<>*Ek Sham chahte hain*<>

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<>*Ek Sham chahte hain*<>

Ek aisi sham k pal chahte hain hum sanam
Chahat jo teri hai wahi chahat hai meri sanam

Simti rahun main yunhi tere baajun  k darmiyan
Mahek meri zulf ki  kar de tujhe gumshuda

Tere badan ki mahek mujhe aise fir madhosh kare
Main kho jaun tujhme na mujhe fir kuch hosh rahe

Tere pyaar k daaman me tujhko panaah jo mil jaye
Mere har janam ka jaise har dard fir sanwar jaye

Tu chhupale  mujhe apne seene me kuch iss tarah
Na dhundh paye koi.. hai kaun tu aur main kahan

Wo pal wahin ruk jayega jab sath honge hum Janu
Har khushi har khwaish main uss pal pe hi waarun

Ee khuda ee mere sanam  mujhe ek aisi shaam de
Main ho jaun teri aur tu zindagi mere naam kar de…!!!

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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2010, 09:05:19 AM »
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behad haseen chahat hai aap ki kasak ji

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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2010, 10:02:07 AM »
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<>*Ek Sham chahte hain*<>

Ek aisi sham k pal chahte hain hum sanam
Chahat jo teri hai wahi chahat hai meri sanam

Simti rahun main yunhi tere baajun  k darmiyan
Mahek meri zulf ki  kar de tujhe gumshuda

Tere badan ki mahek mujhe aise fir madhosh kare
Main kho jaun tujhme na mujhe fir kuch hosh rahe

Tere pyaar k daaman me tujhko panaah jo mil jaye
Mere har janam ka jaise har dard fir sanwar jaye

Tu chhupale  mujhe apne seene me kuch iss tarah
Na dhundh paye koi.. hai kaun tu aur main kahan

Wo pal wahin ruk jayega jab sath honge hum Janu
Har khushi har khwaish main uss pal pe hi waarun

Ee khuda ee mere sanam  mujhe ek aisi shaam de
Main ho jaun teri aur tu zindagi mere naam kar de…!!!


Very Nice Poetry ......Kasak Ji ! excellent word play !
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2010, 07:16:23 PM »
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Waah Kasak ji waah...!!! Mannu padega aapke shabdon ke jaadugari ko.. bahut khooburti se aapne apne dil ke shabdon me utaarti hain... bahut khoob.. jawaab nahi aapke lekhni ka... !!!
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