Eik kshan mein hee, kadaachit, poorna jeewan jiyaa mainey?

by abdbundeli on August 31, 2008, 12:24:52 PM
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 Diyaa priya ney, paraakaashhthhaa torh; jee-bhar liyaa mainey!
 Eik kshan mein hee, kadaachit, poorna jeewan jiyaa mainey?
 Aaj bhi, sou baar jeetaa hoon, usee beetey wipal ko:
 Poorn jeewan usee kshan ko, suhrud, arpit kiyaa mainey!
                                            
The above 'Hindi Chopadi', I've translated for all those, who know not Hindi, as below:  

 
  My beloved gave me limitless (love), and I
  Gathered to the best of the limits, that I could hold:
  As if, I've lived my whole life, just in a moment!
  (And), still I'm living that moment, a hundred times:
  To which, Beloved! I've dedicated, whole my life!

               - Ramwatiya / G.R.Prakash / abd bundeli

 

  
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2009, 02:33:03 PM »
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Diyaa priya ney, paraakaashhthhaa torh; jee-bhar liyaa mainey!
 Eik kshan mein hee, kadaachit, poorna jeewan jiyaa mainey?
 Aaj bhi, sou baar jeetaa hoon, usee beetey wipal ko:
 Poorn jeewan usee kshan ko, suhrud, arpit kiyaa mainey!
                                            
The above 'Hindi Chopadi', I've translated for all those, who know not Hindi, as below:  

  My beloved gave me limitless (love), and I
  Gathered to the best of the limits, that I could hold:
  As if, I've lived my whole life, just in a moment!
  (And), still I'm living that moment, a hundred times:
  To which, Beloved! I've dedicated, whole my life!

               - Ramwatiya / G.R.Prakash / abd bundeli

 

  

Very simple words and great meaning full of love and remembrance of the loved one....Excellent verses Babu Ji
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2009, 02:49:59 PM »
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Very simple words and great meaning full of love and remembrance of the loved one....Excellent verses Babu Ji

I'm happy, Celmira bitia, that it has pleased you! Thanks a lot!

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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2009, 03:25:39 PM »
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Wonderful creation Uncle ji  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2009, 03:34:52 PM »
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Wonderful creation Uncle ji  Applause

Thanks a lot, Roja ji!
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2009, 04:00:08 PM »
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BOhat Achche Abd Bhaiya, Nice One,.
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2009, 04:18:32 AM »
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BOhat Achche Abd Bhaiya, Nice One,.
Thanks, Jaanasheen bhai!
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2009, 05:04:25 AM »
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Diyaa priya ney, paraakaashhthhaa torh; jee-bhar liyaa mainey!
 Eik kshan mein hee, kadaachit, poorna jeewan jiyaa mainey?
 Aaj bhi, sou baar jeetaa hoon, usee beetey wipal ko:
 Poorn jeewan usee kshan ko, suhrud, arpit kiyaa mainey!
                                            
The above 'Hindi Chopadi', I've translated for all those, who know not Hindi, as below:  

  My beloved gave me limitless (love), and I
  Gathered to the best of the limits, that I could hold:
  As if, I've lived my whole life, just in a moment!
  (And), still I'm living that moment, a hundred times:
  To which, Beloved! I've dedicated, whole my life!

               - Ramwatiya / G.R.Prakash / abd bundeli

 

  

Touching lines Abd ji... Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2009, 06:25:03 AM »
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Touching lines Abd ji... Applause

Thanks angel4u ji!
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