Ek Chitthi Pyaar Ki......

by Ghayal on October 23, 2005, 10:00:44 AM
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Umra Beeti Par Na Aayi Ek Chitthi Pyaar ki..
Anyatha Hum Bhi Basate Ek Basti Pyaar ki..

Aandhiyaan.. Ruswaiyaa Hai.. Kismat Mein Tanhaiyaa Hai..
Kis Tarah Saahil Ko Paaye Ek Kashti Pyaar Ki...

Aap Mukar Na Jaate Aise.. Yadi Samay Par Us Ghadi..
Hum Na Aise Haar Jaate ek Baazi Pyaar Ki...

Har Koi Isko Tadapta Dekh Kar Kush Hi Huaa..
Chhat-pataai Ret par Jabek Machhali Pyaar Ki...

Laut Kar Aayi To Us Par Aasooyon ke Chitra The..
Kaash Humne Banaayi Hoti Ye Lakeere Pyaar ki..
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2005, 04:19:20 PM »
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bahoot  badia ghayal ji...pata nahi kyuin daad nahi hai ispe....shayad logon ne shayaan nahi diya....bahoot khoob..janaab...isi pe hum kutchh shabd instantly likhte hain...

na jaane kyuin log is taraah  karam kerte hain
itni achhi nazm ko yuinhi nazer andaaz kerte hain.

kab tak bhala kaid rahenge apno ke dayre main
aznabi jaan nazm ko padne main sharam kerte hain.

gumraah kab tak rahenge aise insaan yahaan,
shayad woh dikhaawati hi  kalam kerte hain.

lekin rukh ab hawa ka lagta hai badalne laga hai
jo bhi woh hain khud mante hain ki julam kerte hain.

Quote from: "Ghayal"
Umra Beeti Par Na Aayi Ek Chitthi Pyaar ki..
Anyatha Hum Bhi Basate Ek Basti Pyaar ki..

Aandhiyaan.. Ruswaiyaa Hai.. Kismat Mein Tanhaiyaa Hai..
Kis Tarah Saahil Ko Paaye Ek Kashti Pyaar Ki...

Aap Mukar Na Jaate Aise.. Yadi Samay Par Us Ghadi..
Hum Na Aise Haar Jaate ek Baazi Pyaar Ki...

Har Koi Isko Tadapta Dekh Kar Kush Hi Huaa..
Chhat-pataai Ret par Jabek Machhali Pyaar Ki...

Laut Kar Aayi To Us Par Aasooyon ke Chitra The..
Kaash Humne Banaayi Hoti Ye Lakeere Pyaar ki..
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hafza
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2005, 08:45:49 AM »
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ITS WELL WRITTEN BOTH OF U Usual Smile
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natural
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2005, 12:16:08 PM »
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Quote from: "Ghayal"
Umra Beeti Par Na Aayi Ek Chitthi Pyaar ki..
Anyatha Hum Bhi Basate Ek Basti Pyaar ki..

Aandhiyaan.. Ruswaiyaa Hai.. Kismat Mein Tanhaiyaa Hai..
Kis Tarah Saahil Ko Paaye Ek Kashti Pyaar Ki...

Aap Mukar Na Jaate Aise.. Yadi Samay Par Us Ghadi..
Hum Na Aise Haar Jaate ek Baazi Pyaar Ki...

Har Koi Isko Tadapta Dekh Kar Kush Hi Huaa..
Chhat-pataai Ret par Jabek Machhali Pyaar Ki...

Laut Kar Aayi To Us Par Aasooyon ke Chitra The..
Kaash Humne Banaayi Hoti Ye Lakeere Pyaar ki..

Bahut khoob likha hai janaab.............. Usual Smile
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sandhaya
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2005, 10:51:21 AM »
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Too Good bahut HI Khoob Likha Hai Aap Dono Ne

Kyun Nhi Tham Jaata Ye Aansuon Ka Sehlab Badhta Jata Hai
Sambhal rahi Hun Kal Se Aanchal Haathon Se Nikalta Jaata Hai

Na Jaane Kahan Se Aa Rahi Hai Ye Sada Mujhko
Ye Dil Mera Kyun, Kisiki Aur Kichan Chala Jaata Hai

