fasla bhi ab SANAM sa lagta hai…

by sacccha_pyar on May 11, 2005, 09:58:08 AM
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Yun to dostoN kaiyoN ne suna hoga ki pyar maiN neend ud jati hai ,,, pyas bhookh mar jati hai ... kuch aisa hi hai aaj ka kalaam .. bas hal-e-dil-e-aashique bayaN karne ki koshish,.. ki uski har ek ada pe kya mehsoos karta hai ye dil... kaisa lagta hai usse door reh kar,,... aur sansen lena kaise mushkil ho jata hai uske deedar ke bina.... pesh-e-khidmat hai ye nazraana ... umeed hai pasand aayega aap sabhi ko .. aapke vicharoN ka intzaar sada rehta hai ... ab bhi rahega ...

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ye faasla bhi ab yuN humeN, sanam sa lagta hai….
Hokar juda beeta pal humeN, janam sa lagta hai…

Harsu ek nasha mujhe leta yuN apni bahoN main…
Karma tera intzaar bhi humeN, karam sa lagta hai…

jal jate hai jab koi nazar tere jism ka ruk karti hai…
deedar subha-o-sham humeN, dharam sa lagta hai…

karta raha jamaana ab talak iltzayeN humse kitni…
tera chota sa alfaz bhi humeN, kasam sa lagta hai…

ho khafa humse har rishta parwah dil ko hai kahaN…
tera nazar hatana bhi ab humen, sitam sa lagta hai…

naam hai tere ye jiNdgi, aur mera ye “saccha_pyar”…
tujh bin jeena bhi ab humeN, khatham sa lagta hai…

Kunal
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2005, 08:27:49 PM »
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Yun to dostoN kaiyoN ne suna hoga ki pyar maiN neend ud jati hai ,,, pyas bhookh mar jati hai ... kuch aisa hi hai aaj ka kalaam .. bas hal-e-dil-e-aashique bayaN karne ki koshish,.. ki uski har ek ada pe kya mehsoos karta hai ye dil... kaisa lagta hai usse door reh kar,,... aur sansen lena kaise mushkil ho jata hai uske deedar ke bina.... pesh-e-khidmat hai ye nazraana ... umeed hai pasand aayega aap sabhi ko .. aapke vicharoN ka intzaar sada rehta hai ... ab bhi rahega ...

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ye faasla bhi ab yuN humeN, sanam sa lagta hai….
Hokar juda beeta pal humeN, janam sa lagta hai…

Harsu ek nasha mujhe leta yuN apni bahoN main…
Karma tera intzaar bhi humeN, karam sa lagta hai…

jal jate hai jab koi nazar tere jism ka ruk karti hai…
deedar subha-o-sham humeN, dharam sa lagta hai…

karta raha jamaana ab talak iltzayeN humse kitni…
tera chota sa alfaz bhi humeN, kasam sa lagta hai…

ho khafa humse har rishta parwah dil ko hai kahaN…
tera nazar hatana bhi ab humen, sitam sa lagta hai…

naam hai tere ye jiNdgi, aur mera ye “saccha_pyar”…
tujh bin jeena bhi ab humeN, khatham sa lagta hai…

Kunal
good work........................................
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2005, 06:38:09 AM »
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good work........................................


naved sahab shukriya.................................
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2005, 07:09:18 AM »
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Yun to dostoN kaiyoN ne suna hoga ki pyar maiN neend ud jati hai ,,, pyas bhookh mar jati hai ... kuch aisa hi hai aaj ka kalaam .. bas hal-e-dil-e-aashique bayaN karne ki koshish,.. ki uski har ek ada pe kya mehsoos karta hai ye dil... kaisa lagta hai usse door reh kar,,... aur sansen lena kaise mushkil ho jata hai uske deedar ke bina.... pesh-e-khidmat hai ye nazraana ... umeed hai pasand aayega aap sabhi ko .. aapke vicharoN ka intzaar sada rehta hai ... ab bhi rahega ...

