Eik baat

by punjaban on January 19, 2006, 09:09:37 PM

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punjaban

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joh eik baat keh nah saki
Oos kah abi thaak gum uta thi rahee
Oos kah khayal mita thi rahee
Par ek baat yaad ati rahee
Larkon ki baaton meh koh kay
Kisi ki nay rahee

Hey, tell me if u like this, first time writing. Pm punjaban or leave a comment. Desi signing off. :lol:


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Re: Eik baat

«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2006, 12:18:56 PM »

Quote from: "punjaban"

joh eik baat keh nah saki
Oos kah abi thaak gum uta thi rahee
Oos kah khayal mita thi rahee
Par ek baat yaad ati rahee
Larkon ki baaton meh koh kay
Kisi ki nay rahee

Hey, tell me if you like this, first time writing. Pm punjaban or leave a comment. Desi signing off. :lol:

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dat is just mind blowing !!!

:idea:


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urs4evasomdev

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Eik baat

«Reply #2 on: January 20, 2006, 12:36:55 PM »

heya punjaban ji.....

bada pasand aya........ likthey raho.......


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punjaban

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Thanks alot guys

«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2006, 05:41:01 PM »

i didnt know if it was good or not, i just wrote stuff down. But thanx a million.


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shayar_dildaar

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Eik baat

«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2006, 12:57:48 AM »

Punjaban,
Kudiye very nice website...Very good 1.....Keep writing...


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punjaban

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thanks

«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2006, 01:30:17 AM »

hey, thank u so much, i didnt know people would actually visit my site, but thanks for both things shayaar dildar. i really like ur name, its so cool. But i havent seen some of ur work, if u could, tell me where it is.

And everyone, have u guys heard the song Jhalak Diklaga from the movie aksar, its so nice. u guys should listen to it.


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shayar_dildaar

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Eik baat

«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2006, 04:20:52 AM »

Thanx man....Usually I do get that complement but its always nice to hear it more often :lol: :lol: :lol: .....Just jokin....Hey, I have lots of posts and I am so surprised u cud'nt find them....They are all in Khumar-e-ishq....
Looking forward to read ur stuff more often...Ok cya then, kudiye....
All the best with life....

Hey hey, the song is too good.I really like it tooo..Did u hear the song Adat(remix) from that movie...Its lovely stuff by DJ Suketu....


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punjaban

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love it.

«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2006, 04:27:18 AM »

i love that song also, and aashiq banya too but i like the aadat song itself by atif aslam, have u head the one not remixed. wow we really have something in common, i will look forward to reading all of ur posts so i have to go, but thanx for replying back.


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shayar_dildaar

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Eik baat

«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2006, 04:30:24 AM »

Yupes catch ya later on..R ya in school rite now....
Another one which is soo cool
Movie: Bluffmaster
Singer: Arash
Song: Say na say na
Check it out...Its nice nd its in Punjabi...


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myheart_ursonly

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Re: Eik baat

«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2006, 05:27:04 AM »

Quote from: "punjaban"

Nice one punjaban Usual Smile


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tushar_4u_im

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Eik baat

«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2006, 12:27:14 PM »

joh eik baat keh nah saki
Oos kah abi thaak gum uta thi rahee
Oos kah khayal mita thi rahee
Par ek baat yaad ati rahee
Larkon ki baaton meh koh kay
Kisi ki nay rahee

kehte hai hum bhi ek barr tumse .....

pyar hai bus hume pyar tumse..........

kerte hai tumse pyar tum jante ho humesha......

aab tak kyu na mile humse is batt ka dukh hai.....


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punjaban

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thanks

«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2006, 06:28:52 PM »

thanks my heart urs only, and yah i am still in high school. grade 9. Here go to this site, it has the best indian, punjabi, pop every type of music.

www.musicindiaonline.com


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punjaban

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sorry

«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2006, 08:39:30 PM »

sorry i didnt see tushar poem, but it was really good. nice way to finish off the poem. i also like ur signature poem too, it is very nice tushar ji. keep writing.

dukh kho puri zindagi hum uta kay rahay
Oon kah dil thoor kay, hum paash tha thay rahay.


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shayar_dildaar

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Eik baat

«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2006, 11:21:23 PM »

Shukriyan kudiye for the website..I listen to songs from the that website tooo...
Did u try www.raaga.com
Thats nice one......


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anjani_si

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Eik baat

«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2006, 11:27:52 PM »

vry nice tushar ji!!!!

aik baat dil mein hai
par usse kehne se darte hai
najane kyun eik khoof sa hai
dil mein rehta hai
dil ko bolne se kehta hai!!!