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gaye mausamon ki khabar nahi.naye mausamon ka pataa nahi
woh mere sheher se chala gaya kisi gul ne mujh se kaha nahi
yehi soch kar meri ankh se kabhi koi ashk bahaa nahi
rahe aankh mein hai wohi ghatta, jo baras gaee wo ghatta nahi
is dil mein aas ka ik dia , wo gaya tu hum ne jalaa lia
wo dia jo dil mein udaasiyon bhari aandhiyon se bujhaa nahi
main charaagh sa hoo bujhaa bujhaa, shab-e-hijr teerah-o-taar nahi
main ne khud chuni hai yeh teergi mujhe us se koi gila nahi
mutawaqqo hijr k sog mein hi guzat na jaoon main jaan se
mujhe koi de ye khabar k han wo gayaa nahi, wo gayaa nahi
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2006, 11:02:56 AM » |
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hello sunny ye kaisa topic diya hai aapne........  |
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2006, 11:29:26 AM » |
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SUNNY MAIN NAHI SAMJI K SIRF BRO AUR MEHEK K LIYE KYU???
WAISE GUD ONE
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2006, 01:29:14 PM » |
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bohat khoob sunny ji bohat acha likhte hain aap  aur yeh thread ka chakkar kya hai ... hahhahahaa. anyways thanx |
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2006, 01:39:46 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2006, 05:16:35 PM » |
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gaye mausamon ki khabar nahi.naye mausamon ka pataa nahi
woh mere sheher se chala gaya kisi gul ne mujh se kaha nahi
yehi soch kar meri ankh se kabhi koi ashk bahaa nahi
rahe aankh mein hai wohi ghatta, jo baras gaee wo ghatta nahi
is dil mein aas ka ik dia , wo gaya tu hum ne jalaa lia
wo dia jo dil mein udaasiyon bhari aandhiyon se bujhaa nahi
main charaagh sa hoo bujhaa bujhaa, shab-e-hijr teerah-o-taar nahi
main ne khud chuni hai yeh teergi mujhe us se koi gila nahi
mutawaqqo hijr k sog mein hi guzat na jaoon main jaan se
mujhe koi de ye khabar k han wo gayaa nahi, wo gayaa nahi Thnx Sunny to dedicate it to me......aur bahut hee accha likha hai.. |
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sunny_bewafa
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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2006, 06:46:21 PM » |
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aisi koi baat nahe hai main ne yeh title es liye diya ke mujhay 1st reply badnam shayer or mehek ne kiya tha es liye main ne un ko yeh ghazal dedicate kari aap log plz bura na manae buss app logo ki duua chahiye bye sunny_bewafa
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2006, 08:36:47 PM » |
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aisi koi baat nahe hai main ne yeh title es liye diya ke mujhay 1st reply badnam shayer or mehek ne kiya tha es liye main ne un ko yeh ghazal dedicate kari aap log plz bura na manae buss app logo ki duua chahiye bye sunny_bewafa Sunny apka duaein lene ka tarika acha hai sirf mehek aur BS ko gazal dedicate karo ge aur duaien hum sab se loge wow dnt wry humari dua e fir bhi tumhare saath hai |
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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2006, 10:17:45 AM » |
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thx all of u soriya gee lugta hai aap ko bura laga ainda se ahtiyat karonga ke title main mehek or badnam shayer ka naam na aaye ok bye
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«Reply #9 on: March 24, 2006, 11:17:57 AM » |
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aacha sunny ji koi baat nahi par aap ye tu batayi ye ki hum bhi is main post kar sakte ya phir bas mehek aur guru ke liye hai ye.......... waise u wrote nice |
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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2006, 11:24:18 AM » |
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nahe aap bh post kar suktay hai aisi koi baat nahe hai agar aap abh hai tu mujhay reply karain bye ke meri shairi pasna haaye aap ko ya nahe
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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2006, 11:30:06 AM » |
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ji zaroor likhen ge kuch
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2006, 05:33:23 PM » |
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sunny ji.. its ok.. dont loose heart.. yahan koi bura nahi maanta.. aap bas aise hi achi shayari likhte rahiyega.. aap bohat umdah likhte hain.. |
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«Reply #13 on: March 24, 2006, 10:04:58 PM » |
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hey sunny tum bahut acha likhte ho keep rytin all of us r here 4 sab sab to uhi mazak kar rahe the is forum mein sab bhut ache hai koi bura nahi manta
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«Reply #14 on: March 25, 2006, 08:31:58 AM » |
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Ok......Sunny....Now this one i dedicate to you.....and this one is my Favourite........
Ghazal likhi toh tera Chehra saamne aata hai......
Padke uss Ghazal ko yeh Shayar tujhme kho jaata hai.....
Banaya hai teri Yaadon ka basera maine kahin door......
Jahan harr Lafz meri Shayahein se Dard mein ubhar ke ata hai.....
Teri Zulfon me sona...Teri aankhon me khona.....
Tere saath beeta harr pal mujhe Tadpata hai......
Jaante hain sab ki Dard ke Siwa kuch nahi Mahobbat me.....
Phir bhi harr Aashiq Pyar karke Shayar bann jata hai.......
Shayad yahi ek Pyar or Dard ki bhasha hai..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~**Badnaam Shayar**~~
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