EK DIN EK KHWAAB BUNA THA.....K@HIN@@R

by Kohinoor on June 17, 2013, 08:34:49 PM
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Ek roj ek khwaab buna tha...
Chota sa ghar,aangan me laal gulaab k phool...darichon se jhaankta khula aasmaan...
Ghar k bheetar ki aab-o-hwa tumhari yadon k jugnu se chamakti hui...
Kisi deewaar pe tngi hmari hasti hui tasveer...
To kisi kmre me chupkar baithi hmari wo muhabbaton bhari shaam...
Jb meri aankhon me jhaankar tumne pucha tha mujhse...k..
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"meri hamsafar bnogi?"
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Aur tb mere gaalon par bikhar gyi thi behisaab gulaabon ki surkhi...
Uske baad mera wo khwaab muqammal hua...
Meri har subah tumhare pyar se rausan ho gyi thi aur,
har raat chahat ki baraat bn gyi thi...
Mera wo khwabon wala makaan tb schmuch ghar bn gya tha...
Jisme hm dono ne apni hasraton ko khilte dekha tha...
Tum jb wapas aaoge to dekhoge ki
hmara ye gharaunda bs tumhari hi yadon se mehak rha hai ab tk...
Aur mai usi ghar ki dehleez par baithi bs tumhare lautne ka intjaar kr rhi hun....
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2013, 08:39:38 PM »
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bahut khoob...
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2013, 09:17:41 PM »
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Bahaut khoobsurat nazm kahi Kohinoor ji ... Daad apko
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2013, 09:43:13 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaah Kohinoor jee, bahut hi khoob, bas hamesha ki tarah. Waise kaafi dinoN baad dekha hai aapko Yo Pe, kaafi achha laga, yuN hi aate rahiye.
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2013, 10:12:09 PM »
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badi khoobsurti sey aap ney yeh pesh kia hai ... jaisey sara scene aakhoh key saamney hi chal raha ho ....

bahut bahut bahut badiya likha hai aap ney .. bahut khoob

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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2013, 10:58:13 PM »
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just minblowing..... kohinoor ji.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause Applause Applause
likhte rahiye.. aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2013, 11:46:40 PM »
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vo rangeen taane baane.
jisme zindgee qaid hai.
ek sundar khwaabon se bana ghar..haqeekat bane ya n bane..par bebuniyaad naheen hota..
ye saari srishti bhi to kisi ki kalpana hai..
bahut badhiya...likhti rahiye
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2013, 12:01:04 AM »
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bahut bahut khubsurat , nek jazbaat se bharpoor , nazm hai.
Is takhleeq par dheron daad aur mubarakbaad.Hasan
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