FAASLAA...

by surindarn on November 15, 2014, 09:14:26 AM
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Ek alarhh jawaanii sar pe matkee rakhe jaatii thii woh paanii ko bharne...
Woh haseen dosheezaa, haraa usskaa dupataa jaa rahaa thaa sarakne!

Mast aankhon se noor barsatii huee thii, main lagaa thaa chehakne...
Husn dilkash, phool sharmaatii huee thii, main lagaa thaa mehakne!

Zer-e-lab ek nagmaa dil-e-doz thaa uss.ne thaa khoob sajaayaa huaa...
Main ne geet kee tariff hee kee thii bas, sharmeelii lagii thii sehamne!

Bin awaaz hook uthhee thii dil se, naa jaane kaise sunlee thii ussne...
Sharmeelii nighaa kyaa uthaaii thii, meraa dil lagaa thaa bhehakne!

Haaye kaise kahoon kaise usske gaalon pe hayaa se surkhee aayii thii...
Tab haseen manzil sajaaii thii main ne, meraa dil lagaa thaa dharakne!

Taaj shah jahan ne banwaayaa thaa aur mamtaaz ne usse sajaayaa thaa...
Phir kyun lagii thii ek gareeb kee jhaunprhii bhi taj kee hee tarah mehakne!

Kahan ek shah kaa mahal aur merii jhaunprhii, zaraa faaslaa to dekhiye...
Dil shah aur gareeb kaa kis qadar mukhtalif thaa jo lagaa thaa bhehakne!!  love9 love9

Surindar.N                                      "MohanN"
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2014, 09:29:37 AM »
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Ek alarhh jawaanii sar pe matkee rakhe jaatii thii woh paanii bharne...
Woh haseen dosheezaa, haraa usskaa dupataa jaa rahaa thaa sarakne!

Mast aankhon se noor barsatii huee thii, main lagaa thaa chehakne...
Husn dilkash, phool sharmaatii huee thii, main lagaa thaa mehakne!

Zer-e-lab ek nagmaa dil-e-doz thaa uss.ne thaa khoob sajaayaa huaa...
Main ne geet kee tariff hee kee thii, sharmeelii lagii thii sehamne!

Bin awaaz hook uthhee thii dil se, naa jaane kaise sunlee thii ussne...
Sharmeelii nighaa kyaa uthaaii thii, meraa dil lagaa thaa bhehakne!

Haaye kaise kahoon kaise usske gaalon pe hayaa se surkhee aayii thii...
Tab haseen manzil sajaaii thii main ne, meraa dil lagaa thaa dharakne!

Taaj shah jahan ne banwaayaa thaa aur mamtaaz ne usse sajaayaa thaa...
Phir kyun lagii thii ek gareeb kee jhaunprhii bhi taj kee tarah mehakne!

Kahan ek shah kaa mahal aur merii jhaunprhii, zaraa faaslaa to dekhiye...
Ek shah aur ek gareeb kaa dil kitna mukhtalif thaa jo lagaa thaa bhehakne!!!

Surindar.N                                      "MohanN"


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«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2014, 09:39:37 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bohat bohat umda peshkash waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #4 on: November 15, 2014, 03:59:59 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoooooooob surindar ji... waaaaah waaaaaaaaah..
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«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2014, 01:48:48 AM »
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Bahut khoob.
bahut shukria Sagar Sahib.
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«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2014, 01:23:04 AM »
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bahut shukria Jeet Sahib.
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Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Saini Sahib.
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoooooooob surindar ji... waaaaah waaaaaaaaah..

bahut shukria Touhid Jee.
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