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Ao aaj ki shaam nigahon k jaam takrakar jao...
In hoton k ankahe chand paigam lekar jao....
Behek na gaye is husn o jawani mein to kehna
Aj ki shaam kuch aisi shart lagakar jao...
Shor o gul mein kya dil ki dadkan mein rawani hai
Kuch humari sun jao kuch apni sunakar jao
Dareech.on se chandni kuch istarh humpar chalki
Akar isse husn ka nikhaar dekhkar jao...
Yaadgar na bana dein yeh lamhe to kehna....
Aj ki shaam lut kar jao ya luta kar jao.....
Khusbu se meri tera har ang mehk jaye.....
Kuch istarah mujhmein sama kar jao.....
Chupa hai chehra kyu ki yeh diwana banata hai
Ao Aj ki raat yeh chil.man hata kar jao....
~Roshni~
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2007, 02:09:34 PM » |
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Roshu Mashallah ! "Ek tohfa....aaj ki raat" ! Behtareen tohfe hain tumhari is poem mein    |
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2007, 02:07:25 PM » |
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shukriyaaaaaaa
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2007, 03:52:59 PM » |
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very nice keep shairing
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2007, 04:11:11 PM » |
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verry good roshni ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2007, 04:31:08 PM » |
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Majid bandarrrrrrrr thankssssss
salman ji shukriya and
badal sahab hume roshni JI bolna band karo newayz thank u :D
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2007, 04:38:19 PM » |
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bahot khoob likhi sweety...
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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2007, 06:39:40 PM » |
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thank uuuuu
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«Reply #8 on: December 24, 2007, 05:49:35 AM » |
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Great Job dears.
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«Reply #9 on: December 24, 2007, 06:16:21 AM » |
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very beautiful.. very nice Ao aaj ki shaam nigahon k jaam takrakar jao...
In hoton k ankahe chand paigam lekar jao....
Behek na gaye is husn o jawani mein to kehna
Aj ki shaam kuch aisi shart lagakar jao...
Shor o gul mein kya dil ki dadkan mein rawani hai
Kuch humari sun jao kuch apni sunakar jao
Dareech.on se chandni kuch istarh humpar chalki
Akar isse husn ka nikhaar dekhkar jao...
Yaadgar na bana dein yeh lamhe to kehna....
Aj ki shaam lut kar jao ya luta kar jao.....
Khusbu se meri tera har ang mehk jaye.....
Kuch istarah mujhmein sama kar jao.....
Chupa hai chehra kyu ki yeh diwana banata hai
Ao Aj ki raat yeh chil.man hata kar jao....
~Roshni~
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«Reply #10 on: December 24, 2007, 08:50:11 AM » |
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very nice majid.
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«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2007, 05:59:50 AM » |
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Jindgi se bada tohfa kya he ?
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«Reply #12 on: December 26, 2007, 07:56:59 PM » |
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hai na Mohobbat
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«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2007, 02:44:03 AM » |
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Ao aaj ki shaam nigahon k jaam takrakar jao...
In hoton k ankahe chand paigam lekar jao....
Behek na gaye is husn o jawani mein to kehna
Aj ki shaam kuch aisi shart lagakar jao...
Shor o gul mein kya dil ki dadkan mein rawani hai
Kuch humari sun jao kuch apni sunakar jao
Dareech.on se chandni kuch istarh humpar chalki
Akar isse husn ka nikhaar dekhkar jao...
Yaadgar na bana dein yeh lamhe to kehna....
Aj ki shaam lut kar jao ya luta kar jao.....
Khusbu se meri tera har ang mehk jaye.....
Kuch istarah mujhmein sama kar jao.....
Chupa hai chehra kyu ki yeh diwana banata hai
Ao Aj ki raat yeh chil.man hata kar jao....
~Roshni~
Sahi main ek tofa hi hai... Very good lines to read.
Esp. last four lines... i liked very much.... Aisa hi tofa dete rehna. |
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«Reply #14 on: December 27, 2007, 07:54:33 AM » |
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Majid Bhai
Hum Title kese likhte he ji
Jainse ki main koe title start karna chahta hoon
to kainse likhenge
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on eTI community..
