Ek naye shuruwaat ho!!!

by Pooja on April 27, 2006, 05:20:30 PM
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Pooja
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«Reply #30 on: August 22, 2008, 07:14:02 PM »
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tumhara phir se sath ho
din-raat wahi hansi ki phuhar ho
nigahein kare naigaho se baatein
dhadkate jazbaat ho
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syednaami
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«Reply #31 on: August 22, 2008, 07:24:12 PM »
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Bahkati sanso ki awaz ho
Payaar ki  barsaat ho
Dhardkaty do dilo se
Ek naye shuruwaat ho!!!

Pooja jee,
Beautifully made rubaaiyaat, you always write so fantastic. Especially the last one a little controversial, else I really love the work.

Bhadakte armaanon se baaz ho,
Umeed se tera dur tak na saath ho,
Jalte huey dilon ki dhadkan bhi,
Us nayi shuruaat se bezaar ho. -

SN**
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«Reply #32 on: August 22, 2008, 07:27:48 PM »
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shukaria Sami... magar khayalo per rok kyun..

yah to Galib ji ne bhi kaha hai ki .. dil behlaane ko galib khayal acha hai...

rooh ki hasrato ko sath chahiye
dhadkate armaano ko karar chahiye
khayal hi sahi, umeend he sahi
doobane wale ko bas ek tinka chahiye .. Usual Smile

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«Reply #33 on: August 22, 2008, 07:51:36 PM »
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Did I say so, hmm. Nay.

Kya rooh ko kya jism ko
Ladkhadati hasraton ki aas ko
Zahar bhare us ahsaas ko
Tairne ka bas khayal rakho
Tinke to kashti men bhi honge
Jis men tum aaj savaar ho. -

SN**
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«Reply #34 on: August 23, 2008, 04:00:38 PM »
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"Jawab Aate he Tumhara,
Dil bola Dham-Dham-Dham,
Dhadkate jazbaato ko, Milakar he Lange Dam,
Aur Phir Payal baajige Chum-Chum-Chum
" happy3
by Harish Sharma Pilot(SS)
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sayani kuri
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«Reply #35 on: August 23, 2008, 06:33:14 PM »
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welldon harish Clapping Smiley
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anaskhan
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«Reply #36 on: August 23, 2008, 07:48:00 PM »
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BAHOOT ACCHA LIKHA APPNE
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syednaami
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«Reply #37 on: August 23, 2008, 08:26:00 PM »
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Shukriya and Thanks AK and SK Saahibaan.
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sayani kuri
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«Reply #38 on: August 23, 2008, 09:55:29 PM »
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Did I say so, hmm. Nay.

Kya rooh ko kya jism ko
Ladkhadati hasraton ki aas ko
Zahar bhare us ahsaas ko
Tairne ka bas khayal rakho
Tinke to kashti men bhi honge
Jis men tum aaj savaar ho. -

SN**
wah je wah kiya bat hai ap ki janaab welldon

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«Reply #39 on: August 24, 2008, 05:56:39 AM »
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Thanks Sayani Kuri jee, nice of you.
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«Reply #40 on: August 24, 2008, 06:03:37 AM »
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shukaria Sami... magar khayalo per rok kyun..

yah to Galib ji ne bhi kaha hai ki .. dil behlaane ko galib khayal acha hai...

rooh ki hasrato ko sath chahiye
dhadkate armaano ko karar chahiye
khayal hi sahi, umeend he sahi
doobane wale ko bas ek tinka chahiye .. Usual Smile



bahooh khoob pooja ji


Did I say so, hmm. Nay.

Kya rooh ko kya jism ko
Ladkhadati hasraton ki aas ko
Zahar bhare us ahsaas ko
Tairne ka bas khayal rakho
Tinke to kashti men bhi honge
Jis men tum aaj savaar ho. -

SN**

bahoot achcha jawab sami....very nice
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«Reply #41 on: August 24, 2008, 06:30:48 AM »
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Thanks so much Bekarar bro, so nice of you. you do write please.

"Jawab Aate he Tumhara,
Dil bola Dham-Dham-Dham,
Dhadkate jazbaato ko, Milakar he Lange Dam,
Aur Phir Payal baajige Chum-Chum-Chum
" happy3
by Harish Sharma Pilot(SS)

Beautiful Harish Pilot.
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«Reply #42 on: August 24, 2008, 08:29:49 AM »
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Thanks for comments Mr. SAMI
I like your style to maintain decency on Yo india.
by harish sharma
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«Reply #43 on: August 24, 2008, 01:42:58 PM »
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Thanks you honored me dear.
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«Reply #44 on: September 26, 2008, 03:51:35 PM »
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shikayat kar ke khud kahin najar nahi atte hai
yah ajkal ke deewane bhi, kaisa deewanapan dikhate hai

Jab nahi koi deewana, to dour ne to thum he jaana hai
Bin ashiq kaha Ishaq, Ishaq ka to itna sa hi afsaana hai!!

Ilzaam Lagaana to Koi Aaapse Seekhe Pooja Ji..!! Hahahahahaha


Kisi Ishq-e-Afsaano Ya Fasaano ka Mohataaz Nahi Hai Mann,
Hum To Aankhon Se Hi Mohabbat Apni Bayaan Kar Jaate Hain.....

Wo Alag Baat Hai Sanam, Ki Saamne Tere Kabhi Aate Nahi,
Kabhi Tu Hi Aa Ke Dekh, Har Ek Ghazal Tere Naam Kiye jaate Hain....!!!


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