Ek khuaish hai terri baho mein sone ki...

by brokenbyluv on August 23, 2010, 07:53:56 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 26, 2010, 05:50:43 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji.... thank you so much....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 26, 2010, 04:04:59 AM
kuch new feelings ...kuch new thoughts kapil.....

mast reply....excellent one....
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«Reply #16 on: August 26, 2010, 01:38:47 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 26, 2010, 04:03:45 AM
mind blowing reply geet ji.....excellent......

bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji...
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«Reply #17 on: August 28, 2010, 10:47:55 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 26, 2010, 02:07:14 AM
shukriya Geet ji aur ek aur zabardast peshkash rahi aapki... mazaa aa gaya padh ke... bahut khoob....!!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


uparwaale ne mohabbat ka khoobsurat jahaan banaaya hai,
mohabbat ko bhagwaan chaahne waalon ne banaaya hai,

kya hoga deewanepan ka anjaam ye soch ke na niraash ho,
usne kuch khaas soch ke ji humein yahaan milaaya hai,

naam tera ab to jud gaya hai mere har paighaam se,
tere sang humne khwaabon ka gulistaan sajaaya hai,

har kali se ab to tere naam ki pukaar sunaai deti hai,
tune hi apni mohabbat se har gulaab ko mehkaaya hai,

kya maangu ab main bhagwaan se apni duwaon mein,
usse kuch maange bina hi maine tujhe paaya hai...

bahut khoob kapil ji...
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«Reply #18 on: August 28, 2010, 11:00:47 AM »
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Nice poem and good presentation Geet-di... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 23, 2010, 07:53:56 PM



Ruk ruk k hamare badhte kadamo mein,
chahat thi hamari ek hone ki,

darr bhi tha aur tadap bhi thi,
kareeb reh kar ek duje mein khone ki,

ek pal mein khinch liya kisi dhaage ne hame,
aur de di ijazat mhbt ko sanso mein pirone ki,

terre kapkapate hotho ne jab merra chehra chhua,
yu laga jaise kimat mil gyi ho mujhe khuab sanjone ki,

tune har hasrat poori ki hai merri..
bus ab ek hi khuaish hai merri terri baho mein sone ki.........
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«Reply #19 on: August 28, 2010, 11:10:52 AM »
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Thnx alot sweetu...
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«Reply #20 on: August 28, 2010, 01:30:52 PM »
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shukriya Geet ji....!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 28, 2010, 10:47:55 AM
bahut khoob kapil ji...
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«Reply #21 on: August 31, 2010, 10:26:58 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 23, 2010, 07:53:56 PM



Ruk ruk k hamare badhte kadamo mein,
chahat thi hamari ek hone ki,

darr bhi tha aur tadap bhi thi,
kareeb reh kar ek duje mein khone ki,

ek pal mein khinch liya kisi dhaage ne hame,
aur de di ijazat mhbt ko sanso mein pirone ki,

terre kapkapate hotho ne jab merra chehra chhua,
yu laga jaise kimat mil gyi ho mujhe khuab sanjone ki,

tune har hasrat poori ki hai merri..
bus ab ek hi khuaish hai merri terri baho mein sone ki.........

Bahut khoob Geet Ji
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«Reply #22 on: September 01, 2010, 02:17:29 AM »
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shukriya rajesh ji..
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«Reply #23 on: September 01, 2010, 03:09:36 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 26, 2010, 02:07:14 AM
shukriya Geet ji aur ek aur zabardast peshkash rahi aapki... mazaa aa gaya padh ke... bahut khoob....!!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


uparwaale ne mohabbat ka khoobsurat jahaan banaaya hai,
mohabbat ko bhagwaan chaahne waalon ne banaaya hai,

kya hoga deewanepan ka anjaam ye soch ke na niraash ho,
usne kuch khaas soch ke ji humein yahaan milaaya hai,

naam tera ab to jud gaya hai mere har paighaam se,
tere sang humne khwaabon ka gulistaan sajaaya hai,

har kali se ab to tere naam ki pukaar sunaai deti hai,
tune hi apni mohabbat se har gulaab ko mehkaaya hai,

kya maangu ab main bhagwaan se apni duwaon mein,
usse kuch maange bina hi maine tujhe paaya hai...


