Gaye

by Quateel Ahmad on January 21, 2012, 08:51:23 AM
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Ranj o fiqr mein mah o saal gaye
shab e vasl mein saare janjaal gaye

Iqraar teri aankhon mein aate hi
Duniya se adaavat ke khayal gaye

teri zulf ka saaya mila jo mujhko
saare khayal e zeest e lamuhal gaye

Mera naseeb nahin to tum kya ho
tumhaare lams se tanhaaiyon ke sawaal gaye

Jabse meri ragon mein ravaa tum ho
chehre se saare nishaan e zavaal gaye
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2012, 09:04:36 AM »
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Quote from: Quateel Ahmad on January 21, 2012, 08:51:23 AM
Ranj o fiqr mein mah o saal gaye
shab e vasl mein saare janjaal gaye

Iqraar teri aankhon mein aate hi
Duniya se adaavat ke khayal gaye

teri zulf ka saaya mila jo mujhko
saare khayal e zeest e lamuhal gaye

Mera naseeb nahin to tum kya ho
tumhaare lams se tanhaaiyon ke sawaal gaye

Jabse meri ragon mein ravaa tum ho
chehre se saare nishaan e zavaal gaye


waaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2012, 09:20:25 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
nice
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2012, 10:56:25 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2012, 11:00:31 AM »
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Quote from: Quateel Ahmad on January 21, 2012, 08:51:23 AM
Ranj o fiqr mein mah o saal gaye
shab e vasl mein saare janjaal gaye
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Iqraar teri aankhon mein aate hi
Duniya se adaavat ke khayal gaye
khoob

teri zulf ka saaya mila jo mujhko
saare khayal e zeest e lamuhal gaye
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mera naseeb nahin to tum kya ho
tumhaare lams se tanhaaiyon ke sawaal gaye

Jabse meri ragon mein ravaa tum ho
chehre se saare nishaan e zavaal gaye

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


bahut khoob.....!
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2012, 12:36:49 PM »
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Qateel Sahab, bahot achhi takhleeq hai. Parhkar bahot achha laga. Meri taraf se daad qabool farmayen.
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2012, 04:59:41 PM »
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Bahut Khoob
Apke liye daad haajir hai janaab.
Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2012, 08:37:15 PM »
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Doston, aap sabhi ka bahut shukriya... Is forum ke liye naya hoon aur hausla afzaayi ke liye shukraguzaar
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2012, 04:01:50 AM »
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bahut khoob qateel saheb
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«Reply #11 on: March 12, 2012, 05:40:52 AM »
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Quote from: Quateel Ahmad on January 21, 2012, 08:51:23 AM
Ranj o fiqr mein mah o saal gaye
shab e vasl mein saare janjaal gaye

Iqraar teri aankhon mein aate hi
Duniya se adaavat ke khayal gaye

teri zulf ka saaya mila jo mujhko
saare khayal e zeest e lamuhal gaye

Mera naseeb nahin to tum kya ho
tumhaare lams se tanhaaiyon ke sawaal gaye

Jabse meri ragon mein ravaa tum ho
chehre se saare nishaan e zavaal gaye

gud one
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MashaAllah, kya khoob likha hai aapne Quateel Saheb. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.
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Shukriya KhamoshAwaazji aur Iftekhar Sahab!!
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qateel sahab bahut khoob likha hai aapne mubaraq ho.
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