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ye faasla bhi ab yuN humeN, sanam sa lagta hai….
Hokar juda beeta pal humeN, janam sa lagta hai…

Harsu ek nasha mujhe leta yuN apni bahoN main…
Karma tera intzaar bhi humeN, karam sa lagta hai…

jal jate hai jab koi nazar tere jism ka ruk karti hai…
deedar subha-o-sham humeN, dharam sa lagta hai…

karta raha jamaana ab talak iltzayeN humse kitni…
tera chota sa alfaz bhi humeN, kasam sa lagta hai…

ho khafa humse har rishta parwah dil ko hai kahaN…
tera nazar hatana bhi ab humen, sitam sa lagta hai…

naam hai tere ye jiNdgi, aur mera ye “saccha_pyar”…
tujh bin jeena bhi ab humeN, khatham sa lagta hai…

Kunal


jab dawa na mile, to dard ko hi dawa bana lete hain,
koi aur na mile, sharab ko hi saathi bana lete hain
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2005, 08:47:18 AM »
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jab dawa na mile, to dard ko hi dawa bana lete hain,
koi aur na mile, sharab ko hi saathi bana lete hain


wah janaab ...

shukriya aane ke liye...

aapka kunal
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2005, 11:00:29 AM »
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great man..!!! nice ! bahut acha likha hai @saccha pyaarrrrrrrrr
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2005, 11:55:33 AM »
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good bahut ache Kunal ji ........aur aapne bhi acha likha ha iDevdas ji ....keep it up

humko barbad karke vo iss tarah chal diye
ki jaise humse koi kabhi bhi vasta hi na tha

mujhe nazarein milayi aur iss tarah hass diye
ki jaise mere dard ka koi ehsaash hi na tha

hum tuh karte reh gaye unka intazaar hamesha
ki jaise humare liye tuh koi aur jine ka sahara hi na tha
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2005, 12:49:33 PM »
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Bohat khoob Kunal & Sandhaya.............
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2005, 09:01:32 PM »
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JANAM DIN MUBARAK HO, WISH KAR RAHE HAI HUM IS BAR,
EK SAAL PURI KHUSH RAHO, AAGE KI DEKHENGE AGLI BAR.
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2005, 01:22:03 PM »
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great man..!!! nice ! bahut acha likha hai @saccha pyaarrrrrrrrr


shukira shamim ji ...
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2005, 01:25:06 PM »
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good bahut ache Kunal ji ........aur aapne bhi acha likha ha iDevdas ji ....keep it up

humko barbad karke vo iss tarah chal diye
ki jaise humse koi kabhi bhi vasta hi na tha

mujhe nazarein milayi aur iss tarah hass diye
ki jaise mere dard ka koi ehsaash hi na tha

hum tuh karte reh gaye unka intazaar hamesha
ki jaise humare liye tuh koi aur jine ka sahara hi na tha


shukriya sandhya ji ..

jo aap khaksaar ki koshish pe iyne words likh jati hai... warna nacheez to nazar dalne layak tak nahi .. aapne bohat accha likha hai ...

aapka apna

kunal
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2005, 01:26:37 PM »
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Bohat khoob Kunal & Sandhaya.............


shukriya aaryan
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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2005, 01:27:56 PM »
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JANAM DIN MUBARAK HO, WISH KAR RAHE HAI HUM IS BAR,
EK SAAL PURI KHUSH RAHO, AAGE KI DEKHENGE AGLI BAR.


janamdin kiska hai sad5
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«Reply #13 on: May 14, 2005, 05:59:22 PM »
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Yun to dostoN kaiyoN ne suna hoga ki pyar maiN neend ud jati hai ,,, pyas bhookh mar jati hai ... kuch aisa hi hai aaj ka kalaam .. bas hal-e-dil-e-aashique bayaN karne ki koshish,.. ki uski har ek ada pe kya mehsoos karta hai ye dil... kaisa lagta hai usse door reh kar,,... aur sansen lena kaise mushkil ho jata hai uske deedar ke bina.... pesh-e-khidmat hai ye nazraana ... umeed hai pasand aayega aap sabhi ko .. aapke vicharoN ka intzaar sada rehta hai ... ab bhi rahega ...

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ye faasla bhi ab yuN humeN, sanam sa lagta hai….
Hokar juda beeta pal humeN, janam sa lagta hai…

Harsu ek nasha mujhe leta yuN apni bahoN main…
Karma tera intzaar bhi humeN, karam sa lagta hai…

jal jate hai jab koi nazar tere jism ka ruk karti hai…
deedar subha-o-sham humeN, dharam sa lagta hai…

karta raha jamaana ab talak iltzayeN humse kitni…
tera chota sa alfaz bhi humeN, kasam sa lagta hai…

ho khafa humse har rishta parwah dil ko hai kahaN…
tera nazar hatana bhi ab humen, sitam sa lagta hai…

naam hai tere ye jiNdgi, aur mera ye “saccha_pyar”…
tujh bin jeena bhi ab humeN, khatham sa lagta hai…

Kunal


Excellent work Kunal and sandhaya.
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«Reply #14 on: May 14, 2005, 09:12:37 PM »
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dard rokkta nahi aek pal bhi ...
eshq ki ea saza mil rahi hay ..
moot say phlay hi margay ham..
choth nazr ki aesi lagi hay..
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