ek khawab........

by ranjana on May 14, 2006, 07:00:06 AM
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raat fir bheege chandani ki oas mein .
saans aati rahi , teri kushboo mujhe mehakaati rahi

fir dekha kal raat kahwab mein tujhe
tere dil ki dharkane mere dil ko ek madhur sangeet sunaati rahi,

fir teri aankho mein dekhe maine kai sawal
aur teri ungliya mere badan per tharthaarti rahi,

kampati rahi main ek sukhe paate ki tarah,
tere aagosh ki garmi mujhe jaalaati rahi,

janti hun mein ek khawab hai tu,
jo subah hote hi bikhar jayega,
par kashish thee yeh teri baato.n ki
jo mujhe khawab mein bhi haqaikat dikhaati rahi............
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2006, 07:10:11 AM »
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ranjana... jalaati rahi... abhootpoorv...

aashayen panchiyan bani...
sapnon ke aasmaan me ud'te rahe
un badalon ke us paar
sham apni rang badalte rahe...

dekhte dekhte yeh aasmaan aise lage
ki isko kar sakte mutti mein...
ud'te ud'te chand tare aise lage
ki pyar hoti hain sirf dharti mein...

jalte jalte ek din yeh sitare aise honge
ki har sitaron mein hazar suraj honge...
socha tab hum pyar hoti kyon sirf dharti par
main aur tu jeene ke liye zindagi bhar....
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2006, 08:30:49 AM »
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Bahut khub ranjanaji.....

Khvaab thaa yaa Khayaal thaa kyaa thaa
hijr thaa yaa visaal thaa kyaa thaa

chamakii bijalii sii par na samajhe ham
husn thaa yaa jamaal thaa kyaa thaa

jis ko ham roz-e-hijr samajhe the
maah thaa vo ke saal thaa kyaa thaa

'Mussafi' kal jo chup saa baiThaa thaa
kyaa tujhe kuchh malaal thaa kyaa thaa
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«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2006, 08:39:44 AM »
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that was realy sensous and touching shyari...cool
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2006, 01:52:42 AM »
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Quote from: "mrkotians"
ranjana... jalaati rahi... abhootpoorv...

aashayen panchiyan bani...
sapnon ke aasmaan me ud'te rahe
un badalon ke us paar
sham apni rang badalte rahe...

dekhte dekhte yeh aasmaan aise lage
ki isko kar sakte mutti mein...
ud'te ud'te chand tare aise lage
ki pyar hoti hain sirf dharti mein...

jalte jalte ek din yeh sitare aise honge
ki har sitaron mein hazar suraj honge...
socha tab hum pyar hoti kyon sirf dharti par
main aur tu jeene ke liye zindagi bhar....


bahut sundar MK JI....................
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2006, 01:54:11 AM »
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Bahut khub ranjanaji.....

Khvaab thaa yaa Khayaal thaa kyaa thaa
hijr thaa yaa visaal thaa kyaa thaa

chamakii bijalii sii par na samajhe ham
husn thaa yaa jamaal thaa kyaa thaa

jis ko ham roz-e-hijr samajhe the
maah thaa vo ke saal thaa kyaa thaa

'Mussafi' kal jo chup saa baiThaa thaa
kyaa tujhe kuchh malaal thaa kyaa thaa


ANUSHKA ITS REALLY VERY BEAUTIFUL........................
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2006, 01:55:04 AM »
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shukriya Yaatri ji.................. Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2006, 02:01:01 AM »
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Good job!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2006, 02:05:29 AM »
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Anushka, once again I have seen similar lines from a forum...Here u go:




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Bahut khub ranjanaji.....

Khvaab thaa yaa Khayaal thaa kyaa thaa
hijr thaa yaa visaal thaa kyaa thaa

chamakii bijalii sii par na samajhe ham
husn thaa yaa jamaal thaa kyaa thaa

jis ko ham roz-e-hijr samajhe the
maah thaa vo ke saal thaa kyaa thaa

'Mussafi' kal jo chup saa baiThaa thaa
kyaa tujhe kuchh malaal thaa kyaa thaa


ANUSHKA ITS REALLY VERY BEAUTIFUL........................
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2006, 02:23:22 AM »
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raat fir bheege chandani ki oas mein .
saans aati rahi , teri kushboo mujhe mehakaati rahi

fir dekha kal raat kahwab mein tujhe
tere dil ki dharkane mere dil ko ek madhur sangeet sunaati rahi,

fir teri aankho mein dekhe maine kai sawal
aur teri ungliya mere badan per tharthaarti rahi,

kampati rahi main ek sukhe paate ki tarah,
tere aagosh ki garmi mujhe jaalaati rahi,

janti hun mein ek khawab hai tu,
jo subah hote hi bikhar jayega,
par kashish thee yeh teri baato.n ki
jo mujhe khawab mein bhi haqaikat dikhaati rahi............



Wah, humesha kii tarah mast ekdam! Superb Every one!
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2006, 02:27:13 AM »
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SHUKRIYA NEER .............. Usual Smile tum bhi kuch kahte is MAST poem par......... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 15, 2006, 04:12:37 AM »
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Aray baba Ranjanaji... shyarji ko bedah gussa atahai jab koi sher kahi seh yaha cut and paste karo to..... i feel that it6s a matter of sharing....
No heart feelings
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«Reply #12 on: May 15, 2006, 12:09:17 PM »
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Aray baba Ranjanaji... shyarji ko bedah gussa atahai jab koi sher kahi seh yaha cut and paste karo to..... i feel that it6s a matter of sharing....
No heart feelings


Anushka ji aap jo bhi share kare us per" Not Mine" likh de . kisi ko koi objection nahi hoga............. Usual Smile

SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2006, 12:14:38 PM »
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raat fir bheege chandani ki oas mein .
saans aati rahi , teri kushboo mujhe mehakaati rahi

fir dekha kal raat kahwab mein tujhe
tere dil ki dharkane mere dil ko ek madhur sangeet sunaati rahi,

fir teri aankho mein dekhe maine kai sawal
aur teri ungliya mere badan per tharthaarti rahi,

kampati rahi main ek sukhe paate ki tarah,
tere aagosh ki garmi mujhe jaalaati rahi,

janti hun mein ek khawab hai tu,
jo subah hote hi bikhar jayega,
par kashish thee yeh teri baato.n ki
jo mujhe khawab mein bhi haqaikat dikhaati rahi............


bahut khoobsurat likha ranju ji......
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«Reply #14 on: May 15, 2006, 12:17:53 PM »
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shukriya Gesu.....aapne is per Gesu koshish nahi ki................. :D plz likhiye na kuch....... Usual Smile
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