Gam mila gam may maja aney laga

by sushilbansal on September 27, 2012, 01:35:03 AM
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Gam mila gam may maja Aney laga
dard mayra dekh muskuraney laga

Yeh nahi acha hua mayrey liye
pal khushi ka rooj behkaney laga

HAl jo bhavaray nay pucha bag ka
khil utha dekho ki sharmaney laga

Must ho kar jab pawan behnay lagi
dil mayra bhi nach kar ganey laga

Der mayray gam Aaj nacha zum kar
ghar mayra bhi aaj muskuranay laga

puchta tha jo mujeh har bat kal
Aaj 'sheel' bat samjhaney laga.
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2012, 01:55:57 AM »
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Bahut  khubsurat  ghazal  hai , Sheelji . 2nd  sher  aur
maqta  mujhe  bahut  achha  laga . dheron  badhai .
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2012, 02:42:02 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad sheel didi
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2012, 04:04:28 AM »
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bahut khoob baht hi badhiya aur umda gazal sheel diii  ......

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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2012, 05:18:48 AM »
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waah waah didi tussi great ho ye leejiye rau
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2012, 06:53:18 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 27, 2012, 01:55:57 AM
Bahut  khubsurat  ghazal  hai , Sheelji . 2nd  sher  aur
maqta  mujhe  bahut  achha  laga . dheron  badhai .
thank you bhaiya .Rau kay liye shukria
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2012, 07:23:44 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 27, 2012, 02:42:02 AM
bahut khoob, dhero dad sheel didi
thank you
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2012, 02:32:26 PM »
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Sheel didi bahut khoob likha hai aap ne...
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«Reply #8 on: September 28, 2012, 05:24:16 AM »
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Thank you Gaytri ji.na janey keyu aaj Sheel didi likeney ko dil nahi kar raha. lag raha hai koi piyara sa dost sath hai. sheel
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«Reply #9 on: September 28, 2012, 07:46:33 AM »
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thank u aap ne hme dost mana ....
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«Reply #10 on: September 28, 2012, 11:19:23 AM »
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Sheel Dii Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH Dii kia baat hai badi hi khoobsurat kalaam
kahi hai aapne.... Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe...

gazab ke khayaal aur umdaa ahsaasaat ko khoob lafzoN meiN
baNdha hai aapne... Usual Smile
Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: September 28, 2012, 11:40:47 AM »
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waaaah sheelji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: September 29, 2012, 12:55:59 AM »
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bahut khub Sushil ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 29, 2012, 01:53:46 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 28, 2012, 11:19:23 AM
Sheel Dii Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH Dii kia baat hai badi hi khoobsurat kalaam
kahi hai aapne.... Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe...

gazab ke khayaal aur umdaa ahsaasaat ko khoob lafzoN meiN
baNdha hai aapne... Usual Smile
Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Parwaz Bhai jan,
Bhavnao kay samman kay liye shukria.
Aaj insan khudgarji ki dal dal may aur kuhshiyo ko dhondta hoa ulzh kar reh giya hai.na janey keyu apney ahem ko nahi mita pata.mayre seeney may daba hua jawalamukhi sa dard ka sagar kalam ki noak say behney laga hai.
Aap ka dii likhna (It means lot to me.)Once again thank you.
sheel didi
I want you to see me on my face book Lioness sushil Bansal
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«Reply #14 on: September 30, 2012, 02:46:29 PM »
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on September 28, 2012, 07:46:33 AM
thank u aap ne hme dost mana ....
apni apni keh rahey
koi suney na bath
rishtey natey nam kay
hava huay jajbat.

Tabhi to dosto ki jarurt hoti hai.ham nay kal apko face book par dekha tha.
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