Faasle kam bhi kiye main ne....

by Aryaan on April 02, 2005, 03:49:03 AM
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Faasle Kam Bhi Kiye Main ne Faasle Mitaane Ke Liye
Door Tum Kyun Chale Gaye Yaad Aane Ke Liye
Woh Waade, Woh Qasmein, Woh Iraade, Bhool Jane Ke Baad
Phir Kyun Tum Chale Aaye Khwaabon Mein Mujhe Sataane Ke Liye
Saath Teri Tarha Choar Rahi Hain Saansein Meri
Lo Koi Chala Aaya Hai Mujhe Le Jaane Ke Liye
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2005, 04:54:44 AM »
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Wow Aryaan BUhat NICe....KAhan the tum inte dinon se?
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2005, 05:06:17 AM »
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Excellent Aryan
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2005, 11:38:03 AM »
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Quote from: "Aryaan"
Faasle Kam Bhi Kiye Main ne Faasle Mitaane Ke Liye
Door Tum Kyun Chale Gaye Yaad Aane Ke Liye
Woh Waade, Woh Qasmein, Woh Iraade, Bhool Jane Ke Baad
Phir Kyun Tum Chale Aaye Khwaabon Mein Mujhe Sataane Ke Liye
Saath Teri Tarha Choar Rahi Hain Saansein Meri
Lo Koi Chala Aaya Hai Mujhe Le Jaane Ke Liye


aryaan ji apki  nazm ki jitni tareef ki jaye woh kam hai. its just extra super duper!!!!!!!!!!!!!! par i think yeh shayari-e-dard me zada suit karti!

 :D
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2005, 12:05:20 PM »
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Thanks alot Princess, Dhadkan & Meena......Usual Smile

Princess Main bohat door thori rest karne gaya tha, Holland aur Germany ki khoob sair ki..Usual Smile

Meena.. :oops:  sach kaha aap ne, iss nazm ko shayri-e-dard  mein hi hona chahiye tha.... thaka huwa tha shayed... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2005, 07:40:36 PM »
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Faasle Kam Bhi Kiye Main ne Faasle Mitaane Ke Liye
Door Tum Kyun Chale Gaye Yaad Aane Ke Liye
Woh Waade, Woh Qasmein, Woh Iraade, Bhool Jane Ke Baad
Phir Kyun Tum Chale Aaye Khwaabon Mein Mujhe Sataane Ke Liye
Saath Teri Tarha Choar Rahi Hain Saansein Meri
Lo Koi Chala Aaya Hai Mujhe Le Jaane Ke Liye

bohat acha likha Aryaan!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2005, 12:17:01 AM »
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Shukriya Jalpari....
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2005, 11:49:04 AM »
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ur welcome Aryaan ji.. Usual Smile

Hamen apne dil men basaye rakhna,
Hamari yadon ke chiragh jalaye rakhna
Bahut lamba hai safar zindagi ka mere dost,
Ek hissa hamen bhi banaye rakhna!
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2005, 11:59:05 AM »
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good one
u r wonderful
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2005, 03:47:55 PM »
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shukriya Laparwah..... n Nice One Jalpari...

jab se para hai teri nigaahon se waasta
Kat-ti nahi raat, sitaaron se pooch lo...
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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2005, 10:30:10 PM »
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shukriya Laparwah..... n Nice One Jalpari...

jab se para hai teri nigaahon se waasta
Kat-ti nahi raat, sitaaron se pooch lo...

thanku Aryaan ji.. and nice1....Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2005, 09:22:16 PM »
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Thanks Jalpari.....

Dil tau kehta hai zamaane se chupa loon tujhko
Dil ki dharkan ki tarha dil mein basa loon tujhko
Koi ehsaas judai ka na rehne paye
Iss tarha khud mein meri jaan sama loon tujhko
Tu jo roothe kabhi mujhse mere dil ki malika
Saari duniya se khafa hoke mana loon tujhko
Jab bhi dekhoon tere chehre pe udaasi ka sama
Yehi chahta hoon ke kisi tarha hasa loon tujhko
Tu jo thak haar ke lauti tau yehi khwahish hai
Keh in palkon mein chupa loon tujhko....
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«Reply #12 on: April 05, 2005, 08:42:03 PM »
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Quote from: "Aryaan"
Thanks Jalpari.....

Dil tau kehta hai zamaane se chupa loon tujhko
Dil ki dharkan ki tarha dil mein basa loon tujhko
Koi ehsaas judai ka na rehne paye
Iss tarha khud mein meri jaan sama loon tujhko
Tu jo roothe kabhi mujhse mere dil ki malika
Saari duniya se khafa hoke mana loon tujhko
Jab bhi dekhoon tere chehre pe udaasi ka sama
Yehi chahta hoon ke kisi tarha hasa loon tujhko
Tu jo thak haar ke lauti tau yehi khwahish hai
Keh in palkon mein chupa loon tujhko....

ur welcome Aryaan Winking or yeh bhi lajawaab hai.. beautiful!
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2005, 08:57:07 AM »
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Thank you so much Jalpari.......................................
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«Reply #14 on: April 06, 2005, 10:17:03 AM »
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Thanks Jalpari.....

Dil tau kehta hai zamaane se chupa loon tujhko
Dil ki dharkan ki tarha dil mein basa loon tujhko
Koi ehsaas judai ka na rehne paye
Iss tarha khud mein meri jaan sama loon tujhko
Tu jo roothe kabhi mujhse mere dil ki malika
Saari duniya se khafa hoke mana loon tujhko
Jab bhi dekhoon tere chehre pe udaasi ka sama
Yehi chahta hoon ke kisi tarha hasa loon tujhko
Tu jo thak haar ke lauti tau yehi khwahish hai
Keh in palkon mein chupa loon tujhko....

ur welcome Aryaan Winking or yeh bhi lajawaab hai.. beautiful!


lolzzzzzzzzzz   aryan.........bahot  khoob......... excellent words.....
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