faisla -e- bewafai

by janhvi on June 10, 2011, 03:39:00 PM
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Humne ek khata karne ki thani hai,khud ko tujhse juda karne ki thani hai.
Aisa nahi ke tere sitam se darr gaye,khud ko tere gum me fanna karne ki thani hai.
meri kafiri ka alam to dekho,butt ko maine khuda karne ki thani hai,
aur kitne imtihan loge ai sitamgar bata,maine tujhse wafa karne ki thani hai,
bhar na jayen kahin janhvi k wo ghav purany,unhe kured kar naya karne ki thani hai.
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2011, 01:07:11 AM »
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Humne ek khata karne ki thani hai,khud ko tujhse juda karne ki thani hai.
Aisa nahi ke tere sitam se darr gaye,khud ko tere gum me fanna karne ki thani hai.
meri kafiri ka alam to dekho,butt ko maine khuda karne ki thani hai,
aur kitne imtihan loge ai sitamgar bata,maine tujhse wafa karne ki thani hai,
bhar na jayen kahin janhvi k wo ghav purany,unhe kured kar naya karne ki thani hai.

Very Touching ..... janhvi Ji!
Nice Creation .... Dil Se Daad ... !
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2011, 04:09:02 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2011, 04:59:53 PM »
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bahut aache janhvi ji...pad ker aacha laga.

Is Kambakht duniya mein dard hi milta hai
dard ko kabhi hara kerne ki na soochna,
unpe ashq bahane ki zarurat nhi hai,
per unke ashq bhi tum na poochna.
kabhi na kabhi to kismat meharbaan hogi
jo aaj hume jante nhi hai kabhi hum per unki jaan hogi.
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2011, 05:49:34 AM »
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good one Janhvi ji,

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