~~~Ek Raat Sanam Ke Saath~~~

by Sammual on June 04, 2008, 11:30:46 AM
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Chandni raat thi woh hamare paas thi.
labo se lab takrae hum kuch samjh na paye...

Kaise woh raat thi jo mere sanam ke saath thi.
paas se guzerti thandi tez hawayein wah kya baat thi...

maine jo dekha unki taraf usne dheere se kuch baat ki.
barish main ghoomte hum doono yeh ek nayi duniya ki shuruwat thi...

maine dekha usko pyar se woh sharma gayi.
dhere dhere woh meri bahoon main aa gayi....

uske chere ko dekh kar baadlo ne chand ko dhak liya.
us din meri zindgi ne ek naya mood liye...

baithe rahin hum sari raat hue hamare pyar ki shuruwat.
wah kya raat thi wah kya baat thi jo mere sanam ke saath thi,jo mere sanam ke saath thi...
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2008, 11:33:52 AM »
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Chandni raat thi woh hamare paas thi.
labo se lab takrae hum kuch samjh na paye...

Kaise woh raat thi jo mere sanam ke saath thi.
paas se guzerti thandi tez hawayein wah kya baat thi...

maine jo dekha unki taraf usne dheere se kuch baat ki.
barish main ghoomte hum doono yeh ek nayi duniya ki shuruwat thi...

Very romantic... wah wah.. Applause Applause
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Sammual
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2008, 11:37:37 AM »
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Thanx sonia ji
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2008, 12:04:42 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai aapne Sammual ji... Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2008, 06:45:39 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot achi rachna ki peshkash ki hai apne Sammual ji...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2008, 04:39:05 AM »
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hi achi lagi aapki chandni raat
good thinking
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2008, 05:14:37 AM »
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Chandni raat thi woh hamare paas thi.
labo se lab takrae hum kuch samjh na paye...

Kaise woh raat thi jo mere sanam ke saath thi.
paas se guzerti thandi tez hawayein wah kya baat thi...

maine jo dekha unki taraf usne dheere se kuch baat ki.
barish main ghoomte hum doono yeh ek nayi duniya ki shuruwat thi...

maine dekha usko pyar se woh sharma gayi.
dhere dhere woh meri bahoon main aa gayi....

uske chere ko dekh kar baadlo ne chand ko dhak liya.
us din meri zindgi ne ek naya mood liye...

baithe rahin hum sari raat hue hamare pyar ki shuruwat.
wah kya raat thi wah kya baat thi jo mere sanam ke saath thi,jo mere sanam ke saath thi...


what a romentic poetry
realy its very heart touching thanx for shayring with us
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Sammual
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2008, 10:42:39 AM »
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honeyrose,Pooja,kaushikbhawna and sagar ji mare shayri ko pasand karne ke liye shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2008, 11:24:55 AM »
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very romantic sammual ji good work
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Sammual
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2008, 11:27:03 AM »
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shukriya sanya ji.
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pepejeans1986
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2008, 08:01:01 PM »
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really a tching One.
Keep it up
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Sammual
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2008, 08:16:53 AM »
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shukriya pepejeans ji.
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