Ek khuaish hai terri baho mein sone ki...

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Ruk ruk k hamare badhte kadamo mein,
chahat thi hamari ek hone ki,

darr bhi tha aur tadap bhi thi,
kareeb reh kar ek duje mein khone ki,

ek pal mein khinch liya kisi dhaage ne hame,
aur de di ijazat mhbt ko sanso mein pirone ki,

terre kapkapate hotho ne jab merra chehra chhua,
yu laga jaise kimat mil gyi ho mujhe khuab sanjone ki,

tune har hasrat poori ki hai merri..
bus ab ek hi khuaish hai merri terri baho mein sone ki.........
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2010, 08:00:20 PM »
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Bahaut meethi aur mohobat bhari peshkash Geet jee..Bahaut bahaut khoob.! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2010, 08:01:08 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya rahiim ji...
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2010, 08:08:11 PM »
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Janaab Aadaab!

Behad masoom se khayaal o ahsaas hai aapki is kalaam ke...
Daad kabool kijiye....

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye..... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2010, 08:14:14 PM »
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Adaab parwaaz ji bahut bahut shukriya ji...
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2010, 04:07:22 AM »
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bht pyaar bhari peshkash....

kuch chahat bhara ehsaas dil me jaga gai...
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2010, 01:12:14 PM »
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Beintehaan Aur Mohabbat Bhari Khwaaish Hai Aapki Geet Ji.. Ek ek Lafz Ishq Ke Rango Me Bheega Sa Laga.. Bahut Lajawab aur Khubsoorat Peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2010, 05:38:17 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji aur mann ji...
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2010, 05:49:22 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooooooooooob Geetji..

Kya kehne..Bahut hi khoobsurat Andaaz-e-bayaan..ek sama sa bandh gaya tha padhe-padhte..bahut ache Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2010, 02:36:48 AM »
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Aap YO me aajkal aate kam ho... ya kaho aana hi band kar diya hai.. aur aaye ho to atom bomb leke... aate hi dhamaaka kar diya.... aisa blast hua hai ki kya kahen.... jaane kitne ghayal huye honge... unme se hum bhi ek hain... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... madhosh kar dene waaala kalam leke aaye hain aap... mazaa aa gaya padhke....!!!

 Applause Applause Applause

kuch likhe bina nahi raha gaya humse....


tere pehle sparsh ki mehek hamaare saanson me bas gayi hai,
hawaaon me ghul ke wo mehek humein madhosh si kar gayi hai,

tere naram gulaabi hothon ko chhua tha humne apne hothon se,
maano hamaare pyaase hothon ki ek khwaish poori si ho gayi hai,

tamanna hamaari bhi hai tujhe baahon me bharke pyaar karne ki,
tere kareeb na hone se jaise ye barsaat bhi niras si ho gayi hai,

aaja aake lag ja hamaare seene se hamaari saanson ko ek kar de,
ab to lagta hai ki jaise tujhse milke sadiyaan si ho gayi hai,

faila de aake ek baar apni julfon ke baadal hamaare chehre pe,
ab to tere aane ke intezaar ki intehaa si ho gayi hai,

aaja aake so ja hamaari baahon me aur poori kar le har khwaish,
ab to tere intezaar me hamaari neend bhi begaani ho gayi hai,

bharke tujhe baahon me hum teri har  kasak mita de,
tere saanson ki mehek se humein kashish si ho gayi hai...
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2010, 09:08:27 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 24, 2010, 05:49:22 PM
Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooooooooooob Geetji..

Kya kehne..Bahut hi khoobsurat Andaaz-e-bayaan..ek sama sa bandh gaya tha padhe-padhte..bahut ache Thumbs UP

Bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji...
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2010, 09:41:02 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 25, 2010, 02:36:48 AM
Aap YO me aajkal aate kam ho... ya kaho aana hi band kar diya hai.. aur aaye ho to atom bomb leke... aate hi dhamaaka kar diya.... aisa blast hua hai ki kya kahen.... jaane kitne ghayal huye honge... unme se hum bhi ek hain... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... madhosh kar dene waaala kalam leke aaye hain aap... mazaa aa gaya padhke....!!!

