FAZOOL ME HUM ------------ TANHA(SAURABH)

by Tanha(Saurabh) on May 10, 2010, 07:34:55 AM
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FAZOOL ME HUM CHARCHA-E-AAM HO GAYE,
KAHAAN MITNA THA, KAHAAN TAMAAM HO GAYE.

AARZOO THI BAS IK HANSI KI UNKI,
WO MUSKURA DIYE AUR APNE KAAM HO GAYE.

CHEHRA USKA KISI MAASOOM PARI KE JAISA,
USKE LAFZ BHI MOHABBAT KA JAAM HO GAYE.

KADMO KI AAHAT AB DHADKAN KI TARAH,
USKE ISHARE MILNE KA PAIGAAM HO GAYE.

KHAYAAL USKE IK AADAT KI TARAH BAN GAYE,
LO HUM LUTF ME, AATE HI SHAAM HO GAYE.

HUM THE JAISE EK UMR KE THAKE HUE,
WO PAAS BAITHE KI SAB AARAM HO GAYE.

US ROOP KI BAARISH SE HUE TARBATAR,
HAR PAINTRE BACHNE KE NAKAAM HO GAYE.

WO KHEHTE THE CHALO HUM JUDA HO JAAYEIN,
JO KHAYAL THE SAB ANJAAM HO GAYE.

ZINDGI BIN USKE PAHLE HI BAHUT MAHNGI THI,
AB SAANSO KE BHI BAHUT OONCHE DAAM HO GAYE.

AB KAHAAN ROZ KA TALLUKH APNA,
BARSON ME KAHIN DUA SALAAM HOGAYE.

ISHQ MEIN UNHI ‘TANHA’ FANA HO JAANA,
YE KISSE DEKHO BAHUT AAM HO GAYE.


-----TANHA(SAURABH)
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2010, 08:13:42 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Saurabh ji.very touching and mindblowing creation.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2010, 08:16:15 AM »
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Wah! Bahut umda peshkash hai, Saurabh Ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2010, 08:26:53 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah....

Lajawaab Saurabh Ji..

Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2010, 01:36:26 PM »
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Sourabh Ji... Behad Khoobsurat... Wah Ji Wah...
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2010, 08:31:55 PM »
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Vah VAh Tanha ji ..........

BBhut hi Kamal!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LAst 6 lines jst LAjawab!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2010, 10:07:20 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Saurabh ji... bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai ...!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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