~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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Meri ek nazm main ek line thi "ab mohobat par mohobat se likha nahin jata"..Aj iss line ko kisi shaks ne badalne ki wajah di hai..

Meri yeh nazm uss shaks kay naam hai jisne mujhe dobara dil se jeena aur muskurana seekhaya hai..bas ussi ek shaks kay liye hai..

Ager apne kisi se kabhi bhi mohobat ki hai, toh usse zaroor batana woh kitna khaas hai..kya pata, woh yeh sun'ne kay liye kitna bekarar ho aur issi bekarari kay saath kahin dhoor chale jaye..woh jane se pehle, zaroor usse pata hona chahiye, woh kitna khaas hai.. Usual Smile

~Doob jaa unki aankhon main Faraz,
Badi haseen samander hai, khud-khushi karne kay liye~

Tu jo haan kar de saath dene ko mera, dil roshan hojaega,
Ajaye jo teri parchai dil main mere, saaya ghum ka sojaega..

Kinaron ko jab nahin milta saath samandar ka, waisa hai haal mera tujh bin,
Tujse dhooriyon kay lamhon main dekhe koi pathar mujhe, woh bhi rojaega..

Tu aur main kisi chandni raat main ho akele kahin dhoor duniya se, dua hai meri,
Aisi sham jo naseeb hojaye mujhe, toh mere labon se phir raha nahin jaega..

Maine khaye hai zakhm mohobat kay pehle bhi, hausla hai dil main phir bhi,
Dard ki parwah mat kar jaana, yeh dekh kay na mile mohobat toh dil murjha jaega..

Tu mujse meri saanson se kareeb hai aur mujse milon ki dhooriyon par bhi hai,
Haqeeqat main shayad nahin mager khwabon main sirf mera..aur mera hi banke reh jaega..

Chahe tu mujhe mil kay na mil, bas itna kehna chahunga tujse ae humdum,
Mere baad, tere paas, shayad tere dil main, ‘Khamosh’,
Ek yaad hi sahi, mager tera banke reh jaega, tujh main bahaut gehrayi tak bas kay jaega..

~..Rahym..~..A Silent Heart..~


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Re: ~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym

«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2013, 07:13:47 AM »

Wooooooooooow kya kahena Rahim ji. bahut hi romantic lajawaab peshkash superb.


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Miru;;;;

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Re: ~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym

«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2013, 08:04:02 AM »

WAAH WAAH ...SUPAR..!!
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Re: ~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym

«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2013, 09:01:42 AM »

nice


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Re: ~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym

«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2013, 01:19:35 PM »

mohabbat se bhari hui khoobsurat ehsaas se saji hui umda peshkash rahim ji. hazaron dili daad qubool ho.


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Re: ~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym

«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2013, 02:13:23 PM »

Its Excellent....................
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Re: ~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym

«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2013, 02:58:39 PM »

nyc ,.....................daad,..........


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: ~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym

«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2013, 05:43:27 PM »

Bahut Khoob.


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Re: ~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym

«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2013, 11:17:34 PM »

din me padha tha..par javaab nahee de paaya.
bahut khoobsurat khayaalaat se labrej hai ye nazm.
bahut badhiya..dil ko choone vaali


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Re: ~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym

«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2013, 11:51:55 PM »

Waa bahaut khoob daad apko Rahim ji


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Re: ~ Gehrayi tak bas jaega tujh main 'Khamosh' ~ by Rahym

«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2013, 03:15:24 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 25, 2013, 07:13:47 AM

Wooooooooooow kya kahena Rahim ji. bahut hi romantic lajawaab peshkash superb.

Quote from: Miru;;;; on June 25, 2013, 08:04:02 AM

WAAH WAAH ...SUPAR..!!
Clapping Smiley

Quote from: sksaini4 on June 25, 2013, 09:01:42 AM

nice

Quote from: aqsh on June 25, 2013, 01:19:35 PM

mohabbat se bhari hui khoobsurat ehsaas se saji hui umda peshkash rahim ji. hazaron dili daad qubool ho.

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 25, 2013, 02:13:23 PM

Its Excellent....................
Clapping Smiley

Quote from: laaiba on June 25, 2013, 02:58:39 PM

nyc ,.....................daad,..........

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 25, 2013, 05:43:27 PM

Bahut Khoob.

Quote from: mkv on June 25, 2013, 11:17:34 PM

din me padha tha..par javaab nahee de paaya.
bahut khoobsurat khayaalaat se labrej hai ye nazm.
bahut badhiya..dil ko choone vaali

Quote from: zarraa on June 25, 2013, 11:51:55 PM

Waa bahaut khoob daad apko Rahim ji

Ap tamam ka tahe tahe dil se shukriya ada karta hoon..
Apne waqt diya yeh bahaut badi baat hai mere liye..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye!


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