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«Reply #15 on: June 13, 2006, 03:44:48 PM » |
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Choo ke tere Saye ko use apne me basa lenge.....
Dil dena koi badi baat nahi Mahobbat me iss baat ko hum aam kahenge.....
Karenge tujhe Nazar apni Jindagi ke kuch behtreen pal.....
Phir tujhe me baske tujhe apni Suhaani Shaam kahenge......
Kya tum bhi mujhe apna Saya bana Chahogi.....
Karke Pyar mujhse Saath Janam ka Saath nibhana Chahogi.....
Tere Ruswa hotoan ko pee ke use Meetha Jaam kahenge.....
Sirf tujhe pana hee sab kuch nahi mere liye.....Bas ab tujhe chahana hee apna Kaam kahenge.....!!!!!!!
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«Reply #16 on: June 13, 2006, 06:17:58 PM » |
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Thnx a lot Shahid bhai.......  Rat ki tanhai me tum ko awaaz dia karte hain rat me sitaro se tum hari sayari ka zikar kia karte hain Tum aye ya na aye humare aawaz me hum to bas tumhari shayari ka intezar kia karte hain. HUm bhi tumhe tah-e-dil se apna HumNafas maante hai...... Karte ho tum intezaar kiska yeh bhi hum jaante hai...... Shukriya Dost tera bahut bahut Shukriya jise tu Shayar kehke wah wah karta hai..... Yeh Dunia wale usi ko na jaane kyu Badnaam Pukarte hai.......!!!!!!!! Tum kya jano karte hain ham kiska intazar Tum thaire shayar, lafzo par hi tumko hain ekhtiyar din gujri,sham hua,aakhir me bhi raat gaya lete tera naam sari umr tamam gaya kitni hamne kosis ki na rahe tere liye bekarar Aur tum jante ho kiska hai hamme intezar???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wink: Intezar tumhe uss Pal ka hai..... Jis Pal Raat ki tanhai khamosh na ho...... Guzar jaye raat par khaali tumhari aaghosh na ho........ Ho tanhai tumhare kamre main aur Deewaron se bhi koi baat na ho......!!!!!! |
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«Reply #17 on: June 13, 2006, 06:39:49 PM » |
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 Choo ke tera Saya mera Dard mujhse rooth jayega......
Karunga phir main baatein karunga kisse.....Dil ka aur Jism ka nata bhi toot jayega.......
Tere Saye me Aks humne apna Sada Chupaya hai.....
Tu aake dekh jara meri Humnafas yeh Dil khud chalke tere paas aya hai......
Kyu Adhoora sa hoon main binn tere........
Shayad iss Janam toh na le sakunga sang tere Saath phere.......
Agle Janam bhi hum tujhi ko chahenge......
Karenge Dua khuda se nahi toh Jannat se tujhe cheen layenge........
Baat le tu mera Ranj apni Shayahien or Kalam ki taakat se......
Tadpa dia Dunia ne ek Dinn hum yoon hee Khatam ho jayenge.......
Kar aya hoon main Ruswa harr Khushi ko Chahat me teri.......
Socha hai jab talak jiyenge tab tak tujhe toot kar chahenge.......
Bas aakhiri Khawahish hai meri marte Dum tak tumhe apna Banana Chahenge........Bas aur kuch nahi......!!!!!!!!oh ho kya baat hai........bahut achaa and pic. added more beauty to uor shayari........keep it up dude~!!!!!! |
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«Reply #18 on: June 13, 2006, 06:43:00 PM » |
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Thnx Isha....bas aap aake Hausla badate rahiyega....hum yoon hee likhte hai or likhte rahenge |
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«Reply #19 on: June 13, 2006, 06:55:52 PM » |
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Thnx a lot Shahid bhai....... Rat ki tanhai me tum ko awaaz dia karte hain rat me sitaro se tum hari sayari ka zikar kia karte hain Tum aye ya na aye humare aawaz me hum to bas tumhari shayari ka intezar kia karte hain. HUm bhi tumhe tah-e-dil se apna HumNafas maante hai...... Karte ho tum intezaar kiska yeh bhi hum jaante hai...... Shukriya Dost tera bahut bahut Shukriya jise tu Shayar kehke wah wah karta hai..... Yeh Dunia wale usi ko na jaane kyu Badnaam Pukarte hai.......!!!!!!!! Tum kya jano karte hain ham kiska intazar Tum thaire shayar, lafzo par hi tumko hain ekhtiyar din gujri,sham hua,aakhir me bhi raat gaya lete tera naam sari umr tamam gaya kitni hamne kosis ki na rahe tere liye bekarar Aur tum jante ho kiska hai hamme intezar???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wink: Intezar tumhe uss Pal ka hai..... Jis Pal Raat ki tanhai khamosh na ho...... Guzar jaye raat par khaali tumhari aaghosh na ho........ Ho tanhai tumhare kamre main aur Deewaron se bhi koi baat na ho......!!!!!! Intezar hamme us pal ka tha kab aayega tumhara jawab Aab ham is sher ka kya jawab de jo khud me hii la-jawab! |
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«Reply #20 on: June 14, 2006, 12:46:14 PM » |
