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by satay on October 03, 2012, 04:07:33 PM
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Phir bhi tu dil mein basi, kaisi hai ye preet

Kaisi hai ye preet kuch samajh na aayi
Aur bhi they hansi, par tu hee kyo dil ko bhai

Bahut hui tauba , bahut hui ladai
Tu to thi parai magar, dil ko ye baat, bahut der mein samajh aayi

Der aayi samjah , magar phir bhi ye dil khush hai
Mujhko mili judai , phir bhi kahi teri jhalak hai.....BY SPT
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2012, 04:08:38 PM »
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Phir bhi tu dil mein basi, kaisi hai ye preet

Kaisi hai ye preet kuch samajh na aayi
Aur bhi they hansi, par tu hee kyo dil ko bhai

Bahut hui tauba , bahut hui ladai
Tu to thi parai magar, dil ko ye baat, bahut der mein samajh aayi

Der aayi samjah , magar phir bhi ye dil khush hai
Mujhko mili judai , phir bhi kahi teri jhalak hai.....BY SPT

hahaha.. bahut sahi likha hai.. acha laga padkar  Usual Smile
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satay
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2012, 04:12:21 PM »
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Thank you very much.. happy3
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2012, 04:51:07 PM »
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Hi Satay, aapne koshish to acchi ki magar isme kuch missing hai, aisa lagta hai jaldbazi ki apne ya fir ye adhuri hai. I hope you will improve it .

Please don't take it in wrong way, I just shared my real opinion here.
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2012, 06:11:59 PM »
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Niiiiiiiiice......
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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2012, 12:16:51 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2012, 01:16:36 AM »
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satay sach hai kabhi bhi kuch bhi delete ho kar bhi delete nahi hota.
Sheel didi
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«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2012, 05:05:06 AM »
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nicccccccccccce
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«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2012, 01:23:56 PM »
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Yes
Hi Satay, aapne koshish to acchi ki magar isme kuch missing hai, aisa lagta hai jaldbazi ki apne ya fir ye adhuri hai. I hope you will improve it .

Please don't take it in wrong way, I just shared my real opinion here.
Koi baat nahi..your welcome ...suggestion always make better next time will try to  do my best..
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«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2012, 01:24:45 PM »
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Thanks for all feedback...
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«Reply #10 on: October 04, 2012, 01:30:54 PM »
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wonderful....
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