffffffffffff....... ufffffffffffff....uffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff f
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2013, 08:13:38 PM »
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thank you soooo much M_B ji.....!!!

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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2013, 08:16:41 PM »
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matlab aap pehle yunhi jhuti muti taarif karti thi meri, hadd hai, main to sochtaa thaa ki aap ko sahi mein meri poems pasand aati hain, aur aap... uuuffffffff.... kahaan jaaun, kahaan muh chhipaaun.... sad5

koi nahi hai ji, yeh poem to maine aapko soch ke hi likhaa thaa, tabhi itni pyaari bani hai.... Usual Smile

kaagaz kalam liye baithun agar
kuch bante nahi aaj kal dekhaa

par jahaan bhi teraa naam aayaa
to bante haasil-e-ghazal dekhaa



kp ......... tu kahe na kahe kuch na kuch gadbad to hai.... tu sahi se bata de mujhe .... kaun ai wo... pakka promise kisiko nahi bataungi.....

yaarrr itna acha to tu kabhi nahi likhta tha ab ahanak ki ho gaya hai tujhe........ ufffffffffffffffff....... ufffffffffffff....uffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff f

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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2013, 08:22:17 PM »
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matlab aap pehle yunhi jhuti muti taarif karti thi meri, hadd hai, main to sochtaa thaa ki aap ko sahi mein meri poems pasand aati hain, aur aap... uuuffffffff.... kahaan jaaun, kahaan muh chhipaaun.... sad5

koi nahi hai ji, yeh poem to maine aapko soch ke hi likhaa thaa, tabhi itni pyaari bani hai.... Usual Smile

kaagaz kalam liye baithun agar
kuch bante nahi aaj kal dekhaa

par jahaan bhi teraa naam aayaa
to bante haasil-e-ghazal dekhaa




ufffffffffffffffff ab maska palish shuru  DOH DOH....... kp dekho aise mera naam lene se main manne wali nahi hun  icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch... sachhi sachhii bolooo.....  cussing cussing cussing

logon se tareef batorne ki kala tumne kya khuub paai hai

kuch likh na paaye to naam likha mera aur gazal ka naam diya....
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2013, 08:31:47 PM »
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pakki waali baat hai ji, aap maano ya naa maano, yeh aapko soch kar hi likhaa maine, ek dum shat pratishat sach...!!!

koi phool, tum kamal ho, koi tumhe kyaa banaayegaa
poori tum ghazal ho, jo 'Hriday' bas gungunaayegaa


ufffffffffffffffff ab maska palish shuru  DOH DOH....... kp dekho aise mera naam lene se main manne wali nahi hun  icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch... sachhi sachhii bolooo.....  cussing cussing cussing

logon se tareef batorne ki kala tumne kya khuub paai hai

kuch likh na paaye to naam likha mera aur gazal ka naam diya....

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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2013, 08:59:25 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2013, 09:02:02 PM »
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Wah wah wah .... Kya baat hai ... Khoob !!!!
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2013, 09:23:34 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji.....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: September 15, 2013, 09:25:50 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Zarraa ji.....!!!

Wah wah wah .... Kya baat hai ... Khoob !!!!
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«Reply #13 on: September 15, 2013, 10:01:46 PM »
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pakki waali baat hai ji, aap maano ya naa maano, yeh aapko soch kar hi likhaa maine, ek dum shat pratishat sach...!!!

koi phool, tum kamal ho, koi tumhe kyaa banaayegaa
poori tum ghazal ho, jo 'Hriday' bas gungunaayegaa



mujhe na ullu banao tum ab aur kp
kiska rang chadha hai tumpar batao kp
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«Reply #14 on: September 15, 2013, 10:06:12 PM »
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hai meri mohabbat kaa chadhaa tujhpe rang-e-heenaa
anguthi teri ungli ki main, usme basaa tu nageenaa


mujhe na ullu banao tum ab aur kp
kiska rang chadha hai tumpar batao kp
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