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by khalidrawat on October 02, 2013, 10:59:14 AM
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وہ ہے غافل اسےآگاہئ۔حالات نہیں
اس کو چھو لوں بھی تو ڈرنے کی کوئ بات نہیں

نہ رہی ہاتھ کبھی عشق کی بازی اپنے
چال چلنے کی کثر تھی کہ ہوئ مات نہیں!

نیک وہ ہیں جو تری بزم میں آ سکتے ہیں
وہ کمینے ہیں جنہیں شرف۔ملاقات نہیں

ڈرتےڈرتے ہی سہی پینے چلا جاتاہوں
کون کہتاہے کہ میں رند۔ خرابات نہیں

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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2013, 11:24:57 AM »
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Bahut achhe ashaar hain Khalid saheb .
Lekin aap ka kalaam zyada qaarieen tak
pahunche iske liye zuroori hai ki aap
Roman mein bhi post karein .
       Khair andesh , Hasan
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«Reply #2 on: October 02, 2013, 12:19:04 PM »
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Bahut khoob
2nd ashaar khoob kaha aapne.
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«Reply #3 on: October 02, 2013, 01:18:29 PM »
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Roman men likhe to ham bhee padh len
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2013, 01:51:58 PM »
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ڈرتےڈرتے ہی سہی پینے چلا جاتاہوں
کون کہتاہے کہ میں رند۔ خرابات نہیں

waah waah khalid sahab bohut achha likha hai
lekin roman mein likhte to baki logon ko padhne me
aur usper comment karne mein asaani hoti.

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«Reply #5 on: October 02, 2013, 02:03:06 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaah bahut hi achchi peshkash rahi khalid ji...sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. aapko is khoob kalaam par dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaad...

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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2013, 02:10:11 PM »
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Khaalid bhaai ki kalaam ko roman me likhne ki koshish ki hai.. Waise to apun ko urdu jyada palle nahii partii.. Esliye galtii huyii hogii... Jo shaahab urduu baakhubii jaante ho wo galtii durust karwaa de... Sukriyaa

Wo hai gaafil aese aagaahee halaat nahee.
Es ko chhu luun bhii to darne kii koi baat nahee.

Na rahee haath kabhee ishq kii baazii apne.
Chaal chalne kii kasar thii ki huii maat nahee.

Nek wo hai jo terii bazam me aa sakte hai.
Wo kamiine hai jinhe sarf mulaakaat nahee.
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Darte darte hii sahii piine chalaa jata huun.
Kaun kahtaa hai maiN rind-kharaabaat nahee.
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Khaalid Jameel Raawat
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«Reply #7 on: October 02, 2013, 02:53:04 PM »
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نہ رہی ہاتھ کبھی عشق کی بازی اپنے
چال چلنے کی کثر تھی کہ ہوئ مات نہیں!
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2013, 04:43:07 PM »
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وہ ہے غافل اسےآگاہئ۔حالات نہیں
اس کو چھو لوں بھی تو ڈرنے کی کوئ بات نہیں

نہ رہی ہاتھ کبھی عشق کی بازی اپنے
چال چلنے کی کثر تھی کہ ہوئ مات نہیں!

نیک وہ ہیں جو تری بزم میں آ سکتے ہیں
وہ کمینے ہیں جنہیں شرف۔ملاقات نہیں

ڈرتےڈرتے ہی سہی پینے چلا جاتاہوں
کون کہتاہے کہ میں رند۔ خرابات نہیں

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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2013, 10:38:43 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob janaab, yuN hi likhte rahiye aur aate rahiye.
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