Ek khuaish hai terri baho mein sone ki...

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«Reply #30 on: September 12, 2010, 09:02:36 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 12, 2010, 08:42:25 PM
bhut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause


aajao apne bich ke faaslon ko mitaate hain,
ek dusre ke hum aur kareeb chale aate hain,

tum meri aankhon be doob jaao aaj ek baar,
hum aaj apne aankhon ko tumse sajaate hain,

tumhaare paas hote hain to tum me kho jaate hain,
tumse dur hoke bas tumhaare geet gungunaate hain,

rishton me utaar chadhaw aate hi rehte hain,
yahi baat hum tumhe har baar samjhaate hain,

kyun chhoti chhoti baaton pe rooth jaati ho,
hum to tumhe khud se bhi zyaada chahte hain...


shukriya ji aur apne bhi acha likha hai...abhi k liye maafi chahungi jald hi laut kar jawab dungi...take care...
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«Reply #31 on: September 12, 2010, 09:07:35 PM »
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shukriya ji... jab aapko waqt mile aap reply kijiye... humein koi jaldi nahi hai... bye... you too take care of urself...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 12, 2010, 09:02:36 PM
shukriya ji aur apne bhi acha likha hai...abhi k liye maafi chahungi jald hi laut kar jawab dungi...take care...
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«Reply #32 on: September 12, 2010, 09:21:14 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 12, 2010, 08:42:25 PM
bhut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause


aajao apne bich ke faaslon ko mitaate hain,
ek dusre ke hum aur kareeb chale aate hain,

tum meri aankhon be doob jaao aaj ek baar,
hum aaj apne aankhon ko tumse sajaate hain,

tumhaare paas hote hain to tum me kho jaate hain,
tumse dur hoke bas tumhaare geet gungunaate hain,

rishton me utaar chadhaw aate hi rehte hain,
yahi baat hum tumhe har baar samjhaate hain,

kyun chhoti chhoti baaton pe rooth jaati ho,
hum to tumhe khud se bhi zyaada chahte hain...


Klaskar Jee aadaab!

Aapi yeH creation aapki abtaki humne padhi huyi creations meiN se sab se khoob hai..... Dil se daad janab is par..
Aise hi likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #33 on: September 12, 2010, 09:35:37 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji....!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 12, 2010, 09:21:14 PM
Klaskar Jee aadaab!

Aapi yeH creation aapki abtaki humne padhi huyi creations meiN se sab se khoob hai..... Dil se daad janab is par..
Aise hi likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #34 on: September 13, 2010, 12:03:58 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 12, 2010, 08:42:25 PM
bhut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause


aajao apne bich ke faaslon ko mitaate hain,
ek dusre ke hum aur kareeb chale aate hain,

tum meri aankhon be doob jaao aaj ek baar,
hum aaj apne aankhon ko tumse sajaate hain,

tumhaare paas hote hain to tum me kho jaate hain,
tumse dur hoke bas tumhaare geet gungunaate hain,

rishton me utaar chadhaw aate hi rehte hain,
yahi baat hum tumhe har baar samjhaate hain,

kyun chhoti chhoti baaton pe rooth jaati ho,
hum to tumhe khud se bhi zyaada chahte hain...


Naa is kadar apni chahto ko tu mujhpe nisar kar,
darr rakh kuch zamane ka iss kadak na sar-e-aam ikrar kar,

dekhti hu terri diwangi ko har pal main terri ankho mein,
mehsus karti hu terri betaabi terri manchali baato mein,

mujhe bhi terre khayalo se fursat kahan milti hai,
terri baate yad kar kar k merre labo ki kali khilti hai,

terre ehsaso mein har ehsas mujhe naya lagta hai,
terre bole bina hi merra jism terri baho mein pighalta hai,

har pal har lamha main tujhe apne paas paati hu,
aur terre pyar k bahav mein beheti jaati hu beheti jaati hu.........
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«Reply #35 on: September 13, 2010, 12:33:21 PM »
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sabhi ne bahot bahot bahot achha likha he.....


