gam rakh lye tere...........Bhupinder DHILLON

by BhupinderDHILLON on August 12, 2012, 05:04:14 AM
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Paa neevi tere kolo langh
jana.
mai akh tere vall nahi chukni,
jo apne vaichale vaahi tu,
mai
bhulke v oh neeh nahio tapni,
yaari da lekkha jokha jadho mrzi
kar lai ni baliye,
gam rakh laye tere
main hor
cheez koi nahi rakhni.
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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2012, 05:36:15 AM »
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Paa neevi tere kolo langh
jana.
mai akh tere vall nahi chukni,
jo apne vaichale vaahi tu,
mai
bhulke v oh neeh nahio tapni,
yaari da lekkha jokha jadho mrzi
kar lai ni baliye,
gam rakh laye tere
main hor
cheez koi nahi rakhni.
.
.
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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2012, 06:48:22 AM »
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