EK SHAAM..................

by akela on November 30, 2004, 09:07:52 PM
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akela
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«Reply #15 on: December 03, 2004, 09:03:02 PM »
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bata du?Huh? Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: December 03, 2004, 09:16:38 PM »
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bata du?Huh? Usual Smile


haanji plzzzzzzz :cry:
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akela
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«Reply #17 on: December 03, 2004, 09:26:50 PM »
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mera naam Deepak hai mansi ji,shayad aapne introduction section nahi dekha...........kripya usse dekh le. Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: December 04, 2004, 08:22:12 PM »
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din bhar chandani ke liye yu tarasa hu mai,
ki ab julffe na lahraho ,ki ab tho shaam dhal rahi hai.
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«Reply #19 on: December 04, 2004, 08:26:35 PM »
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very nice akela ji!! bahot khoob!!!


Muddat ke baad eak tabassum meela hamen,
woh bhee kuchch yaisa talkh kee aansu nikal pade.


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«Reply #20 on: December 04, 2004, 08:35:14 PM »
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din bhar chandani ke liye yu tarasa hu mai,
ki ab julffe na lahraho ,ki ab tho shaam dhal rahi hai.


raat bhar tujhe dekhne ko nazar yo tarasti rahi
ki ab is tareh mujhe na dekho ki sharm se nazar simt-ti rahe

din bhar tere khayalo mein yo main ulajhti gayi
jitni ulajhti gayi utni yeh kahaani sulajhti gayi
door tum mujhse jitna rahe utni preet ki aag sulagti rahi
tujhe ek baar dekhne ko pal-pal meri nazar bhatakti rahi
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«Reply #21 on: December 04, 2004, 08:46:23 PM »
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mana hi ki unse milne par hum bhi ghabarate hai,
par woh na jane kyu humse itna sharmate hai
chup chup ke tho najere milate hai humse,
par rahh mai mil jane par jane kyu najare churate hai.
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«Reply #22 on: December 04, 2004, 08:57:34 PM »
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wah bahot khoob akela ji!!! hats off to u...


Baha ke ley gayaa sailaab waqt kaa unako
zo baithe soch rahe the ki kya keeya jaaye.


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«Reply #23 on: December 04, 2004, 09:10:32 PM »
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wah bahot khoob akela ji!!! hats off to you...


Baha ke ley gayaa sailaab waqt kaa unako
zo baithe soch rahe the ki kya keeya jaaye.


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shukariya aapka
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«Reply #24 on: December 04, 2004, 09:23:23 PM »
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ji!!!



Dil mein mere aajkal ajnabi koi khaas hai,
Duur hote hue bhi lagta hai ki wo mere paas hai.
Mene dil se poocha naam us ajnabi ka,
Usne kaha ki yeh ek khoobsoorat raaz hai.
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«Reply #25 on: December 04, 2004, 10:04:17 PM »
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wow nice one akela n myheart
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«Reply #26 on: December 04, 2004, 10:08:32 PM »
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thnx mansi_d_archi ji!!


Jhutha pyaar tou pathjhad ki tarah hota hai
Har jagah faila reheta hai,
par badkismati se wohi zyaada milta hai...


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«Reply #27 on: December 04, 2004, 11:22:54 PM »
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thnx mansi_d_archi ji!!


Jhutha pyaar tou pathjhad ki tarah hota hai
Har jagah faila reheta hai,
par badkismati se wohi zyaada milta hai...


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na kaho pyaar ko kabhi jhootha
pyaar pyaar hai ,na hai sacha na hi jhootha
dil se nikla har wo jazbaat hota hai sacha
na tolo ishq ko tum,na hota yeh pakka na hota hai kaccha :wink:
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«Reply #28 on: December 05, 2004, 04:52:36 AM »
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hmmmm.... achcha!!! bachut achche!!!



Muzhe chhedne ko sakee ne deeya zo zaam ultaa
to kiya bahak ke maine bhi use eak salaam ultaa.


salaam!!!


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«Reply #29 on: December 05, 2004, 07:38:39 AM »
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hehe thanx ! By d way,who's 'saaki' here? Puzzled !
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