 Applause Applause Applause

kuch likhe bina nahi raha gaya humse....


tere pehle sparsh ki mehek hamaare saanson me bas gayi hai,
hawaaon me ghul ke wo mehek humein madhosh si kar gayi hai,

tere naram gulaabi hothon ko chhua tha humne apne hothon se,
maano hamaare pyaase hothon ki ek khwaish poori si ho gayi hai,

tamanna hamaari bhi hai tujhe baahon me bharke pyaar karne ki,
tere kareeb na hone se jaise ye barsaat bhi niras si ho gayi hai,

aaja aake lag ja hamaare seene se hamaari saanson ko ek kar de,
ab to lagta hai ki jaise tujhse milke sadiyaan si ho gayi hai,

faila de aake ek baar apni julfon ke baadal hamaare chehre pe,
ab to tere aane ke intezaar ki intehaa si ho gayi hai,

aaja aake so ja hamaari baahon me aur poori kar le har khwaish,
ab to tere intezaar me hamaari neend bhi begaani ho gayi hai,

bharke tujhe baahon me hum teri har  kasak mita de,
tere saanson ki mehek se humein kashish si ho gayi hai...

Merri rachna ko behad pasand karne k liye apka tahe dil se shukriya kapil ji,aajkal waqt ki kami k kaaran aana kam hota hai per phir bhi koshish karti hu ki jitna zayada ho sake waqt yoindia per bitau...aur apne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...


Vo pyar se pukarna terra merre naam ko,
jaise padhna ho terra kisi chaht k paigham ko,

kuch kahe bina samjh lena ulfat benaam ko,
aur nigaho se kubul karna merre salaam ko,

har dafaa bebaak kar dena benoor si shaam ko,
pal mein kar dena riha berukhi k har ilzaam ko,

ae khuda ab tou de koi sila merre ishq k anjaam ko,
taaki paa sake hum bhi mhbt mein bekhudi k makaam ko.........
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2010, 02:07:14 AM »
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shukriya Geet ji aur ek aur zabardast peshkash rahi aapki... mazaa aa gaya padh ke... bahut khoob....!!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


uparwaale ne mohabbat ka khoobsurat jahaan banaaya hai,
mohabbat ko bhagwaan chaahne waalon ne banaaya hai,

kya hoga deewanepan ka anjaam ye soch ke na niraash ho,
usne kuch khaas soch ke ji humein yahaan milaaya hai,

naam tera ab to jud gaya hai mere har paighaam se,
tere sang humne khwaabon ka gulistaan sajaaya hai,

har kali se ab to tere naam ki pukaar sunaai deti hai,
tune hi apni mohabbat se har gulaab ko mehkaaya hai,

kya maangu ab main bhagwaan se apni duwaon mein,
usse kuch maange bina hi maine tujhe paaya hai...
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2010, 04:03:45 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 25, 2010, 09:41:02 PM
Merri rachna ko behad pasand karne k liye apka tahe dil se shukriya kapil ji,aajkal waqt ki kami k kaaran aana kam hota hai per phir bhi koshish karti hu ki jitna zayada ho sake waqt yoindia per bitau...aur apne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...


Vo pyar se pukarna terra merre naam ko,
jaise padhna ho terra kisi chaht k paigham ko,

kuch kahe bina samjh lena ulfat benaam ko,
aur nigaho se kubul karna merre salaam ko,

har dafaa bebaak kar dena benoor si shaam ko,
pal mein kar dena riha berukhi k har ilzaam ko,

ae khuda ab tou de koi sila merre ishq k anjaam ko,
taaki paa sake hum bhi mhbt mein bekhudi k makaam ko.........



mind blowing reply geet ji.....excellent......
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2010, 04:04:59 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 26, 2010, 02:07:14 AM
shukriya Geet ji aur ek aur zabardast peshkash rahi aapki... mazaa aa gaya padh ke... bahut khoob....!!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


uparwaale ne mohabbat ka khoobsurat jahaan banaaya hai,
mohabbat ko bhagwaan chaahne waalon ne banaaya hai,

kya hoga deewanepan ka anjaam ye soch ke na niraash ho,
usne kuch khaas soch ke ji humein yahaan milaaya hai,

naam tera ab to jud gaya hai mere har paighaam se,
tere sangh humne khwaabon ka gulistaan sajaaya hai,

har kali se ab to tere naam ki pukaar sunaai deti hai,
tune hi apni mohabbat se har gulaab ko mehkaaya hai,

kya maangu ab main bhagwaan se apni duwaon mein,
usse kuch maange bina hi maine tujhe paaya hai...

kuch new feelings ...kuch new thoughts kapil.....

mast reply....excellent one....
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