ek awaj mere(CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on June 04, 2011, 06:57:31 PM
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EK awaaj mere kaano se takraati hai
tanhai meri tanhai ke geet gaati hai

thak chuka hu mager ruk nahi sakta
meri manjil mujhe pass bulati hai

kausis to karta hu mager kya karu
nahi need raatbhar mujse aati hai

nighaho se jaane kya usne pila diya
jindgi bhi ek jaam se nazer aati hai

chupa hai kaun aaine mei jara hame bhi bata de
aksar jise dekhkar wo sharma jaati hai

kya fark padta hai khusi ho ya gum
nighaye to dono mei he bheeg jaati hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2011, 07:39:12 PM »
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bht khub aur pyara kalaam hai manoj ji……

bas last line me ※nigahen※ ki jagah ※palken※ kar dijiye kyuki…nigaah nai palak bheega karti hai aansuo se
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2011, 07:44:01 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on June 04, 2011, 07:39:12 PM
bht khub aur pyara kalaam hai manoj ji……

bas last line me ※nigahen※ ki jagah ※palken※ kar dijiye kyuki…nigaah nai palak bheega karti hai aansuo se
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2011, 05:43:53 AM »
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bht bht khoob manoj ji...
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2011, 06:55:10 AM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on June 04, 2011, 06:57:31 PM
EK awaaj mere kaano se takraati hai
tanhai meri tanhai ke geet gaati hai

thak chuka hu mager ruk nahi sakta
meri manjil mujhe pass bulati hai

kausis to karta hu mager kya karu
nahi need raatbhar mujse aati hai

nighaho se jaane kya usne pila diya
jindgi bhi ek jaam se nazer aati hai

chupa hai kaun aaine mei jara hame bhi bata de
aksar jise dekhkar wo sharma jaati hai

kya fark padta hai khusi ho ya gum
nighaye to dono mei he bheeg jaati hai



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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2011, 07:02:11 AM »
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wah wah…
manoj babu…
bht khub…
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2011, 09:25:22 AM »
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thanx
Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on June 05, 2011, 05:43:53 AM
bht bht khoob manoj ji...
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bahut bahut sukriya
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«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2011, 09:27:03 AM »
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thnax nrl bhai
Quote from: nirala on June 05, 2011, 07:02:11 AM
wah wah…
manoj babu…
bht khub…
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manoj ji bahut acha kalaam hai


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«Reply #10 on: June 05, 2011, 10:10:17 AM »
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THANX
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manoj ji bahut acha kalaam hai


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