"ek ladki ko soch rha hu.n"

by aaina on April 20, 2009, 09:45:48 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 21, 2009, 10:56:53 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 20, 2009, 09:45:48 AM
ek ladki ko soch rha hu.n hai bilkul diwani si
lagti jaane kiy.n hai mujhko wo jaani pehchani si

khat o khaal hai.n aise uske ke jaise ab bole
showcase mai rhkhi hui ek gudia japani si

khabo khabo dhoond rha hu.n mai jane kabse
aisa mujhko lagta hai yahi hai wo anjaani si

dil chahe padta jau.n bas mai padta jaau.n
uski aankho mai hai jo likhi baat ek rumani si

pehle to socha nahi tha lakin ab aisa lagta hai
karni hi padegi mujhko ek choti nadaani si

wo chahe kuch kehna aur kuch mai bhi chahu.n
dono kaha.n se shru karai.n jo hai dil ki zubani si

mein jo likhta hu.n aur jo kuch kehta hu.n
sab uske baar mai hai baat hai ye samjhani si

hukm mila hai aslam apne baare mai kuch kaho
ke do dil ki saari baatai.n warna hogi naadani si



aslam bhai mazaa aa gaya yeh rumani ehsaa pad kar

tere baare main sochoon na ,yeh toh namumkin hai
kii mere dil se teri surat hi pehchaani jaati hai
achcha bhala tha tera deedar karne se pahle
ab toh har pal lagta hai kii tere bin yeh jaan chali jaati hai
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«Reply #16 on: April 22, 2009, 07:02:13 AM »
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@Aslam..
Dil chahe padhta jaoo......Bohat khoob Aslam  Clapping Smiley

@Talat
Palke jhukthi uthti si....Bohat khoob Talat  Clapping Smiley

Nice lines by you Salil.... Applause

 
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aaina
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«Reply #17 on: April 22, 2009, 09:53:46 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 20, 2009, 02:37:25 PM
Bohat Bohat Achche Aslam Bhai, Kamaal ka Likha Hai yaar Aapne,.
Yunhi Likjhte rahiye,.


Aur talat behna, As Usual A Great Work From U,.

thnxxxxxxx so much azeem.......
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aaina
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«Reply #18 on: April 22, 2009, 09:56:10 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 20, 2009, 02:47:09 PM
Waah.... Bahoot hi khoob likha hai Aslam ji Applause Applause Applause

Talat sis ne bhi acha likha hai!!

bhut bhut shukriy salma ji..........
zahir hai celmira ne to jawab hi nhi rakha.
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aaina
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«Reply #19 on: April 22, 2009, 09:57:27 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 21, 2009, 01:56:26 AM
Fantastic... Bahut khoob Aslam ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Thumbs UP

(Wo Ek Larki Kaun hai?  Winking )


thnxxxx roja...........bataya hai tumhay ki koi nahi
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aaina
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«Reply #20 on: April 22, 2009, 09:58:44 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 21, 2009, 02:32:04 AM
WAAH KYA BAAT HAI JEEE.....

thnxxxx so much pandit sahab.....im so happy ke apko ghazal achi lagi
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aaina
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«Reply #21 on: April 22, 2009, 10:00:09 AM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on April 21, 2009, 09:54:57 AM
Bahut Khub Aaina ji
Bahut hi pyaari rachna hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thnx so much jannat................
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aaina
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«Reply #22 on: April 22, 2009, 10:09:53 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 21, 2009, 10:56:53 AM
aslam bhai mazaa aa gaya yeh rumani ehsaa pad kar

tere baare main sochoon na ,yeh toh namumkin hai
kii mere dil se teri surat hi pehchaani jaati hai
achcha bhala tha tera deedar karne se pahle
ab toh har pal lagta hai kii tere bin yeh jaan chali jaati hai

salil sahab bhut bhut shukriya ke aapko gahzal achi lagi...........aru janab bhut khoob reply hai waah kya baat hai
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aaina
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«Reply #23 on: April 22, 2009, 10:11:27 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 22, 2009, 07:02:13 AM
@Aslam..
Dil chahe padhta jaoo......Bohat khoob Aslam  Clapping Smiley