Mhbto ka jahan ashiqo k liye hota hai,
phir bhi har ashiq khud se bekhabar kyun hota hai,

kuch sawal ishq k aese hai jinka koi jawab nhi,
per mhbt mein diwangi ka bhi tou koi hisab nhi,

chahto mein aksar madhoshio ka alam hota hai,
ishq ki raaho mein har koi manzil ko pane k khwab sanjota hai,

suno pyar karne walo tum bus pyar kiye jao..
jis tarah piya hai maine mhbt ka nasha bus tum bhi piye jao.........
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«Reply #24 on: September 02, 2010, 02:53:07 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah ji wah ek dum zabardast jawaab likha hai apne Geet ji...!!!

teri mohabbat ke nashe me saara jahaan madhosh hai aaj,
jo khilaaf tha mohabbat ka wo jahaan khaamosh hai aaj,

ab to mohabbat karne waale bekhauff mohabbat karenge,
chaahe ban jaaye dushman zamana ab na kisi se darenge,

aajao ki ye rut aayi hai hamare mohabbat ke doob jaane ki,
saanson ko saanson me samaane do baari hai ek ho jaane ki,

un sawaalon ko ab dil me hi dafn rehne do jinka koi jawaab na ho,
ji lo zindagi chaar pal ki muskuraake chaahe poora koi khwaab na ho...
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«Reply #25 on: September 02, 2010, 05:36:00 PM »
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Shukriya ji aur apne bhi ekdum mast jawab diyya hai..bhari bharkam wala...
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«Reply #26 on: September 03, 2010, 02:29:58 AM »
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itna to bhaari nahi tha ji ki aapne kuch likha hi nahi.... ya shayad humne pehle dekha tha kuch likha hua tha wo aapne delete kar diya .... Usual Smile

Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 02, 2010, 05:36:00 PM
Shukriya ji aur apne bhi ekdum mast jawab diyya hai..bhari bharkam wala...
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«Reply #27 on: September 03, 2010, 10:24:49 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 03, 2010, 02:29:58 AM
itna to bhaari nahi tha ji ki aapne kuch likha hi nahi.... ya shayad humne pehle dekha tha kuch likha hua tha wo aapne delete kar diya .... Usual Smile


Sahi kaha ji vo reply maine change kar diya hai...


Khuabo ki taabir bahut kamzor hoti hai,
zara si thes lagte hi toot jate hai,

jiske naam k sapne hum sajate hai palko pe,
unki zara si berukhi se jazbaat ruth jate hai,

zindgi mein aksar faaslo k rehte,
anmol rishte piche chhut jate hai,

hum khud hi hifazat nhi kar pate apni khushiyo ki..
aur sochte hai ki gair aake hamari muskaan loot jate hai.........
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«Reply #28 on: September 12, 2010, 06:16:07 PM »
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Bahut bahut shurkiya shihab ji,.,.
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«Reply #29 on: September 12, 2010, 08:42:25 PM »
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bhut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause


aajao apne bich ke faaslon ko mitaate hain,
ek dusre ke hum aur kareeb chale aate hain,

tum meri aankhon be doob jaao aaj ek baar,
hum aaj apne aankhon ko tumse sajaate hain,

tumhaare paas hote hain to tum me kho jaate hain,
tumse dur hoke bas tumhaare geet gungunaate hain,

rishton me utaar chadhaw aate hi rehte hain,
yahi baat hum tumhe har baar samjhaate hain,

kyun chhoti chhoti baaton pe rooth jaati ho,
hum to tumhe khud se bhi zyaada chahte hain...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 03, 2010, 10:24:49 AM
Sahi kaha ji vo reply maine change kar diya hai...


Khuabo ki taabir bahut kamzor hoti hai,
zara si thes lagte hi toot jate hai,

jiske naam k sapne hum sajate hai palko pe,
unki zara si berukhi se jazbaat ruth jate hai,

zindgi mein aksar faaslo k rehte,
anmol rishte piche chhut jate hai,

hum khud hi hifazat nhi kar pate apni khushiyo ki..
aur sochte hai ki gair aake hamari muskaan loot jate hai.........
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