"fana hoke apni baqa chahta hu.n"

by aaina on April 29, 2009, 10:30:41 AM
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Fana hoke apni bqaa chahta hu.n
"Tere ishq ki inteha chahta hu.n"

Tum meri ho tumhari aankho mai mein
Iqraar e mohabbat ka nasha chahta hu.n

Tere gaisuo.n ko jo choo kar ke aaye
Mehekti wo baad e saba chahta hu.n

sirf nazr ka hum par chalega na mantar
jo qatil bhi ho, wo ada chahta hu.n

Tere kapkapate labo.n par machal kar
Wo lafz hun jo, bikharna chahta hu.n

Gar ishq e ghar tujhko khabr ho bta de
Bhatakta musafir hun pata chahta hu.n

Batao ke kaise tumhay mein bhulao.n
Tumhara bhi mein mashwara chahta hu.n

Is dour mai umeed e wafa sahyad aslam
Purani riwayaton ke naqsh pa chahta hu.n
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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2009, 10:49:31 AM »
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Waah bade dil se likha hai Aaina ji...Bahut khoob Dear Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2009, 11:42:13 AM »
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Khubsurat ghazal hai Aaina Ji
Sirf nazron ka hum per chalega na mantar
bahut achchha sher hai
Hum ghazalon ke shaukeen hain
Agar time mile to ghazal section me hamari ghazalen dekhiye
Aap achchha likhte ho, aapki rai hamare liye aham hogi
All the Best
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2009, 12:58:32 PM »
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Tumhara bhi main mashwara chahta hu........Bohat khoob Aslam..
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«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2009, 01:15:39 PM »
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behterin pure metre ke sath likhi hai aaina  ji
khoob sh_er kahe hai aapne ,laajawab
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«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2009, 05:05:53 PM »
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Lovely work Aslam.
Keep writing Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 29, 2009, 07:29:19 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 29, 2009, 10:30:41 AM
Fana hoke apni bqaa chahta hu.n
"Tere ishq ki inteha chahta hu.n"

Tum meri ho tumhari aankho mai mein
Iqraar e mohabbat ka nasha chahta hu.n

Tere gaisuo.n ko jo choo kar ke aaye
Mehekti wo baad e saba chahta hu.n

sirf nazr ka hum par chalega na mantar
jo qatil bhi ho, wo ada chahta hu.n

Tere kapkapate labo.n par machal kar
Wo lafz hun jo, bikharna chahta hu.n

Gar ishq e ghar tujhko khabr ho bta de
Bhatakta musafir hun pata chahta hu.n

Batao ke kaise tumhay mein bhulao.n
Tumhara bhi mein mashwara chahta hu.n

Is dour mai umeed e wafa sahyad aslam
Purani riwayaton ke naqsh pa chahta hu.n



Beautiful, as always  icon_thumleft

Aslam Ji, bohot achcha likha hai aapne, Bohot Khoob !
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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2009, 07:32:28 PM »
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Mashallah, Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aslam Bhai, Bohat Achchem,
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2009, 11:20:08 PM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on April 29, 2009, 10:49:31 AM
Waah bade dil se likha hai Aaina ji...Bahut khoob Dear Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya jannatjahan................
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2009, 11:21:39 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 29, 2009, 11:42:13 AM
Khubsurat ghazal hai Aaina Ji
Sirf nazron ka hum per chalega na mantar
bahut achchha sher hai
Hum ghazalon ke shaukeen hain
Agar time mile to ghazal section me hamari ghazalen dekhiye
Aap achchha likhte ho, aapki rai hamare liye aham hogi
All the Best
SARVESH RASTOGI

bhut bhut shukriya sarvesh sahab ji inshallah zaroor padunga...
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2009, 11:27:00 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 29, 2009, 12:58:32 PM
Tumhara bhi main mashwara chahta hu........Bohat khoob Aslam..

thnxxxx so much sajid sahab.
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 11:28:18 PM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on April 29, 2009, 01:15:39 PM
behterin pure metre ke sath likhi hai aaina  ji
khoob sh_er kahe hai aapne ,laajawab

hosla afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukriya saaz sahab........
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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2009, 11:29:25 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 29, 2009, 01:23:22 PM
bohot khoob Aaina ji...har ashaar umda hai..behad acha qalaam... Applause Applause

thnxxxx kaash........
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«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2009, 11:30:21 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on April 29, 2009, 05:05:53 PM
Lovely work Aslam.
Keep writing Applause

thnxxxxxx angel ji...
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«Reply #14 on: April 29, 2009, 11:31:15 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 29, 2009, 07:29:19 PM

Beautiful, as always  icon_thumleft

Aslam Ji, bohot achcha likha hai aapne, Bohot Khoob !

bhut bhut shukriya celmira ji..........
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