EK KHAT TERE NAAM LIKHUNGA...

by upyogkarta on March 10, 2009, 01:04:12 PM
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EK KHAT TERE NAAM LIKHUNGA
HAAL E DIL TAMANNA LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI MIZAAZ KAISA HAI MERA
AUR DHER SARA PYAR LIKHUNGA

BEETI HUI SAAB KI BAAT LIKHUNGA
GUZRI HUI HAR SUBAH QAYANAAT LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI TERE BAIGAIR DIN KAISE GUJARTA HAI MERA
AUR THODA LAFZ E QARAAR LIKHUNGA

SHAAM E TANHA GUZRI KISKE SATH LIKHUNGA
HAR GHADI HAR PAL UMIID E SEHAR KISKA HAI LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI INTIZAAR E ALAM KAISA RAHA
AUR PYAR BHARA EK SALAM LIKHUNGA

TANHA JAAM KI KHAYALAT LIKHUNGA
MUHABAT E JUDAI KE HALAT LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI KHWAAB E TAMANNA KISKA HAI MUJHKO
AUR TUMHARE SAWALON KE JAWAB ME.....
LAHOO SE TUMHARA NAAM LIKHUNGA  
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2009, 01:06:56 PM »
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Nice One Upyog Ji, And Welcome To yoindia,.
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2009, 01:58:30 PM »
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good work!
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«Reply #3 on: March 15, 2009, 06:55:02 PM »
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Quote from: upyogkarta on March 10, 2009, 01:04:12 PM
EK KHAT TERE NAAM LIKHUNGA
HAAL E DIL TAMANNA LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI MIZAAZ KAISA HAI MERA
AUR DHER SARA PYAR LIKHUNGA

BEETI HUI SAAB KI BAAT LIKHUNGA
GUZRI HUI HAR SUBAH QAYANAAT LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI TERE BAIGAIR DIN KAISE GUJARTA HAI MERA
AUR THODA LAFZ E QARAAR LIKHUNGA

SHAAM E TANHA GUZRI KISKE SATH LIKHUNGA
HAR GHADI HAR PAL UMIID E SEHAR KISKA HAI LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI INTIZAAR E ALAM KAISA RAHA
AUR PYAR BHARA EK SALAM LIKHUNGA

TANHA JAAM KI KHAYALAT LIKHUNGA
MUHABAT E JUDAI KE HALAT LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI KHWAAB E TAMANNA KISKA HAI MUJHKO
AUR TUMHARE SAWALON KE JAWAB ME.....
LAHOO SE TUMHARA NAAM LIKHUNGA  



bhaiyo ye meri rachna nahi hai>>>> mene to bus iss kavita ko remix kiya hai
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2009, 07:32:54 PM »
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Quote from: upyogkarta on March 10, 2009, 01:04:12 PM
EK KHAT TERE NAAM LIKHUNGA
HAAL E DIL TAMANNA LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI MIZAAZ KAISA HAI MERA
AUR DHER SARA PYAR LIKHUNGA

BEETI HUI SAAB KI BAAT LIKHUNGA
GUZRI HUI HAR SUBAH QAYANAAT LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI TERE BAIGAIR DIN KAISE GUJARTA HAI MERA
AUR THODA LAFZ E QARAAR LIKHUNGA

SHAAM E TANHA GUZRI KISKE SATH LIKHUNGA
HAR GHADI HAR PAL UMIID E SEHAR KISKA HAI LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI INTIZAAR E ALAM KAISA RAHA
AUR PYAR BHARA EK SALAM LIKHUNGA

TANHA JAAM KI KHAYALAT LIKHUNGA
MUHABAT E JUDAI KE HALAT LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI KHWAAB E TAMANNA KISKA HAI MUJHKO
AUR TUMHARE SAWALON KE JAWAB ME.....
LAHOO SE TUMHARA NAAM LIKHUNGA 

Please see this thread....This was the original nazm written by Zama Ji....!!

Ek Khat Mere Naam Likhna

Zama Ji ko ye thread padh ke jo takleef hogi, shayad wo batane ki zaroorat nahin. It's nice of you to write later on that it was not written by you, and you only did 'remix' ...but still it's surely going to hurt him !

We would love to see your original work, especially when you have the talent of writing !
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2009, 11:49:53 PM »
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Quote from: upyogkarta on March 10, 2009, 01:04:12 PM
EK KHAT TERE NAAM LIKHUNGA
HAAL E DIL TAMANNA LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI MIZAAZ KAISA HAI MERA
AUR DHER SARA PYAR LIKHUNGA

BEETI HUI SAAB KI BAAT LIKHUNGA
GUZRI HUI HAR SUBAH QAYANAAT LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI TERE BAIGAIR DIN KAISE GUJARTA HAI MERA
AUR THODA LAFZ E QARAAR LIKHUNGA

SHAAM E TANHA GUZRI KISKE SATH LIKHUNGA
HAR GHADI HAR PAL UMIID E SEHAR KISKA HAI LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI INTIZAAR E ALAM KAISA RAHA
AUR PYAR BHARA EK SALAM LIKHUNGA

TANHA JAAM KI KHAYALAT LIKHUNGA
MUHABAT E JUDAI KE HALAT LIKHUNGA
LIKHUNGA KI KHWAAB E TAMANNA KISKA HAI MUJHKO
AUR TUMHARE SAWALON KE JAWAB ME.....
LAHOO SE TUMHARA NAAM LIKHUNGA 


Yaar,yeh thik baat nahi hai ki meri rachna k gender hi badal k post karo....agar post karna hi hai toh khud ki creation kuch post kariye sir ji....y simply create issues?Huh??.....khair..'m not that big to speak on this issues nor i want to argue ...so itz up to u whether what u wanna do with this piece of poem ....however this nazm has been posted in many of the sites by others .....as this is net..we can't tie ppl's hands nor go in search of these n advise them....

however.....

Celmira ji....thankz for the support ...

Regards,
Zama
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2009, 02:36:37 AM »
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Nice sharing UPYOGji and welcome to YOIndia
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2009, 02:38:06 AM »
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Zama ji... Very good creation. Daad kabul kijiyega
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2009, 04:23:26 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 16, 2009, 02:38:06 AM
Zama ji... Very good creation. Daad kabul kijiyega


Ji ..shukriya Roja ji.....
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«Reply #9 on: March 16, 2009, 04:33:29 AM »
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Remix in form of sharing is not really fair
Good to post originals if you do really care
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«Reply #10 on: March 16, 2009, 05:37:42 AM »
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Isse maiN chori kahuNgaa aur kuch bhii nahiN
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