ghazal:Ik sitara mere dunya se he takraya hua

by khalidrawat on May 06, 2014, 05:41:28 AM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 685 times)
khalidrawat
Guest
Reply with quote
Ghazal:
Ik sitara mere dunya se he takraya hua
Hoo ka aalam he her ik simt yahaan chaaya hua

Ik qayamat na tali thi abhi sir se apne
ik qayamat ka nae sir pe mere sayaa hua

aashna dard se apne main hua hoon aisa
zehr sab chakha hua, zakhm her ik khaya hua!

sach se ulfat he mujhe sach he kaha kerta hoon
mustarad ker ke tu dekho mera farmaya hua!
Khalid Jamil Rawat
Logged
Advo.RavinderaRavi
Guest
«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2014, 06:07:37 AM »
Reply with quote
Applause Applause
Kya bat hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Bahut Umda.
Logged
khalidrawat
Guest
«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2014, 06:10:13 AM »
Reply with quote
thankyou sir.
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2014, 07:55:00 AM »
Reply with quote
waah waah
Logged
surindarn
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 273
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
134 days, 2 hours and 27 minutes.
Posts: 31520
Member Since: Mar 2012


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2014, 08:27:32 AM »
Reply with quote
Wah Bahut Umdah. Applause Applause Applause
Surindar.N  Applause Applause
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2014, 10:38:25 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bohut khub keep writing
Logged
sbechain
Guest
«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2014, 08:11:11 PM »
Reply with quote
Ghazal:
Ik sitara mere dunya se he takraya hua
Hoo ka aalam he her ik simt yahaan chaaya hua

Ik qayamat na tali thi abhi sir se apne
ik qayamat ka nae sir pe mere sayaa hua

aashna dard se apne main hua hoon aisa
zehr sab chakha hua, zakhm her ik khaya hua!

sach se ulfat he mujhe sach he kaha kerta hoon
mustarad ker ke tu dekho mera farmaya hua!
Khalid Jamil Rawat


bahut khoob khalid ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Logged
zarraa
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 100
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 33 minutes.
Posts: 2251
Member Since: May 2012


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2014, 01:33:25 AM »
Reply with quote
Wah!! Umda aashaar Khalid ji!! Dheron daad!!
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 06:11:59 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]

[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]

by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.094 seconds with 26 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer