--EK UMEED--

by kamal aggarwal on February 15, 2011, 08:13:54 AM
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  Har sham main is umeed se diya jalati hoon,
  ki tu aaye teri rah me najaren bichati hoon,

    aankhon me tere milne ke sapne sajte hain,
    waqt abhi baaki hai najron ko samjhati hoon,

  bitaye jo lamhe maine tere pehlu mai ,
  ek sukhe patte sa unhe sahlati hoon,

    aake roshan kare tu is veeran hasti ko,
    apne dar-e-dil ki dawa thujhe batati hoon,

  har din gujarta hai isi weham ko lekar,
  ki tu aaye aur jaye mujhe saath lekar,

    lekin nahi kat-ti raat kabhi bhi aise,
    andheren me jab bhi khud ko tanha paati hoon.
 
 har sham is.....  
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2011, 09:12:44 AM »
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bahut khub ji.
judai ka dard dikhta hai iss nagme me--
bahut badhiya.
achhe ehsaas hain masoom se.
daad hai ji
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2011, 01:51:00 PM »
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 thanku nirala ji aap bhi kuch kum nahi hain
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2011, 01:53:51 PM »
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bahot aache kamal ji.........behtreen tarike se jajbato ko bataya he ane.....keep it up dear.....
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2011, 02:33:50 PM »
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mai to kam hi hun janaab.
lekin dil se kahta hun agr mujhe kalaamo ki thodi si bhi pahchaan hai to ye kahunga aapka ye kalaam bahut khubsurat hai.
bahut achha laga isko padhne par.
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2011, 06:32:29 AM »
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NIRALA JI


aap kuch kum hain
aapki ye baat bedum hai
shukriya ada karti hoon aapki "daad" ka
dard ko samjh saken aap jaise log yahan kum hain
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2011, 06:33:47 AM »
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 thanku very much mg
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2011, 07:04:12 AM »
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kamal ji--yahan bahut saare shayars hain jo dard ko samjhte hain--issliye to wo achhe shayrs kahlaate hain.
aap sabhi ko parhiye unki kalaamo me aapko sab kuch milega--dard pyar judai rumaniyat bholapan saadapan sachhai ka bakhoobi bayaan karte hain saare--
accept me Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
aapko duayen bahut saari
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2011, 08:15:58 AM »
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bht hi pyari creation kamal ji...
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2011, 08:33:49 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Kamalji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2011, 05:53:14 AM »
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thanku very much kasak ji and khwaish ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2011, 11:41:41 AM »
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GUSTHAKHI MAQF NIRALA JI AAPE SHBDO KO THIK KAR RAHI HOON


kamal ji--yahan bahut saare shayars hain jo dard ko samjhte hain--issliye to wo achhe shayrs kahlaate hain.
aap sabhi ko parhiye unki kalaamo me aapko sab kuch milega--dard pyar judai rumaniyat bholapan saadapan sachhai ka bakhoobi bayaan karte hain saare--
INCLUDING YOU Usual SmileUsual Smile:
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AAPKE BINA HUM SAB YAHAN AKELE HAI YAKIN NAHI HAI TO POOCH LO SABSE
RAHI BAAT ACHE SHAYAR HONE KI TO YE TO MOHBT KA KHUMAR HAI KISI KO BANA DIYA KISI KO FANA KIYA APNA-APNA MQDAR HAI KISKO KYA MILA
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2011, 05:07:29 PM »
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Bahut Khub Kamal JI
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«Reply #13 on: February 19, 2011, 05:28:01 PM »
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Quote from: kamal aggarwal on February 15, 2011, 08:13:54 AM
  Har sham main is umeed se diya jalati hoon,
  ki tu aaye teri rah me najaren bichati hoon,

    aankhon me tere milne ke sapne sajte hain,
    waqt abhi baaki hai najron ko samjhati hoon,

  bitaye jo lamhe maine tere pehlu mai ,
  ek sukhe patte sa unhe sahlati hoon,

    aake roshan kare tu is veeran hasti ko,
    apne dar-e-dil ki dawa thujhe batati hoon,

  har din gujarta hai isi weham ko lekar,
  ki tu aaye aur jaye mujhe saath lekar,

    lekin nahi kat-ti raat kabhi bhi aise,
    andheren me jab bhi khud ko tanha paati hoon.
 
 har sham is..... 

Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut hi umda kamal ji akhri line se laga jaise apka kalaam adhura reh gya hai per yakinan bahut hi umda laga..
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«Reply #14 on: February 21, 2011, 08:50:32 AM »
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Kamal ji--aapka badappan hai jo iss nacheej ko achha kah gaye Usual Smile
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kaun duniya me poora hua
janam har insaan adhoora hua

khuwahison ki bandishon me dekho
sabhi ka marr marr kar hi jeena hua
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aapka behad sukriya
thanx
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