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«Reply #36 on: September 13, 2010, 12:42:55 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya DEvangi ji....!!!

Quote from: thinkhattk on September 13, 2010, 12:33:21 PM
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«Reply #37 on: September 13, 2010, 12:44:36 PM »
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aapne itna pyara likha hai ki sach me aaj mere pas tarif ke liye shabd nahi hai... sirf pyaar hai.. bas pyaar... aur ye kuch panktiyaan hain...


ye bahaaw meri mohabbat ka hai,
tumhe mere sang bahake le jaayega,

tumhaare hothon se jo muskaan gum hai,
use fir se tumhaare hothon ko de jaayega,

dekhti to tum mere deewaanepan ko har lamha meri aankhon me,
yahi deewaanapan tumhe mere sang deewaana kar jaayega,

mehsoos to karte ho meri betaabi meri manchali baaton me,
ek din yahi betaabi tumhe mere liye betaab kar jaayegi,

aaj meri baatein yaad karne se tumhare lab khilte hain,
mere lab tumhaare labo ko chhu ke unhe gulab kar jaayegi,

na pighalne do apne jism ko tum aaj is tarha,
meri baahon me aake wo jannat mehsoos kar jaayega,

haan tum dekhti reh jaogi meri aankhon ko gaur se,
aur ye aashiq aankhon ke zariye tumhaare dil me utar jaayega,

ek baar fir se mera ye paagalpan tumhaare liye jawan hai,
tumse milke mera deewaanapan tumhe bhi paagal kar jaayega....


Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 13, 2010, 12:03:58 PM

Naa is kadar apni chahto ko tu mujhpe nisar kar,
darr rakh kuch zamane ka iss kadak na sar-e-aam ikrar kar,

dekhti hu terri diwangi ko har pal main terri ankho mein,
mehsus karti hu terri betaabi terri manchali baato mein,

mujhe bhi terre khayalo se fursat kahan milti hai,
terri baate yad kar kar k merre labo ki kali khilti hai,

terre ehsaso mein har ehsas mujhe naya lagta hai,
terre bole bina hi merra jism terri baho mein pighalta hai,

har pal har lamha main tujhe apne paas paati hu,
aur terre pyar k bahav mein beheti jaati hu beheti jaati hu.........
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«Reply #38 on: September 14, 2010, 08:19:12 PM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on September 13, 2010, 12:33:21 PM
sabhi ne bahot bahot bahot achha likha he.....


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thnx alot dev...
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«Reply #39 on: September 16, 2010, 04:58:38 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 13, 2010, 12:44:36 PM
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aapne itna pyara likha hai ki sach me aaj mere pas tarif ke liye shabd nahi hai... sirf pyaar hai.. bas pyaar... aur ye kuch panktiyaan hain...


ye bahaaw meri mohabbat ka hai,
tumhe mere sang bahake le jaayega,

tumhaare hothon se jo muskaan gum hai,
use fir se tumhaare hothon ko de jaayega,

dekhti to tum mere deewaanepan ko har lamha meri aankhon me,
yahi deewaanapan tumhe mere sang deewaana kar jaayega,

mehsoos to karte ho meri betaabi meri manchali baaton me,
ek din yahi betaabi tumhe mere liye betaab kar jaayega,

aaj meri baatein yaad karne se tumhare lab khilte hain,
mera lab tumhaare labo ko chhu ke unhe gulab kar jaayega,

na pighalne do apne jism ko tum aaj is tarha,
meri baahon me aake wo jannat mehsoos kar jaayega,

haan tum dekhti reh jaogi meri aankhon ko gaur se,
aur ye aashiq aankhon ke zariye tumhaare dil me utar jaayega,

ek baar fir se mera ye paagalpan tumhaare liye jawan hai,
tumse milke mera deewaanapan tumhe bhi paagal kar jaayega....



