*~Falak Se Uttar Ke~*

by honeyrose on October 20, 2008, 09:21:12 AM
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 2283 times)
honeyrose
Guest
«Reply #15 on: October 21, 2008, 08:25:02 AM »
Reply with quote
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Honey, apki shayri padte waqat yahi lines man mai aai hai

falak se app hume shayri sunane aai hai
apni shayri se YoIndia ko jugmagane aai hai

Shukriya Pooja dear..

Shukriya bhawna dear..
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
MOHABAT SEY DIL MEY UTTAR JAYEINGEY by MAHERIZ in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
falak by kumaravasthi in Miscellaneous Shayri
Uttar do! by abdbundeli in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
ai falak yeh batla de kya quSoor tha mera ? by mistufer in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
uttar lo(CSET) by MANOJ6568 in Mazahiya Shayri(Funny Shayari)
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 6 hours and 17 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19903
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #16 on: October 21, 2008, 10:55:11 AM »
Reply with quote
Welcome Sis,.
Logged
Sayyid Randeri
Guest
«Reply #17 on: October 22, 2008, 01:51:43 AM »
Reply with quote
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Honey, apki shayri padte waqat yahi lines man mai aai hai

falak se app hume shayri sunane aai hai
apni shayri se YoIndia ko jugmagane aai hai

Bohot achchhi baat kahi pooja ji.
Logged
NODER
Guest
«Reply #18 on: October 22, 2008, 03:57:37 AM »
Reply with quote
Pooja sahiba and Shael sahiba dono ne  bahut accha likha hai aapne
Logged
Muhammed
Guest
«Reply #19 on: November 06, 2008, 04:07:42 AM »
Reply with quote
Falak se uttar ke tere dil mein rehne aaye hoon
Tumari zindagi mein noor banke aaye hoon

Zamaane se tujhe aapna banane aaye hoon
Tumari aankhon mein pyaar likhne aaye hoon

Falak se uttar ke tere labon ki hansi banke aaye hoon
Muhabbat ke paane mein tera naam likhne aaye hoon

Zindagi bhar ka rishta hai aapna tujhe yaad dilane aaye hoon
Falak se uttar ke tere rooh-o-jaan banke aaye hoon

**^^honeyrose^^**

HoneyCare !!!

Jee Honey Last Kalaam aapka oct.17 "Intezar ki Ghadi"..padha tha,,aaj Kaafi daraz wakfe k baad,meri aadat hai,der se aya hun.Maaf karna

Aur
Ye bada hi pyara kalaam hai badhiya ash'aar Likhe Hai..
a'la Andaz e Ishq bayaaN Hai Isme..Waah
Badhiya Jaya

Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB AUR BEHAD PYARA
KALAM LIKHA DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL

FALAK SE UTAR KAR AAYE HAI TERI AAGOSH ME,
PYAR DE DE TUJHE KAISE,KAISE KARE KHUSH HAI
HAM BASS ISI SOCH ME,

HAM FALAK KE SITARA HI SAHI PAR TERE ZAMEEN
KE CHAND KE BINA FALAK PE HAMARA GUJARA NAHI,

BHAR LE APNI BAAHOON ME KI TU AAB MERA HAI
ISS BAAT SE ZAMANA ANJANA NAHI...


Shally Badhiya Reply.Bahot Hi khub Likhe Hai ash'aar
aur Khas Kar Ye sher "Chand k bina Falaq pe hamara Gujara Nahi"
badhiya laga Mujhe.
Logged
honeyrose
Guest
«Reply #20 on: November 06, 2008, 04:54:02 AM »
Reply with quote
HoneyCare !!!

Jee Honey Last Kalaam aapka oct.17 "Intezar ki Ghadi"..padha tha,,aaj Kaafi daraz wakfe k baad,meri aadat hai,der se aya hun.Maaf karna

Aur
Ye bada hi pyara kalaam hai badhiya ash'aar Likhe Hai..
a'la Andaz e Ishq bayaaN Hai Isme..Waah
Badhiya Jaya

Shally Badhiya Reply.Bahot Hi khub Likhe Hai ash'aar
aur Khas Kar Ye sher "Chand k bina Falaq pe hamara Gujara Nahi"
badhiya laga Mujhe.

Shukriya Raza ...aapka... notworthy
Logged
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 07:22:18 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]

[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]

by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.102 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer