Ghar Banauga

by Jaabeer on July 02, 2013, 05:44:14 PM
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Dariya kinare tere sath ghar banauga,
Warna to ghar ke paas samanadar banauga...

Kam lag rahi sapno ki udaan tere saath,
Apni udaan k liye ab par banauga...

tu sath mere ho to yaha khuld bhi ban jaye,
Jo tu nahi to jannate kyo kar banauga??

Mushkil se tera hath mere haath me ab he,
"Suroor" me rishta ye barabar banauga..
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2013, 06:01:07 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2013, 07:37:39 PM »
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bahut sundar Jaabeer ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2013, 08:02:54 PM »
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Dariya kinare tere sath ghar banauga,
Warna to ghar ke paas samanadar banauga...
ha ha ha ,sir
Kam lag rahi sapno ki udaan tere saath,
Apni udaan k liye ab par banauga...

tu sath mere ho to yaha khuld bhi ban jaye,
Jo tu nahi to jannate kyo kar banauga??

Mushkil se tera hath mere haath me ab he,
"Suroor" me rishta ye barabar banauga..


good one,sir
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2013, 12:43:41 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2013, 06:42:20 PM »
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Awesome lines.So deep and meaningful lines. Way to go!  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2013, 06:43:53 PM »
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Zarra nawazi aapki mohtaramaa
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