Gharse benaqab jo niklo ge

by Advo.RavinderaRavi on January 13, 2013, 10:12:24 PM
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Gharse benaqab jo niklo ge,
Aashiqo se do char ho niklo ge,
Har gali sadak choraahe par,
Hongi in poojariyo se mulaqat,
Ishaq ke naye tarike honge,
Dekhe phir kaise bach niklo ge,
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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2013, 04:07:15 AM »
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poor color choice padhaa naheen gayaa
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2013, 04:46:15 AM »
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good but use some dark colours
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2013, 05:23:05 AM »
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nice but dark colous should be used
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