"ek ladki ko soch rha hu.n"

by aaina on April 20, 2009, 09:45:48 AM
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«Reply #30 on: March 17, 2010, 02:55:53 PM »
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Wah wah Aaina ji bahut achhi ghazal likhi hai aapne. Aapke uunche tasavvur ka jawab nahin. Nice creation.
ek ladki ko soch rha hu.n hai bilkul diwani si
lagti jaane kiy.n hai mujhko wo jaani pehchani si

khat o khaal hai.n aise uske ke jaise ab bole
showcase mai rhkhi hui ek gudia japani si

khabo khabo dhoond rha hu.n mai jane kabse
aisa mujhko lagta hai yahi hai wo anjaani si

dil chahe padta jau.n bas mai padta jaau.n
uski aankho mai hai jo likhi baat ek rumani si

pehle to socha nahi tha lakin ab aisa lagta hai
karni hi padegi mujhko ek choti nadaani si

wo chahe kuch kehna aur kuch mai bhi chahu.n
dono kaha.n se shru karai.n jo hai dil ki zubani si

mein jo likhta hu.n aur jo kuch kehta hu.n
sab uske baar mai hai baat hai ye samjhani si

hukm mila hai aslam apne baare mai kuch kaho
ke do dil ki saari baatai.n warna hogi naadani si



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«Reply #31 on: March 23, 2010, 03:15:47 PM »
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Kamaal ki shayari hai Talat ji. Bahut shayari padhi magar aisi bahut kam padhi. Aapki is creation ko dekhkar jee chahta hai ke ya to isi meyar ki poetry likhun ya likhna chhod dun.

Aapne kya keh diya Riyaz Ji !! Aap to bohot umdah likhte hain aur aapse seekhne ko bohot kuch milta hai......Bas thodi bohot tukbandi hai aur kuch nahin.....Iss zarra-nawazi ka tah-e-dil se shukriya !
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