@Talat
Palke jhukthi uthti si....Bohat khoob Talat  Clapping Smiley

Nice lines by you Salil.... Applause

 

bhut bhut shukriya sajid ji.................
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aaina
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«Reply #24 on: April 22, 2009, 10:15:09 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 20, 2009, 01:11:53 PM
Lafzon Se Jaana Maine, Kaisi Lagti Hogi Wo
Rang Rupehla, Roop Sunehra, Aisi Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Aankhon Main Hoga Kaajal, Palken Jhukti Uthti Si,
Khwaabon Se Utar Ke Aayi Pari Si Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Uske Dam Se Raushan Hoga, Kamre Ka Ek Ek Kona,
Honton Pe Muskaan Bikhere Kaisi Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Hum To Bas Itna Chaahen Ye Khwaab Tumhare Sach Ho Jaayen,
Haseen Khwaab Ki Ek Taabeer Jaisi Lagti Hogi Wo !!

waah waah celmira ji kya baat hai bhut hi khoob reply....aapne meri ghazal ka rang hi pheeka kar diya........really bhut acha kaha hai.........god bless u

ye to bas khaab hain mere, jaane kaisi hogi wo
tumhara khyaal bhi mana humne shayad aisi hogi wo
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«Reply #25 on: April 22, 2009, 11:25:24 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 22, 2009, 07:02:13 AM

@Talat
Palke jhukthi uthti si....Bohat khoob Talat  Clapping Smiley


 

Bohot Shukriya Sajid Ji
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«Reply #26 on: April 22, 2009, 11:30:47 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 22, 2009, 10:15:09 AM
waah waah celmira ji kya baat hai bhut hi khoob reply....aapne meri ghazal ka rang hi pheeka kar diya........really bhut acha kaha hai.........god bless u

ye to bas khaab hain mere, jaane kaisi hogi wo
tumhara khyaal bhi mana humne shayad aisi hogi wo

Aap to sharminda kar rahe hain Aslam Ji..Hum to aapse seekh rahe hain !! Shukriya bohot bohot is hausla afzaai ka !

Ek Din Chham Se Aa Jaayegi,
Payal Choodi Khankaayegi,
Rangon Se Phir Din Honge,
Aur Chandni Si Har Raat Hogi
Khwaab Tere Sach Ho Jaayenge,
Armaanon Ki Baarish Main
Khwabon Main Basti Hai Jo,
Saath Tere Har Pal Hogi !!!
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #27 on: March 12, 2010, 02:15:56 PM »
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nice  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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limra
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«Reply #28 on: March 17, 2010, 01:50:21 PM »
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Bahut accha likha aiina ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #29 on: March 17, 2010, 02:44:20 PM »
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Kamaal ki shayari hai Talat ji. Bahut shayari padhi magar aisi bahut kam padhi. Aapki is creation ko dekhkar jee chahta hai ke ya to isi meyar ki poetry likhun ya likhna chhod dun.
Quote from: Celmira on April 20, 2009, 01:11:53 PM
Lafzon Se Jaana Maine, Kaisi Lagti Hogi Wo
Rang Rupehla, Roop Sunehra, Aisi Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Aankhon Main Hoga Kaajal, Palken Jhukti Uthti Si,
Khwaabon Se Utar Ke Aayi Pari Si Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Uske Dam Se Raushan Hoga, Kamre Ka Ek Ek Kona,
Honton Pe Muskaan Bikhere Kaisi Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Hum To Bas Itna Chaahen Ye Khwaab Tumhare Sach Ho Jaayen,
Haseen Khwaab Ki Ek Taabeer Jaisi Lagti Hogi Wo !!
Quote from: Celmira on April 22, 2009, 11:30:47 AM
Ek Din Chham Se Aa Jaayegi,
Payal Choodi Khankaayegi,
Rangon Se Phir Din Honge,
Aur Chandni Si Har Raat Hogi
Khwaab Tere Sach Ho Jaayenge,
Armaanon Ki Baarish Main
Khwabon Main Basti Hai Jo,
Saath Tere Har Pal Hogi !!!
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