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«Reply #15 on: September 26, 2010, 09:49:49 PM »
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Wah Klaskar Ji Kya Baat Hai Bohat Khoob Janab
Bura Mat Maniyega. Zara Sa Waqt Aur Dete To
Aur Bhi Khoobsurat Ho Sakta Tha Yeh.Waise Bohat Achha Hai.


Shad o Aabad Rahe...


Yaash...
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«Reply #16 on: September 26, 2010, 09:50:21 PM »
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thank you so much Abhi ji jo aapne mere is post ko itna pasand kiya... par maafi chahunga main apni awaaz me ise post nahi karunga warna jo aaj padhte hain wo bi padhna chhod denge... bahut besura hoon main... tongue3

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 24, 2010, 10:50:39 AM
ahaa ek aadh jagah correction ke bad full flash a song ho jayega..

kapil ji apni awaz me pesh kijiye ho sake tooo....its a beautifully composed song~
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«Reply #17 on: September 26, 2010, 09:52:11 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Yaash ji... main bahut kam baar technically correct likhta hoon... dil se awaaz aati hai... jaisi aati hai waisa hi likh deta hoon.. fir usme jod tod mujhe pasand nahi.. thanks for ur nice suggestion...!!!

Quote from: Yaash on September 26, 2010, 09:49:49 PM
Wah Klaskar Ji Kya Baat Hai Bohat Khoob Janab
Bura Mat Maniyega. Zara Sa Waqt Aur Dete To
Aur Bhi Khoobsurat Ho Sakta Tha Yeh.Waise Bohat Achha Hai.


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«Reply #18 on: September 26, 2010, 09:57:45 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji... aapka Kamaal kehna saare taarifon ki poorti kar deta hai... baaki uska naam pata chalte hi aapko bataunga... abhi to bas sapno me aati hai...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on September 24, 2010, 03:13:07 PM
wah wah JI ....... "KAMAL " ......

Bhut umda........

Kon hai voh pagal se ladki jo tuzko pagal karti hai
Naam to batao uska ? jo tumko deewana karti hai ?

Kapil .......hum sab naam sunene ko bekrar hai ji kon hai voh?
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«Reply #19 on: September 26, 2010, 09:58:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji...!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 24, 2010, 04:42:53 PM
Klaskar jee Aadaab !

Kia khoob ahsaas o khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne daad janab.....
Kafi proegress kiya hai aapne is kalaam meiN.....

Likhate rahiye.......
Khush o aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #20 on: October 06, 2010, 01:08:50 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Anaam ji...!!!

Quote from: ANAAM on September 24, 2010, 06:51:50 PM
Wah kapil dil k bhaavo ko.....shabdo me chitrit kar diya... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: November 23, 2010, 12:42:49 PM »
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ek pagal si wo ladki hai
jane kyun tujhpe marti hai
sochti rehti hai ghanton
kyun teri awaaz pe wo marti hai....

ek pagal si wo ladki hai
khoi khoi si hi rehti hai
aksr jag jati hai nindon se aur
tujhse baatein karti rehti hai

ek pagal si wo ladki hai

bht bht bht hi pyari batein likhi hai aapne kapil ji yahan....uss ladki k bare me...
dil chhu gai aapki ye rachna...
reply karne me late hua uske liye sorry....
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«Reply #22 on: November 25, 2010, 10:02:16 PM »
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maafi maang k sharminda mat kijiye... der se aaye par aaye to sahi... bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji isko itna pasand karne ke liye aur mere ehsaason ko samajhne ke liye....

ek paagal si wo ladki hai,
har pal yaadon me aati hai,
aake chori se chupke se,
kaano me kuch keh jaati hai,

ek paagal si wo ladki hai,
mere sapno me wo aati hai,
kuch to baat hai usme khaas,
har lamha wo tadpaati hai,

ek paagal si wo ladki hai,
jo mujhse baatein karti hai...
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«Reply #23 on: November 26, 2010, 05:09:04 AM »
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fir ek bar bht pyara likha hai aapne....

kuch uss ladke ki bhi tareef ho jaye...

ek mast maula ladka hai
jo bht sharart karta hai
aate jate logon ki wo
hasi udaya karta hai

mujhse bhi jab milta hai
ajeeb harkatein hi karta hai
kaise aaye mere labon pe hasi
wo yehi sochta rehta hai

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«Reply #24 on: November 26, 2010, 09:36:26 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: November 27, 2010, 03:59:49 AM »
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wah ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #26 on: November 30, 2010, 07:52:31 AM »
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shukriya shukriya....!!!
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