Shukriya kapil ji aur bahut khoob likha hai apne..per ek baat kehna chahungi aap bahut khoob likhte hai bus zara chhoti chhoti chizo per gaur kiya kijiye jaise in lines mein apne kar jayega likha hai tou lines padhne mein aur mujhe yakin hai ki apko likhne mein bhi thodi alag lagi hogi agar aap in dono lines mein jayegi kar de tou kavita ki rhythem bhi rahegi aur line padhne mein aur bhi achi lagegi..umeed karti hu apko merri baat buri nhi lagi hogi..waise tou aap behetareen likhte hai bus likhe k baad ek baar khud hi cross check kar liya kijiye gar hamari likhi kavita hamare dil ko chhu jati hai tou yakinan dusre k dil tak tou zarur pahuchegi..shukriya ji..

mehsoos to karte ho meri betaabi meri manchali baaton me,
ek din yahi betaabi tumhe mere liye betaab kar jaayegi,

aaj meri baatein yaad karne se tumhare lab khilte hain,
merre lab tumhaari pankhuriyo ko chhu ke unhe gulab kar jaayegi,


Ab aur kya baaki hai kuch kehne ko,
ab aur na de dard-e-judai sehne ko,

terre har ehsas ka mujhe bhi utna hi ikhtisaar hai,
tabhi mana maine ki haan tu hi merra sacha pyar hai,

jab bhi sochti thi tujhko bhulane ka,
yad aata tha vo lamha dard bhare zamane ka,

tujhse mil kar hi tou ek naya jahan mila hai,
mujhe bhi apne khuabo ka asmaan mila hai,

har peher terri yado mein choor rehti hu,
haal-e-dil k hatho majbur rehti hu,

jane kab hamari mhbt ka bhi anjaam hoga,
jane kab hamare hatho mein ek duje ka naam hoga.........
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«Reply #40 on: September 18, 2010, 09:06:50 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji.... aapki baatein mujhe bilkul buri nahi lagi balke achchi lagi ki aap ek dosti k haq se meri rachna ko sudhaarne ki koshish kar rahi hain.... thanks a lot... maine correction kar diya hai... aur aapne bahut achcha likha hai...!!!

hamaara dil humne ek duje ko to de hi rakha hai kabse,
kya hua agar hum har lamha ek dusre ke saath nahi hote,

pyaar to har koi karta hai par har koi usko samajhta nahi,
mohabbat agar sachchi ho to usse badhke jasbaat nahi hote,

haathon ki lakeeron me mohabbat ka naam nahi hota,
mohabbat to wo bhi karte hain jinke haath nahi hote...
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«Reply #41 on: September 21, 2010, 06:12:44 PM »
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shukriya ji aur bahut khoob likha hai...


Jabse tune pukara merra naam mehfil mein,
tabse kuch aram hai dard-e-dil mein,

ab dekhti hu khuab tou darr nhi lagta,
mila jo hai ashiya mujhe terre dil mein,

bhar leti hu terre chehre ko ankho mein,
rehti hu khush door rehkar b terri yado k haasil mein,

pal pal tu hi basa hai merri dhadkano mein,
dhundhti hu terre hi naam ko main har saahil mein.........
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«Reply #42 on: September 23, 2010, 09:45:44 PM »
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bahut khoob....!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


har mehfil mein ab bas Geet hamaara hi hoga,
hamaare hothon pe ab naam bas tera hi hoga,

jin khwaabon ko tu ne saja rakha tha aankhon me,
un khwaabon ka anjaam ab haqeeqat me hi hoga,

duur hain tujhse to kya hua dil se duur nahi,
har lamha tera chehra hamaaare aankhon me hi hoga,

chaahe laakh zamaana karle koshish humein alag karne ki,
meri haasil hai tu, ab chaahat ka ye safar poora hi hoga...
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«Reply #43 on: September 24, 2010, 12:54:33 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji & Kapil Bhai.. Yeh Silsila Thamne na Paye.. Bahut Khooooooob Likh Rahe Hain aap dono.. Applause Applause




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«Reply #44 on: September 24, 2010, 01:02:33 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya mann ji.......
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