feelings..............dil se dil tak

by smile_deep1 on September 22, 2004, 09:20:50 PM
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«Reply #90 on: December 12, 2004, 06:49:02 AM »
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very  nice kamal ji n rishi ji n smile_deep1


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«Reply #91 on: December 12, 2004, 09:27:55 AM »
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Thanks Myheart ji
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«Reply #92 on: December 12, 2004, 11:48:15 AM »
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very  nice kamal ji n rishi ji n smile_deep1


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thanks heart  Usual Smile
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«Reply #93 on: December 12, 2004, 12:07:32 PM »
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ur vvelcome deep ji


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«Reply #94 on: December 12, 2004, 12:11:51 PM »
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ur vvelcome deep ji


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hmmmmmmmmmm..........  Usual Smile
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«Reply #95 on: December 13, 2004, 06:58:24 AM »
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khud ko dekha ainay main,
mere pichey ek parchayin hain.
Rahey zindagy main chalte huye,
aahat aur kisi ki bhi ayin hain.
mere zindagy main hi nahin,
har taraf ek bhini se khushboo chayin hain.
mere khushiyon main bhi......
kissi ki deti hasi sunayin hain.
bahut soocha to paya kai........
yeh sari batain aap kai saath hi,
humari zindagy main ayin hain..................
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«Reply #96 on: December 13, 2004, 02:25:30 PM »
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khud ko dekha ainay main,
mere pichey ek parchayin hain.
Rahey zindagy main chalte huye,
aahat aur kisi ki bhi ayin hain.
mere zindagy main hi nahin,
har taraf ek bhini se khushboo chayin hain.
mere khushiyon main bhi......
kissi ki deti hasi sunayin hain.
bahut soocha to paya kai........
yeh sari batain aap kai saath hi,
humari zindagy main ayin hain..................


Bahut khoob...Smile jiiiiiiiiiiiii
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KaMaL
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«Reply #97 on: December 13, 2004, 02:28:13 PM »
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Thanx everyone !
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wo wadaa karti hain, magar nahi aati hain,
us par sitam ye ke khud hi rooth jaati hain,
kehti hain ke abhi na karoongi ikraar-e-wafa,
rasmon ke bandhan hum ko samjhaati hain,
main aaongi, magar aaoongi doli mein baith ke dilbar,
tab tak karo intezaar, kehti hain aur muskuraati hain....
**



Bahut umda shairee likhi Rishi..waaaaaah..

Mujhse milne ka waada to kar liya usne

Mujhse milne ka waada to kar liya usne
Jagah poochi to keh diya khwaab mein

Meri saari wafaon ko na bhulaane ka waada to kar liya usne
Par jab sila maanga to keh diya baad mein

Mujhse kabhi Sharaab na peene ka waada to le liya usne
Nazar mujhse mila(se pila) ke keh diya ki, dhut hoon sharaab mein

Mujhe dil dene ka waada to kar liya usne
Par jab dil maanga to keh diya hisaab mein




Woh waada karte hain, par nibhaate nahin hain
Par hum hain aur pe aur waade liye jaate hain
Ki agli baar to woh waada jaroor nibhayenge
Kya karein umeed ke sahaare jiye jaate hain
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«Reply #98 on: December 13, 2004, 06:25:56 PM »
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thanks kamalji and ............... goodwork
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KaMaL
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«Reply #99 on: December 14, 2004, 02:31:51 AM »
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Thanks and ur welcome Smile ji
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #100 on: December 14, 2004, 05:30:52 AM »
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Quote from: "KaMaL"
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Thanx everyone !
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wo wadaa karti hain, magar nahi aati hain,
us par sitam ye ke khud hi rooth jaati hain,
kehti hain ke abhi na karoongi ikraar-e-wafa,
rasmon ke bandhan hum ko samjhaati hain,
main aaongi, magar aaoongi doli mein baith ke dilbar,
tab tak karo intezaar, kehti hain aur muskuraati hain....
**



Bahut umda shairee likhi Rishi..waaaaaah..

Mujhse milne ka waada to kar liya usne

Mujhse milne ka waada to kar liya usne
Jagah poochi to keh diya khwaab mein

Meri saari wafaon ko na bhulaane ka waada to kar liya usne
Par jab sila maanga to keh diya baad mein

Mujhse kabhi Sharaab na peene ka waada to le liya usne
Nazar mujhse mila(se pila) ke keh diya ki, dhut hoon sharaab mein

Mujhe dil dene ka waada to kar liya usne
Par jab dil maanga to keh diya hisaab mein




Woh waada karte hain, par nibhaate nahin hain
Par hum hain aur pe aur waade liye jaate hain
Ki agli baar to woh waada jaroor nibhayenge
Kya karein umeed ke sahaare jiye jaate hain



very nice kamal ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #101 on: December 15, 2004, 08:20:57 AM »
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dil-o-dil main woh khwaishe dafnaye ja rahey hain...
woh dekho woh fir bhi muskuraye ja rahey hain
sochtey hain bekhabar hain hum unki is wafa se
wo kya jane unki khwasion ko dil main apnay,
sajaye ja rahe hain hum.................
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«Reply #102 on: December 15, 2004, 11:15:38 AM »
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dil-o-dil main woh khwaishe dafnaye ja rahey hain...
woh dekho woh fir bhi muskuraye ja rahey hain
sochtey hain bekhabar hain hum unki is wafa se
wo kya jane unki khwasion ko dil main apnay,
sajaye ja rahe hain hum.................



Nice.......................!
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«Reply #103 on: December 16, 2004, 08:34:06 AM »
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dil-o-dil main woh khwaishe dafnaye ja rahey hain...
woh dekho woh fir bhi muskuraye ja rahey hain
sochtey hain bekhabar hain hum unki is wafa se
wo kya jane unki khwasion ko dil main apnay,
sajaye ja rahe hain hum.................


wowowowowo smile.........bahot shandaar........nice wordings.....
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«Reply #104 on: December 16, 2004, 08:57:26 AM »
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shukriya lovebites nad waheed ji.....................  Usual Smile
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