ek ladki ki dastaan --part two

by salil2002 on February 09, 2009, 09:57:09 AM
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its a part of my shayari
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-khumar-e-ishq/ek-ladki-ki-dastaan-t22631.0.html
i had given link for those viewers who had not read the first part...............



bheegi aankhon wali jo ladki
mujhe ab bhi yaad aati hai
jinpe zamane daad deta hai mujhe
meri oon ghazlon se uski awaz aati hai

bahut din beete bicchade huye humko
par lagta hai jaise kal kii baat ho
mein koshish bahut karta hoon bhoolne kii
magar lagta hai jaise woh aas paas ho

na jaane kyun dooriyaan aayi
na jaane kyun mein chala aaya
mohabbat toh hum dono ko thi
par dosti k dar se dil ki baat na keh paaya

kabhi socha hi nahin maine bin tere jeene ko
saanson ko teri khud se alag na kar paaya
tu aayi thi ban k dost meri
khata meri thi dosti mein pyaar dhoond aaya

haan khumaari ootri nahin ishq kii
na koi aur mere dil ko bhaaya
isliye hi mere dost
meri har nazm mein hai tera saaya





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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2009, 10:22:54 AM »
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Bahoth qoob salil dard hi dard bikher rahe ho !!maza agaya !!

Eak mera bahoth purana sher nazar karta hon salil !!

Tofano me diye jala-a- baithe ho !!
aur hawaon se dosti ki umeed laga-a-baithe ho !!
khuch to apne bare me suncho "Qadeer"
kyon pather ko mom banane baithe ho !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2009, 11:35:54 AM »
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its a part of my shayari
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-khumar-e-ishq/ek-ladki-ki-dastaan-t22631.0.html
i had given link for those viewers who had not read the first part...............



bheegi aankhon wali jo ladki
mujhe ab bhi yaad aati hai
kabhi mein uski hansi main bhi shamil rehta tha
meri ghazlon se uski awaz aati hai

bahut din beete bicchade huye humko
par lagta hai jaise kal kii baat ho
mein koshish bahut karta hoon bhoolne kii
magar lagta hai jaise woh aas paas ho

na jaane kyun dooriyaan aayi
na jaane kyun mein chala aaya
mohabbat toh hum dono ko thi
par dosti k dar se dil ki baat na keh paaya

kabhi socha hi nahin maine bin tere jeene ko
saanson ko teri khud se alag na kar paaya
tu aayi thi ban k dost meri
khata meri thi dosti mein pyaar dhoond aaya

haan khumaari ootri nahin ishq kii
na koi aur mere dil ko bhaaya
isliye hi mere dost
meri har nazm mein hai tera saaya







bahut accha likha hai aapne salil ji.... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2009, 11:36:46 AM »
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Bahoth qoob salil dard hi dard bikher rahe ho !!maza agaya !!

Eak mera bahoth purana sher nazar karta hon salil !!

Tofano me diye jala-a- baithe ho !!
aur hawaon se dosti ki umeed laga-a-baithe ho !!
khuch to apne bare me suncho "Qadeer"
kyon pather ko mom banane baithe ho !!

Qadeer Toopchi

good lines qadeer ji...
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2009, 11:41:13 AM »
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BOhat Achche Salil Bhai, And Abdul Qadeer Bhaiya,.

yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2009, 01:57:54 PM »
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thanks fairy and janasheen bhai...........
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2009, 02:03:04 PM »
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Bahoth qoob salil dard hi dard bikher rahe ho !!maza agaya !!

Eak mera bahoth purana sher nazar karta hon salil !!

Tofano me diye jala-a- baithe ho !!
aur hawaon se dosti ki umeed laga-a-baithe ho !!
khuch to apne bare me suncho "Qadeer"
kyon pather ko mom banane baithe ho !!

Qadeer Toopchi
thanks qadeer bhai ...........aapne bahut hipyaari baat kahi hai

shama se kehte nahin kii shabnam ban jaaye
husn hai khuda ka usko Guroor kya hai
hasti hai deewano kii ishq main jalne kii
jal jaaye parvaana toh uska qasoor kya hai
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2009, 02:13:54 PM »
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its a part of my shayari
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-khumar-e-ishq/ek-ladki-ki-dastaan-t22631.0.html
i had given link for those viewers who had not read the first part...............



bheegi aankhon wali jo ladki
mujhe ab bhi yaad aati hai
jinpe zamane daad deta hai mujhe
meri oon ghazlon se uski awaz aati hai

bahut din beete bicchade huye humko
par lagta hai jaise kal kii baat ho
mein koshish bahut karta hoon bhoolne kii
magar lagta hai jaise woh aas paas ho

na jaane kyun dooriyaan aayi
na jaane kyun mein chala aaya
mohabbat toh hum dono ko thi
par dosti k dar se dil ki baat na keh paaya

kabhi socha hi nahin maine bin tere jeene ko
saanson ko teri khud se alag na kar paaya
tu aayi thi ban k dost meri
khata meri thi dosti mein pyaar dhoond aaya

haan khumaari ootri nahin ishq kii
na koi aur mere dil ko bhaaya
isliye hi mere dost
meri har nazm mein hai tera saaya






lovely poetry.asghr
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2009, 09:04:14 PM »
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good work salil ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: February 10, 2009, 05:13:09 AM »
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thank u pooja di and asghr ji..........

koi roko mere mehboob ko rooth k na chala jaaye
kii dil dukhaya uska bahut hai maine
magar yeh aankhen oose jaate nahin dekh sakti
in aankhon mein ek sapna sajaya hai maine
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