Ek Tera aks - Shikha :Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Shikha sanghvi

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Ek tera aks jo meri aankho mai basa hai,
Yahi to mere jeene ki ummid bante hai,
Jis pal mai tu saath mere hai,
Us pal mai zindagi meri khwabo se saji hai,
Jis pal mai tu saath nahi mere,
Lagta hai jaise mera koi astitav hi nahi hai.
Muje nahi likhni meri muhobbat ki kahani,
Muje to tere saath har pal zindagi jeeni hai.
khwabo se saji us dahelij par kadam rakhna hai,
Jiske bhitar humari pyari si duniya basi hai.

Shikha

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Re: Ek Tera aks - Shikha

«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2016, 11:33:45 AM »

Bahot khoob, shandaar aur jandaar ehsasaat Applause


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Re: Ek Tera aks - Shikha

«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2016, 09:14:59 PM »

Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on June 14, 2016, 11:17:41 AM

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Bahut umdah ehsaas hai, ek cheez main aapko bataanaa chahun gaa ke Urdu zabaan kee pedaaish Gujerat se start huee thee, aur yeh zubaan Hindi Sanskrit Persian with traces of Arabic se bani thee aur abhi bhi ban rahi hai. Aap koi bhi nayaa word add kar saktey hain jo rhyme kartaa ho bas usske meaning jo hain woh saath mein likh deejiye. Aapkaa pehlaa sher main neeche likh rahaa hoon.
Ek tera aks jo meri aankho mai basa hai,
Yahi to mere jeene ki ummid bante hai,
Yeh sher ehsaas to bahut achhaa hai par rhyme nahin kartaa. Iss ke liye aapko koshish karney kee zaroorat hai. Pehli line word basa hai, iss ke saath koi doosraa miltaa jultaa doosraa word doosri line mein talaash karnaa hogaa. abb usse sher ko neechey likh rahaa hoon.
Ek teraa aqs jo merii aankhon mein basaa hai
Yahi to mere jeene kee abb bachi aasthaa hai
aasthaa = vishwaas
Bas aap likhte rahiye aur koshish zaroor karte rahiye, rhyme rhyme rhyme yeh kabhi naa bhooliye, ek baat aur ke agar aap koshish nahin karein gey to phir hum karte rahen gey.