ek dil ki baat dabi..

by AbhiTamrakar on May 31, 2011, 09:40:29 AM
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hotho se labz agar
gir jaye to kya hoga
ek dil ki bat dabi
keh jaaye to kya hoga..

unhe ehsaas kahan 'Abhi'
hamari mohabbat ka
ankhon se kuchh ashq agar
beh jaaye to kya hoga..
ek dil ki bat dabi..

kya sach kya jhooth
yeh dil bechara kya jaane
chutki bhar zazbaat agar
fisal jaaye to kya hoga..
ek dil ki bat dabi..

unhe hai khabar mere marz ki magar
ab tak dawa-e-deedar mila nahi
saanso tak baat agar
pahunch jaaye to kyaa hoga.
ek dil ki bat dabi..

 
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2011, 09:58:53 AM »
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bahut bahut khub abhiji.....
khub........
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2011, 10:06:41 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Abhiji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2011, 10:15:16 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on May 31, 2011, 09:40:29 AM

hotho se labz agar
gir jaye to kya hoga
ek dil ki bat dabi
keh jaaye to kya hoga..

unhe ehsaas kahan 'Abhi'
hamari mohabbat ka
ankhon se kuchh ashq agar
beh jaaye to kya hoga..
ek dil ki bat dabi..

kya sach kya jhooth
yeh dil bechara kya jaane
chutki bhar zazbaat agar
fisal jaaye to kya hoga..
ek dil ki bat dabi..

unhe hai khabar mere marz ki magar
ab tak dawa-e-deedar mila nahi
saanso tak baat agar
pahunch jaaye to kyaa hoga.
ek dil ki bat dabi..

 


good one abhi ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2011, 03:49:45 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on May 31, 2011, 09:40:29 AM

hotho se labz agar
gir jaye to kya hoga
ek dil ki bat dabi
keh jaaye to kya hoga..

unhe ehsaas kahan 'Abhi'
hamari mohabbat ka
ankhon se kuchh ashq agar
beh jaaye to kya hoga..
ek dil ki bat dabi..

kya sach kya jhooth
yeh dil bechara kya jaane
chutki bhar zazbaat agar
fisal jaaye to kya hoga..
ek dil ki bat dabi..

unhe hai khabar mere marz ki magar
ab tak dawa-e-deedar mila nahi
saanso tak baat agar
pahunch jaaye to kyaa hoga.
ek dil ki bat dabi..

 
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2011, 05:02:51 PM »
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pta nai kyun ek ajeeb se aur anuthepan ka ehsaas hua…
kuch saadgi aur kuch bht sukun bhara lekin ajeeb sa meethapan bhi feel hua…
bhai kis feel se likha aapne ye…btaiyega hume…
hum uss feel tak pahuch nahi pa rahe…
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2011, 06:59:42 AM »
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aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya dosto ....

pasand karne ke liye...
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2011, 07:32:42 AM »
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nirala ji,koi khas nahi bas ek baat thi jo labon se fisal gayi..yunhi..


yunhi sath rahiye ...
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«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2011, 09:22:58 PM »
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Kya baat hai Abhi bhai..
Bahaut bahaut meetha aur khubsoorat likha hai apne..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: June 16, 2011, 09:38:14 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Abhi ji.dard se bhari lajawab peshkash. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2011, 10:51:45 AM »
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shukriya rahim bhaiii... madhu ji apka bhi shukriya...
 
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