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Woh beeti huyi shaam apne saath yaadon ko bhi le gayi Woh aansuon main bheegi huyi ek dastaan bhi thi keh gayi Bayaan karta hoon apne lafzon main zazbaaton kii ek kahaani Pariyon si ek ladki kii ek dard bhari kahaani Yeh dastaan thi ek masoom pari kii jispe pyaar ka saaya tha Jo toot gayi thi tabse jabse kissii ne oose thukraaya tha Khamosh ho chuke labon par ek sannaata chha jata tha Ashqon se bheege huye chehre se jab zulfon ko main hatata tha Muskuraati thi woh hardam harpal woh muskati thi Main poochhta tha dard uska woh nagme gungunati thi Jab bheeg jati thi palkein kissii ko yaad karke Dekhti thi meri taraf dil k tukde char karke Main thaamna jo chahta kabhi who door hat jaati thi Mujhse apni dooriyon ka ehsaas bhi dikhati thi Bebas thi woh dil k haathon aur is zamaane se anjaan thi Nafrat bhi kaise karti woh ,oose sirf pyaar kii pehchaan thi Maine chhoda oose kucch waqt akele uski tanhayee main Dil ne roka mujhe bahut par chal diya de kar oose judaaii main Jab lauta main vaapas woh phir se muskuraayi thi Shayad kissii k pyaar kii chamak uski aankhon main ootar aayi thi Oosne bhar k mujhko baahon main pyaar se dekha tha Jab maine oosse uski khushi ka raaz poochha tha Sharmaayi thi woh phir oosne dheere se sar ko jhukaya tha Bataya oosne kii dil uska phir kissii par aaya tha Main khush tha oose dekh kar uski khushiyon main muskuraya tha Par phir kyun ootha ye dard sa dil mein main isko samajh na paya tha Main phir chal diya alag raah par oose chhod kar uski duniya main Tanha reh gaya tha main jaise kyun main ise samajh na paaya tha Door tha main phir oosse par uski yaadon se nahi tha Shayad main pehli baar uski khushiyon se khush nahi tha Beete qayi din woh yaadon k saaye main thi kho gayi Zindgi k ek mod par oosse mulaqat phir se ho gayi Main dekhta raha oose woh mujhko dekhti rahi Maine poochha na oosse kucch aankhon main baat ho gayi Thukraaya tha aaj oosne kissii ko jaane kya baat thi ho gayi Jaise who har gham se har khushi se anjaan ho gayi Kucch na kaha maine oose bas phir se dosti ko thaam liya Mohabbat k qayi roop hai bas is baat ko maan liya Na chahat thi kissii aur kii na kissii k pyaar kii aarzoo thi Bas who mere saath thi na ab kissii kii talaash thi Dastaan ye yahin par khatam nahi hoti hai Ye zindgi kii iske har panne par nayi ibarat likhi hoti hai
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salil2002
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2007, 02:00:08 PM » |
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haan bhai mujhe bhilagat hai kucch zyaada ho gaya likhte likhte pata hi nahi chala ............... :D
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2007, 02:52:08 PM » |
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Its wonderful Salil.....is poem main bohot sachchai hai......God bless you !!
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salil2002
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2007, 02:57:09 PM » |
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Its wonderful Salil.....is poem main bohot sachchai hai......God bless you !! thnks talat ................... dua hai humko mohabbat kii hum salamat rahe................ phir log kyun kehte hai mohabbat jaan leti hai.................
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2007, 06:09:03 PM » |
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Jaan to leti hai mohabbat par zindagi bhi deti hai, leke chain dil ka, khushiyan beshumaar deti hai...
Nice one salil...
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salil2002
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2007, 06:17:17 PM » |
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thnks angel
jo deti mohabbaat zindgi toh phir oose chheenti kyun hai........... jo hum nahi oonke muqaddaar main toh oon par ye dil aata hi kyun hai
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2007, 06:17:48 AM » |
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Bahut bahut khoooooooooob SALIL BHAI.. maza aa gaya padh kar.. behad Mohabbat bhara kalaam likha hai aapne... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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salil2002
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2007, 07:38:29 AM » |
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shukriya vicky bhai
kalaam hai ye mohabbat ka aahiste se padna....... ek baar dekh lena mujhko jo qabool ho ise karna
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angel4u
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2007, 05:29:02 PM » |
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thnks angel
jo deti mohabbaat zindgi toh phir oose chheenti kyun hai........... jo hum nahi oonke muqaddaar main toh oon par ye dil aata hi kyun hai MuQaddar Ki Baatein To Wo Karte Hai Jise Apne Pyaar Pe Vishwas Nahi.. Hum Unmein Se Hai Jo Apne Pyaar Ko Paane Ke Liye Lakeeron Se Lad Liya Karte Hai...[/b]
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2007, 05:43:15 AM » |
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Bahut bahut khoooooooooob SALIL BHAI.. maza aa gaya padh kar.. behad Mohabbat bhara kalaam likha hai aapne... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nice one angel................. :D
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«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2007, 08:12:25 AM » |
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very nice Angel........Salil
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angel4u
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«Reply #11 on: February 06, 2007, 05:19:23 PM » |
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Thanks waheed............. salil
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salil2002
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«Reply #12 on: February 07, 2007, 09:33:45 AM » |
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teri baaton pe yaki karne ko ji chahta hai kissii se phir dil lagane ko ji chahta hai teri aankhon main jab se dekhi hai chahat ek baar phir se khud ko aazmaane ko ji chahta hai
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angel4u
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«Reply #13 on: February 07, 2007, 05:25:22 PM » |
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chahat meri aankhon mein dekhte to ho tum, kabhi mere dil ki dhadkan bhi sun liya karo jo baat keh nahi sakti ye zuban, kabhi apni saanso se hi sun liya karo tum....
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: February 07, 2007, 05:32:23 PM » |
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nice one angel
teri dhadkano ko suna hai ye kehte huye kii woh mere naam se chalti hai magar yakin nahi hota khud par kii ishq kii aag main tu bhi jalti hai
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