Kahin Na Ho Kabhi Bhi Barbaad Kisike Sapne Suhaane Saare
Mera Dil Tuh Dil Se Aap Sabko Dua Diye Jaata Hai
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2005, 04:58:07 AM »
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waah sandhyaji...bai waah...kya khoob likha hai..pehle do ashaar main bahoot hi jaan phoonk di aapne....ek dafa toh hamaare ashquon ki dhaar rok di aapne....bahoot hi ..

maange the chand aansoo unse sehlaab naseeb hua,
chaha unhe itna per unhe aanchal nikalta mehsoos hua.
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2005, 05:04:16 AM »
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Quote from: "sandhaya"
Too Good bahut HI Khoob Likha Hai Aap Dono Ne

Kyun Nhi Tham Jaata Ye Aansuon Ka Sehlab Badhta Jata Hai
Sambhal rahi Hun Kal Se Aanchal Haathon Se Nikalta Jaata Hai

Na Jaane Kahan Se Aa Rahi Hai Ye Sada Mujhko
Ye Dil Mera Kyun, Kisiki Aur Kichan Chala Jaata Hai

Kahin Na Ho Kabhi Bhi Barbaad Kisike Sapne Suhaane Saare
Mera Dil Tuh Dil Se Aap Sabko Dua Diye Jaata Hai

Wakayi Aapney bahut Khoob likha hai............. Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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Ghayal
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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2005, 09:19:59 AM »
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Shukriya Friend's....
Aap Ne Meri Poem Pasand Aai.....




Bin Kahe Dil Mein Utar Gayi Ek teer Banke
Use Mein Kyaa Kahu..
Bin Kahe Dil cheer Ke Nikal Gayi Cheek Banke
Use Mein Kya Kahu..

Jagti Aakhon mein Kuch Sapne De Gayi..
Use Mein Kyaa Kahu..
Bewafaai Ki Aag Mein Umra Bhar Jalta Chhod Gayi ..
Use Mein Kya kahu..

Jisne Maangne Pe Mohabbat Kabhi Na Di...
Use Mein Kyaa Kahu..
Jisne bin Maange Umra bhar Ke Dard De Diye..
Use Mein Kyaa Kahu..

Use Bewafaa Kahu..
Par Jisne Bewafaai Ki Had Paar Kardi Ho..
Use Mein Kyaa Kahu..
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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2005, 03:24:41 PM »
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Bahoot khoob harashmahajan, sandhaya and Gayal!!!!


Good job Gayal!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2005, 05:49:19 AM »
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be-wafaaon ki is duniya main ham kahaan our love kahan
Gunaah toh kerte rahein per sahil gunaho main ab woh dum kahaan.
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2005, 01:28:38 PM »
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Quote from: "Ghayal"
Shukriya Friend's....
Aap Ne Meri Poem Pasand Aai.....




Bin Kahe Dil Mein Utar Gayi Ek teer Banke
Use Mein Kyaa Kahu..
Bin Kahe Dil cheer Ke Nikal Gayi Cheek Banke
Use Mein Kya Kahu..

Jagti Aakhon mein Kuch Sapne De Gayi..
Use Mein Kyaa Kahu..
Bewafaai Ki Aag Mein Umra Bhar Jalta Chhod Gayi ..
Use Mein Kya kahu..

Jisne Maangne Pe Mohabbat Kabhi Na Di...
Use Mein Kyaa Kahu..
Jisne bin Maange Umra bhar Ke Dard De Diye..
Use Mein Kyaa Kahu..

Use Bewafaa Kahu..
Par Jisne Bewafaai Ki Had Paar Kardi Ho..
Use Mein Kyaa Kahu..


Ghayal ji  aaur sabhiyon ne hi acha likha hai .......

Maine jisse mahobaat ki use kiya kahu
par usney mujhe mahobat na ki ..use kiya kahu

Wafa usney kabhie ki nahi usey bewafaa kia kahu
Jafa pesha hai wo.. uski taarif mein aaur kia kahu

JAi  Shri KriShna!!
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Ghayal
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2005, 09:00:00 AM »
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Sukriya Friend's

Suraj Ke Paas Kiran He...Dil Jalane Ko......
Chanda Ke Paas Chanadni He...Muskurane Ko.....
Phooli Ke Paas Khusbu He....Chaman Mahekane Ko....
Aur Mere Paas..Sirf Tu He...Yaad Aane Ko......
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2005, 04:34:42 PM »
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wah!!!!!!!!!  wondewrfulllll...........harashmahajan, sandhaya and Gayal............
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