feelings..............dil se dil tak

by smile_deep1 on September 22, 2004, 09:20:50 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 27, 2004, 06:18:55 PM »
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teri muskurahat ko sajde sanam'
teri muskurahat per marte hai hum,
tere muskurahat se khilta hai din ,
jeena nahi teri muskurahat ke bin.
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«Reply #16 on: September 27, 2004, 07:32:39 PM »
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wah bahoot khoobsoorat Smile....deep.
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«Reply #17 on: September 30, 2004, 08:06:20 AM »
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WELL WRITTEN POOJA JI
KEEP IT UP
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«Reply #18 on: September 30, 2004, 08:06:42 AM »
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KHAMOSHI

in khamoshi ko samjho,
yeh khamosh nahi
yeh bahut bolti hai.
yeh aapke dil ko
chupchap tatolti hai.
yeh to aap hai,jo
chupchap khade hai.
kahi yeh aap ki khamoshi to nahi,
jo mere dil ko yeh ,
likhne ko bolti hai.
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«Reply #19 on: October 02, 2004, 06:42:00 AM »
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MANZIL

Is zindagi ne apko,
sahil bana liya.
dekha jo maine apko,
is dil ko gawa diya.
aye jo aap pass main,
hur gum muskura diya.
hur raha khul gaye sanam,
mushkile bhi kho gayi.
chahat main humne aapke,
sab kuch bhula diya.
is zindagi ne aapko,
manzil bana liya.
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«Reply #20 on: October 03, 2004, 02:06:21 PM »
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PAL
pal pal tarsa jis pal kai liye,
woh pal bhi mila to pal bhar kai liye.
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«Reply #21 on: October 03, 2004, 02:43:40 PM »
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Very nice smile_deep

ek pal main ek sadi ka maza hum se puchhiye
do din ki zindagi ka maza hum se puchhiye  (NM)
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«Reply #22 on: October 03, 2004, 05:19:51 PM »
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PAL
pal pal tarsa jis pal kai liye,
woh pal bhi mila to pal bhar kai liye.



Wah...Smile Deep ji bahoot hi khoob....apki shayari bahoot hi simple words mai magar bahoot hi gahari hai.....bahoot khoob...
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«Reply #23 on: October 03, 2004, 05:31:55 PM »
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shukriya talat ji and pooja ji........... well main jo likhti hun dil se.... isliye simple hoti hain hain.......... aacha laga sun kar ki u all liked it...   bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #24 on: October 09, 2004, 07:07:21 PM »
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thukraya tha jise zamanay nay nakabi kehkar,
aaj wahi unkai beech kabiley tareef kyun hain


deep
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Pooja
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«Reply #25 on: October 09, 2004, 09:44:29 PM »
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wah!!!
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«Reply #26 on: October 10, 2004, 12:20:37 PM »
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wah!!!!!!!!1  smile deep...............talat

yadon ki dehliz per ab bhi dastak dene ata hai
ek akela shaks ke jisne sher likhe aur ishq kiya...........
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«Reply #27 on: October 11, 2004, 05:23:34 AM »
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thanks pooja ji......................
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«Reply #28 on: October 11, 2004, 05:28:46 AM »
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bahut khoob waheed ji.............

sher utna kabil-e-tarif hota hain ,
kalam main jitni dhar hoti hain..
kalam ki dhar to unse hain ,
jinse dil-e-takrar hoti hain
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«Reply #29 on: October 11, 2004, 10:29:35 AM »
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socha kai hal-e-zindagi,
apni aaj hum likhay.
kitab lekar baithay thai,
zindagi kuch punno main simmat gayin............
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