EK BAAR KAR KEY AITBAR LIKH DOH .................. (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on January 24, 2009, 07:03:34 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 26, 2009, 05:55:56 PM »
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wah wah wah wah Jasbir jee..kamal ka likha hai...Madhu apne bhi acha likha hai...


apne dil se teri tasveer chupa lia kartey hai,
kahin uski nazar na lagjaye,
apni mohobat ki dastaan rooh main dafan karke raktey hai,
mere marne ke bad mujse pyaar karne ke jurm main tujhe saza na hojaye...
{shaer ka maqsad dekhiyega...shayad ek galti hai par maafi chahta hoon uske liye}
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«Reply #16 on: January 26, 2009, 06:05:28 PM »
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Hum bhi toh yahin hai, paas mein tumhare,
humein kehne se pehle,apne dill mein jhank kar toh dekho,
Abb din mein na chain hota hai, sirf raaton ka intezaar rehta hai,
Kyunki khwabon mein toh bass tumhara hi ana hota hai..


mat bulao mujhe apne sapne main;kahin apka sapna napak na hojaye,
mat kaho duniya walon se apni mohobat ki dastaan;kahin mohobat nilam na hojaye,
tumhi toh chodd gayi mujhe tanha inn kanton ki duniya main,
mat apna mujhe wapid;kahin mera sacha dil tujhe tabah na kar jaye...
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«Reply #17 on: January 26, 2009, 06:10:00 PM »
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tere liye apna dil kurban karjaunga,
mitgaya par tujhe mohobat karna sikhajaunga,
aaj bhi intezar karta hoon tera par tune mujhe bhoola dia hai,
marte marte tujhe mere ghar ka pata yaad dilajaunga...
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«Reply #18 on: January 26, 2009, 07:02:09 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on January 26, 2009, 05:55:56 PM
wah wah wah wah Jasbir jee..kamal ka likha hai...Madhu apne bhi acha likha hai...


apne dil se teri tasveer chupa lia kartey hai,
kahin uski nazar na lagjaye,
apni mohobat ki dastaan rooh main dafan karke raktey hai,
mere marne ke bad mujse pyaar karne ke jurm main tujhe saza na hojaye...
{shaer ka maqsad dekhiyega...shayad ek galti hai par maafi chahta hoon uske liye}





THanks DH and wah kya baat kahi hai aap ney.. wah

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #19 on: January 26, 2009, 07:02:59 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on January 26, 2009, 06:10:00 PM

tere liye apna dil kurban karjaunga,
mitgaya par tujhe mohobat karna sikhajaunga,
aaj bhi intezar karta hoon tera par tune mujhe bhoola dia hai,
marte marte tujhe mere ghar ka pata yaad dilajaunga...

wah DH bahut hi khoob .....

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #20 on: January 27, 2009, 04:33:56 AM »
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shukriya Jasbir jee...
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«Reply #21 on: January 27, 2009, 08:41:34 AM »
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Bohat khoob jasbir ji.... Applause Applause

Na jaane kyun hamein aansu dikhana nahi aata
Na jane kyun hale-e-tanhai jatana nahi aata
Kyun aapno se bichhad jate hain 
Shayad hamen unka saath nibhana nahi aata 

**HR**
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«Reply #22 on: January 27, 2009, 09:02:01 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 27, 2009, 08:41:34 AM
Bohat khoob jasbir ji.... Applause Applause

Na jaane kyun hamein aansu dikhana nahi aata
Na jane kyun hale-e-tanhai jatana nahi aata
Kyun aapno se bichhad jate hain 
Shayad hamen unka saath nibhana nahi aata 

**HR**




Thanks Honey Partner and kya khoob kaha aap ney


PYAR JAB AAP KA HADD SEY GUJAR JAYEGA
CHAIN NA JAB RATOH MEH TUMHEY AAYEGA
SAATH NIBHANA KHUDD HI SEEKH JAO GEY
JAB DIL NA KAHI AUR LAG PAYEGA


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #23 on: February 01, 2009, 03:02:38 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 26, 2009, 05:19:04 PM



Thanks Madhu and bahut khoob kaha aap ney bhi


IZHAAAR AAP NEY KABHI KIA HI NAHI
NAZROH SEY WAAR KABHI KIA HI NAHI
DIL MEH HI PYAR LIYE BAITHEY HO
HOTOH SEY NAAM KABHI LIYA HI NAHI

JINDAGI HAMAREY NAAM SEY KAAT RAHEY HO
MOHABBAT DIL-OH-JAAN SEY KAR RAHEY HO
FURSAT SEY NAAM HAMARA PUKARA HI NAHI
HAMEY BANAYA KABHI APNA SAHARA HI NAHI

IZHAAAR AAP NEY KABHI KIA HI NAHI
NAZROH SEY WAAR KABHI KIA HI NAHI


JASBIR SINGH



Good one Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #24 on: February 04, 2009, 04:13:56 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 01, 2009, 03:02:38 AM
Good one Jasbir Ji

Thanks Rajesh

Jasbir Singh
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