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Thnx a lot Shahid bhai....... Rat ki tanhai me tum ko awaaz dia karte hain rat me sitaro se tum hari sayari ka zikar kia karte hain Tum aye ya na aye humare aawaz me hum to bas tumhari shayari ka intezar kia karte hain. HUm bhi tumhe tah-e-dil se apna HumNafas maante hai...... Karte ho tum intezaar kiska yeh bhi hum jaante hai...... Shukriya Dost tera bahut bahut Shukriya jise tu Shayar kehke wah wah karta hai..... Yeh Dunia wale usi ko na jaane kyu Badnaam Pukarte hai.......!!!!!!!! Tum kya jano karte hain ham kiska intazar Tum thaire shayar, lafzo par hi tumko hain ekhtiyar din gujri,sham hua,aakhir me bhi raat gaya lete tera naam sari umr tamam gaya kitni hamne kosis ki na rahe tere liye bekarar Aur tum jante ho kiska hai hamme intezar???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wink: Intezar tumhe uss Pal ka hai..... Jis Pal Raat ki tanhai khamosh na ho...... Guzar jaye raat par khaali tumhari aaghosh na ho........ Ho tanhai tumhare kamre main aur Deewaron se bhi koi baat na ho......!!!!!! Intezar hamme us pal ka tha kab aayega tumhara jawab Aab ham is sher ka kya jawab de jo khud me hii la-jawab! hahahaha....Tnx a lot Shahid bhai :D |
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«Reply #21 on: June 14, 2006, 01:01:20 PM » |
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Very Nice BS... Bohat khoob...
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«Reply #22 on: June 14, 2006, 05:18:43 PM » |
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bahut khub sabne likha ........Gaurav .......aapne kamal ke likha hai...... |
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«Reply #23 on: June 16, 2006, 05:19:03 PM » |
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Thnx a lot Aryan ji and Ranju......
Ek SaYa tha Jindagi me saath mere.....
Jo kehta tha mujhse Dil hee Dil me rahe ho kabhi aap Khawaab mere......
Uski baatein me us WaQt samajh na paya......
Pata na tha mujhe ki woh tha tera Saya......
Thi jo baat Dil me woh tumhare Saye ne kahi mujhse......
Inkaar rakh ke Jubaan par karti thi tum bhi Pyar mujhse......
Mahobbat ek sach hai kabhi Chup na payega......
Jo Chupaogi tum ise yeh WaQt SaYa banke Guzar jayega......!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #24 on: June 16, 2006, 05:28:04 PM » |
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shukriya Gaurav bahut khub likha tumne........
mera saya hi ab mujhse ruth gaya
ek sapna thaa woh mera jo ab tut gaya
bantaa thaa jiske saath apne sukh aur dukh ko
aaj mera hamsafar woh hi mujhe bichar gaya
reh gaye hum akle apni tanhai ke gawan mein
na jaane yeh kaisa hadsa thaa jo saya ban ke
mere jindagi ke sang jee gaya.....................
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«Reply #25 on: June 16, 2006, 05:31:01 PM » |
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shukriya Gaurav bahut khub likha tumne........
mera saya hi ab mujhse ruth gaya
ek sapna thaa woh mera jo ab tut gaya
bantaa thaa jiske saath apne sukh aur dukh ko
aaj mera hamsafar woh hi mujhe bichar gaya
reh gaye hum akle apni tanhai ke gawan mein
na jaane yeh kaisa hadsa thaa jo saya ban ke
mere jindagi ke sang jee gaya..................... Koi nahi Rutha tumse.... Aaj bhi yeh Mahobbat ki ghadi hai..... Chayi hai Fizayen Pyar ki tere..... Log kehte yahi Dil ki lagi hai..... Sochogi tum jitna.... Utna hee WaQt tumhe tadpayega...... Sab mill jayega Dard me..... Bas yeh AshiQue tere Pyar me Fana ho jayega........!!!!!! |
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ranjana
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«Reply #26 on: June 16, 2006, 05:39:03 PM » |
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gud job Gaurav..........very nice...... pyaar mein jo gujare woh har pal hi pyaar ka saya hai har kisi ne usko khud mein talasha, aur khud mein hi paaya hai pyaar ka nasha jab bhi sirr chad ke bolta hai ek saya hai khushi ka jo sang sang dolta hai |
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ranjana
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«Reply #27 on: June 17, 2006, 03:15:00 AM » |
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yeh kaun hai jo saya ban ke mujh per chhaa raha hai
yeh kaun kaun hai jo mere dil ke kareeb aa raha hai
yeh kiski kahaaniya.n gungunane laga hai aaj mann
yeh kiske chhoone se jal utha hai mera tan bandan
yeh kaun hai jo mujhe mujhse hi dur liye ja raha hai
meri aankho mein base saye ko haqikat bana raha hai
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«Reply #28 on: June 17, 2006, 03:33:34 AM » |
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wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob ranju and BS JI
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ranjana
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«Reply #29 on: June 17, 2006, 04:20:46 AM » |
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shukriya Pankhuri ............. |
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