Ek Paagal Nazm Paagal SmaajoN Ke Naam

by Brijinder on December 08, 2005, 07:52:44 PM
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Ek Paagal Nazm Paagal SmaajoN Ke Naam


Raakh barseygi aasmaanoN se
Fiza meiN bhar jaigi qabaroN ki haddiaN
Apna hi lahu bahyga dariya dariya
NiklyaNgay naNgay-jism murdoN ke juloos

Kuttay roiNgay muNh aflaaq pe dhar kar
Aur raqs karaNygee siyaaroN ki hookeiN
AaNkh barsa karEygi naalioN ke keeRay
Shab peetee phiraygi sooraj ki kaY

Aflaaq-- skys, KaY----vomit

Brijinder"Sagar"
http://www.eBazm.com/sagar
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«Reply #1 on: December 08, 2005, 09:15:21 PM »
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bahoot hi ajeeb lagi apki poem. apki site dekhi aor acha laga ki app hamare bich mai hai.

apki poem parr kar jo man mai ayya, wo likh rahi hu:

angaare barase dharati per
asmaan ka seena phat jai
machali tarape dharati per
her ghar baar, smunder mai doob jai!!!
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hi
«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2005, 07:30:18 PM »
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Pooja, Thanx for the words of appreciation.This poem IS "AJEEB" as it was written in a very bleak state of mind and it reflects thesense of helplessness n anger for these many times stupid social structures which have come to reign over our lives.
brijinder
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hi
«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2006, 01:29:58 AM »
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thanx for the overwhelming response to my different kind of nazm.
brijinder"sagar'
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